十、书面表达。(10 分)
下图所示的是哪个季节?这个季节里的天气怎样?你经常与朋友们在这个季节里做什么?请以“My favourite season”为题写一篇小短文介绍一下吧。
要求:语句通顺,不少于5句话。

My favourite season
下图所示的是哪个季节?这个季节里的天气怎样?你经常与朋友们在这个季节里做什么?请以“My favourite season”为题写一篇小短文介绍一下吧。
要求:语句通顺,不少于5句话。
My favourite season
I like spring best. It's always sunny and warm.
It's green with flowers and songs. I often plant flowers and fly kites with my friends.
Sometimes I go on a picnic with my parents.
It's a lovely season.
答案
One possible version:
My favourite season
I like spring best. It's always sunny and warm.
It's green with flowers and songs. I often plant
flowers and fly kites with my friends. Sometimes I go
on a picnic with my parents. It's a lovely season.
My favourite season
I like spring best. It's always sunny and warm.
It's green with flowers and songs. I often plant
flowers and fly kites with my friends. Sometimes I go
on a picnic with my parents. It's a lovely season.
解析
【分析】首先观察插图中的典型元素:归来的燕子、发芽的柳树、放风筝的孩子,可判断要介绍的季节是春季。接着明确题目要求:需依次说明季节、该季节的天气、与朋友在该季节的活动,且语句通顺不少于5句。写作时要遵循“开篇点题→描述季节特点→介绍活动→结尾抒情”的思路,紧扣主题,用简单通顺的英语表达完成内容。
【解析】1. 开篇点题:直接点明最喜欢的季节(I like spring best.);2. 描述天气:说明春季的天气特征(It's always sunny and warm.);3. 补充季节特点:点明春季的景色(It's green with flowers and songs.);4. 介绍活动:写与朋友的活动(I often plant flowers and fly kites with my friends.);5. 补充其他活动:增加和家人的活动(Sometimes I go on a picnic with my parents.);6. 结尾抒情:总结春季的美好(It's a lovely season.),确保语句连贯,满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My favourite season
I like spring best. It's always sunny and warm. It's green with flowers and songs. I often plant flowers and fly kites with my friends. Sometimes I go on a picnic with my parents. It's a lovely season.
【知识点】英语书面表达、季节话题词汇、一般现在时
【点评】这篇短文结构清晰,紧扣题目要求,依次回应了季节、天气、活动的问题,内容完整,语句通顺,符合小学英语书面表达的规范,是一篇优秀的作答。
【难度系数】0.7
【解析】1. 开篇点题:直接点明最喜欢的季节(I like spring best.);2. 描述天气:说明春季的天气特征(It's always sunny and warm.);3. 补充季节特点:点明春季的景色(It's green with flowers and songs.);4. 介绍活动:写与朋友的活动(I often plant flowers and fly kites with my friends.);5. 补充其他活动:增加和家人的活动(Sometimes I go on a picnic with my parents.);6. 结尾抒情:总结春季的美好(It's a lovely season.),确保语句连贯,满足不少于5句的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
My favourite season
I like spring best. It's always sunny and warm. It's green with flowers and songs. I often plant flowers and fly kites with my friends. Sometimes I go on a picnic with my parents. It's a lovely season.
【知识点】英语书面表达、季节话题词汇、一般现在时
【点评】这篇短文结构清晰,紧扣题目要求,依次回应了季节、天气、活动的问题,内容完整,语句通顺,符合小学英语书面表达的规范,是一篇优秀的作答。
【难度系数】0.7
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