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答案 D12
单元写作要求
本单元以“学习”为话题，主要谈论学习的经验和方法等。其书面表达命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章讲述英语学习中遇到的困难以及如何克服这些困难。
写作方法策略
如何写与“学习”相关的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出学习中遇到的问题；主体部分要介绍克服学习困难的方法、技巧；最后，总结启发。
思路导引
引出
问题
克服
问题
总结
启发
佳作展示
Last year, I took part in an English speech competition but performed poorly. ①Disappointed with the result, I decided to improve my English speaking skills.
First, I spent ②as much time as possible watching English programs. This helped me grasp pronunciation and intonation more naturally. Second, I practiced speaking by making conversations with classmates in English every day. At first, I struggled with pronunciation, but ③the more I spoke, the fewer mistakes I made. Two months later, I took part in another English speech competition. To my surprise, I got the first place.
This journey taught me that facing weaknesses bravely and keeping trying are the keys to overcoming challenges. ④As long as we believe in ⑤ourselves and don't give up easily, we'll make great progress.
高分词句
①运用形容词短语作状语。
②运用高级词组 as ... as possible(尽可能……), to one's surprise(令某人惊讶的是), the keys to(……的关键)。
③运用“the + 比较级, the + 比较级”结构,意为:“越……就越……”。
④运用 as long as 引导条件状语从句。
⑤运用本单元语法重点反身代词 ourselves。
答案 D12
单元写作要求
本单元以“学习”为话题，主要谈论学习的经验和方法等。其书面表达命题形式主要是要求学生写一篇文章讲述英语学习中遇到的困难以及如何克服这些困难。
写作方法策略
如何写与“学习”相关的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要引出学习中遇到的问题；主体部分要介绍克服学习困难的方法、技巧；最后，总结启发。
思路导引
引出
问题
克服
问题
总结
启发
佳作展示
Last year, I took part in an English speech competition but performed poorly. ①Disappointed with the result, I decided to improve my English speaking skills.
First, I spent ②as much time as possible watching English programs. This helped me grasp pronunciation and intonation more naturally. Second, I practiced speaking by making conversations with classmates in English every day. At first, I struggled with pronunciation, but ③the more I spoke, the fewer mistakes I made. Two months later, I took part in another English speech competition. To my surprise, I got the first place.
This journey taught me that facing weaknesses bravely and keeping trying are the keys to overcoming challenges. ④As long as we believe in ⑤ourselves and don't give up easily, we'll make great progress.
高分词句
①运用形容词短语作状语。
②运用高级词组 as ... as possible(尽可能……), to one's surprise(令某人惊讶的是), the keys to(……的关键)。
③运用“the + 比较级, the + 比较级”结构,意为:“越……就越……”。
④运用 as long as 引导条件状语从句。
⑤运用本单元语法重点反身代词 ourselves。
答案
Last year, I took part in an English speech competition but performed poorly. Disappointed with the result, I decided to improve my English speaking skills.
First, I spent as much time as possible watching English programs. This helped me grasp pronunciation and intonation more naturally. Second, I practiced speaking by making conversations with classmates in English every day. At first, I struggled with pronunciation, but the more I spoke, the fewer mistakes I made. Two months later, I took part in another English speech competition. To my surprise, I got the first place.
This journey taught me that facing weaknesses bravely and keeping trying are the keys to overcoming challenges. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up easily, we'll make great progress.
First, I spent as much time as possible watching English programs. This helped me grasp pronunciation and intonation more naturally. Second, I practiced speaking by making conversations with classmates in English every day. At first, I struggled with pronunciation, but the more I spoke, the fewer mistakes I made. Two months later, I took part in another English speech competition. To my surprise, I got the first place.
This journey taught me that facing weaknesses bravely and keeping trying are the keys to overcoming challenges. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up easily, we'll make great progress.
解析
【分析】本题为英语单元写作题，话题围绕“英语学习中遇到的困难及克服方法”展开。解题思路为：首先确定写作核心要素——体裁为记叙文，时态以一般过去时为主，人称用第一人称，结构遵循“引出问题→阐述克服方法→总结启发”的逻辑；其次运用题目给出的高分词句（如形容词短语作状语、as...as possible结构、the+比较级结构、as long as引导的条件状语从句、反身代词等）提升文章质量；最后确保内容连贯、符合单元写作要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 引出问题：开篇点明去年参加英语演讲比赛表现不佳，用形容词短语“Disappointed with the result”作状语，自然引出提升英语口语的决心；2. 主体部分：分两点说明克服方法——一是尽可能多花时间看英语节目，帮助掌握自然的语音语调；二是每天和同学用英语对话练习，运用“the + 比较级，the + 比较级”结构体现练习的效果；3. 总结启发：点明勇敢面对弱点、坚持是克服挑战的关键，用as long as引导条件状语从句，结合反身代词ourselves升华主题；4. 检查时态、人称一致性，确保语句通顺，符合写作要求。
【答案】Last year, I took part in an English speech competition but performed poorly. Disappointed with the result, I decided to improve my English speaking skills.
First, I spent as much time as possible watching English programs. This helped me grasp pronunciation and intonation more naturally. Second, I practiced speaking by making conversations with classmates in English every day. At first, I struggled with pronunciation, but the more I spoke, the fewer mistakes I made. Two months later, I took part in another English speech competition. To my surprise, I got the first place.
This journey taught me that facing weaknesses bravely and keeping trying are the keys to overcoming challenges. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up easily, we'll make great progress.
【知识点】英语写作技巧、英语常用表达、英语语法
【点评】该范文紧扣单元写作话题，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，灵活运用了多种高级表达与语法结构，是符合要求的优秀英语写作范例，为学生提供了清晰的写作参考。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 引出问题：开篇点明去年参加英语演讲比赛表现不佳，用形容词短语“Disappointed with the result”作状语，自然引出提升英语口语的决心；2. 主体部分：分两点说明克服方法——一是尽可能多花时间看英语节目，帮助掌握自然的语音语调；二是每天和同学用英语对话练习，运用“the + 比较级，the + 比较级”结构体现练习的效果；3. 总结启发：点明勇敢面对弱点、坚持是克服挑战的关键，用as long as引导条件状语从句，结合反身代词ourselves升华主题；4. 检查时态、人称一致性，确保语句通顺，符合写作要求。
【答案】Last year, I took part in an English speech competition but performed poorly. Disappointed with the result, I decided to improve my English speaking skills.
First, I spent as much time as possible watching English programs. This helped me grasp pronunciation and intonation more naturally. Second, I practiced speaking by making conversations with classmates in English every day. At first, I struggled with pronunciation, but the more I spoke, the fewer mistakes I made. Two months later, I took part in another English speech competition. To my surprise, I got the first place.
This journey taught me that facing weaknesses bravely and keeping trying are the keys to overcoming challenges. As long as we believe in ourselves and don't give up easily, we'll make great progress.
【知识点】英语写作技巧、英语常用表达、英语语法
【点评】该范文紧扣单元写作话题，结构清晰、逻辑连贯，灵活运用了多种高级表达与语法结构，是符合要求的优秀英语写作范例，为学生提供了清晰的写作参考。
【难度系数】0.6
话题写作积累
1. 使某人与众不同
2. 为了
3. 有强烈的动力做某事
4. 不足为奇
5. 免费
6. 把 A 翻译成 B
7. 如果你愿意学，你就会更努力。
8. 我们应该把重点放在单词的理解上，而不是简单地记忆它们。
9. 学习如逆水行舟，不进则退。
10. 水滴石穿。
1. 使某人与众不同
set sb. apart
2. 为了
in order to
3. 有强烈的动力做某事
have a strong drive to do sth.
4. 不足为奇
come as no surprise
5. 免费
for free
6. 把 A 翻译成 B
translate A into B
7. 如果你愿意学，你就会更努力。
If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.
8. 我们应该把重点放在单词的理解上，而不是简单地记忆它们。
We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.
9. 学习如逆水行舟，不进则退。
Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.
10. 水滴石穿。
Constant dropping wears the stone.
答案
1. set sb. apart
2. in order to
3. have a strong drive to do sth.
4. come as no surprise
5. for free
6. translate A into B
7. If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.
8. We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.
9. Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.
10. Constant dropping wears the stone.
2. in order to
3. have a strong drive to do sth.
4. come as no surprise
5. for free
6. translate A into B
7. If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.
8. We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.
9. Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.
10. Constant dropping wears the stone.
解析
【分析】本题为英语话题写作常用表达积累题，需根据中文释义匹配对应的英语固定短语或正确句子。解题时需牢记常用英语搭配、条件状语从句结构及英语谚语的标准译法，确保拼写准确、语法正确，符合英语表达习惯。
【解析】1. set sb. apart；2. in order to；3. have a strong drive to do sth.；4. come as no surprise；5. for free；6. translate A into B；7. If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.；8. We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.；9. Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.；10. Constant dropping wears the stone.
【答案】1. set sb. apart
2. in order to
3. have a strong drive to do sth.
4. come as no surprise
5. for free
6. translate A into B
7. If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.
8. We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.
9. Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.
10. Constant dropping wears the stone.
【知识点】英语固定搭配、汉译英
【点评】本题聚焦英语写作高频使用的短语与谚语，是话题写作的核心积累素材，能帮助学生提升英语表达的准确性与丰富性，夯实英语基础。
【难度系数】0.3
【解析】1. set sb. apart；2. in order to；3. have a strong drive to do sth.；4. come as no surprise；5. for free；6. translate A into B；7. If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.；8. We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.；9. Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.；10. Constant dropping wears the stone.
【答案】1. set sb. apart
2. in order to
3. have a strong drive to do sth.
4. come as no surprise
5. for free
6. translate A into B
7. If you are willing to learn, you will work harder.
8. We should focus on the understanding of words rather than simply memorizing them.
9. Studying is like rowing a boat against moving water; if you don't move forward, you will fall behind.
10. Constant dropping wears the stone.
【知识点】英语固定搭配、汉译英
【点评】本题聚焦英语写作高频使用的短语与谚语，是话题写作的核心积累素材，能帮助学生提升英语表达的准确性与丰富性，夯实英语基础。
【难度系数】0.3
