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五、书面表达。
近年来,越来越多的外国人开始学习中文,了解中国文化。假设你是李华,你正在教你的美国朋友Jack学习汉语。请你写一封邮件告知他下次上课的计划。
写作提示:
1. 上课的时间和地点;
2. 上课的内容;
3. 课前准备;
4. 你对此的看法。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
Dear Jack,
How's your Chinese learning going? I'm writing to tell you about our next class plan.
Yours,
Li Hua
近年来,越来越多的外国人开始学习中文,了解中国文化。假设你是李华,你正在教你的美国朋友Jack学习汉语。请你写一封邮件告知他下次上课的计划。
写作提示:
1. 上课的时间和地点;
2. 上课的内容;
3. 课前准备;
4. 你对此的看法。
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含所有提示信息,可适当发挥;
2. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名称;
3. 词数70个左右。
Dear Jack,
How's your Chinese learning going? I'm writing to tell you about our next class plan.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Jack,
How's your Chinese learning going?
I'm writing to tell you about our next class plans.
We'll meet at 3 p.m. this Saturday in the school library's art corner. This time, we'll focus on Chinese calligraphy, an ancient art form. You'll learn basic simple characters, and feel the beauty of traditional Chinese culture through them.
Before class, please search online for some information about calligraphy's history, styles and famous works. It'll help you better understand this class.
I think learning calligraphy is amazing. It not only improves your handwriting but also calms your mind. Besides, it's a great way to explore Chinese culture. I'm sure you'll enjoy it!
Looking forward to our class!
Yours,
Li Hua
How's your Chinese learning going?
I'm writing to tell you about our next class plans.
We'll meet at 3 p.m. this Saturday in the school library's art corner. This time, we'll focus on Chinese calligraphy, an ancient art form. You'll learn basic simple characters, and feel the beauty of traditional Chinese culture through them.
Before class, please search online for some information about calligraphy's history, styles and famous works. It'll help you better understand this class.
I think learning calligraphy is amazing. It not only improves your handwriting but also calms your mind. Besides, it's a great way to explore Chinese culture. I'm sure you'll enjoy it!
Looking forward to our class!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：确定文体是写给好友的告知类英文邮件，人称以第一、第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主，必须覆盖题干给出的4个核心写作要点。接下来按顺序构思内容：第一步先交代清晰合理的上课时间和地点，选日常学习场景即可；第二步设计贴合“外国人学中文、了解中国文化”背景的上课内容，比如书法入门学习，方便展开；第三步给出逻辑通顺的课前准备要求，比如提前查阅相关背景资料，提升上课效率；第四步表达自己对本次课程的看法，点明学习相关内容对中文学习、了解中国文化的帮助，最后收尾表达期待，全程注意不要出现真实姓名和学校名称，控制词数符合70词左右的要求。
【解析】
写作时按照给定的邮件开头顺承展开即可：
1. 首先明确交代上课的时间地点：说明本周六下午3点在学校图书馆艺术角碰面，信息清晰明了。
2. 接着说明本次课的核心内容：安排中国书法入门学习，学习基础简单汉字，在过程中感受中国传统文化的美感，贴合题目的文化背景设定。
3. 随后告知对方课前需要完成的准备：提前上网查阅书法的历史、风格、知名作品相关的基础信息，帮助对方更好地理解课程内容。
4. 最后表达自己的看法：说明学习书法不仅能提升汉字书写水平，还能帮助深入探索中国文化，收尾表达对下次课的期待，整体语气亲切自然，符合朋友间邮件的交流语境，所有提示要点全部覆盖，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How's your Chinese learning going?
I'm writing to tell you about our next class plans.
We'll meet at 3 p.m. this Saturday in the school library's art corner. This time, we'll focus on Chinese calligraphy, an ancient art form. You'll learn basic simple characters, and feel the beauty of traditional Chinese culture through them.
Before class, please search online for some information about calligraphy's history, styles and famous works. It'll help you better understand this class.
I think learning calligraphy is amazing. It not only improves your handwriting but also calms your mind. Besides, it's a great way to explore Chinese culture. I'm sure you'll enjoy it!
Looking forward to our class!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
1. 英文书信写作
2. 要点类书面表达
3. 中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有要求的写作要点，内容贴合“教外国友人学中文”的设定场景，语气亲切自然，符合朋友间邮件的交流风格，补充的书法相关文化细节贴合题目“了解中国文化”的大背景，没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规内容，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的应试范文。同学们写作时可以优先把四个核心必写要点交代清楚，再适当补充少量细节丰富内容即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先完成审题：确定文体是写给好友的告知类英文邮件，人称以第一、第二人称为主，时态以一般现在时、一般将来时为主，必须覆盖题干给出的4个核心写作要点。接下来按顺序构思内容：第一步先交代清晰合理的上课时间和地点，选日常学习场景即可；第二步设计贴合“外国人学中文、了解中国文化”背景的上课内容，比如书法入门学习，方便展开；第三步给出逻辑通顺的课前准备要求，比如提前查阅相关背景资料，提升上课效率；第四步表达自己对本次课程的看法，点明学习相关内容对中文学习、了解中国文化的帮助，最后收尾表达期待，全程注意不要出现真实姓名和学校名称，控制词数符合70词左右的要求。
【解析】
写作时按照给定的邮件开头顺承展开即可：
1. 首先明确交代上课的时间地点：说明本周六下午3点在学校图书馆艺术角碰面，信息清晰明了。
2. 接着说明本次课的核心内容：安排中国书法入门学习，学习基础简单汉字，在过程中感受中国传统文化的美感，贴合题目的文化背景设定。
3. 随后告知对方课前需要完成的准备：提前上网查阅书法的历史、风格、知名作品相关的基础信息，帮助对方更好地理解课程内容。
4. 最后表达自己的看法：说明学习书法不仅能提升汉字书写水平，还能帮助深入探索中国文化，收尾表达对下次课的期待，整体语气亲切自然，符合朋友间邮件的交流语境，所有提示要点全部覆盖，符合写作要求。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How's your Chinese learning going?
I'm writing to tell you about our next class plans.
We'll meet at 3 p.m. this Saturday in the school library's art corner. This time, we'll focus on Chinese calligraphy, an ancient art form. You'll learn basic simple characters, and feel the beauty of traditional Chinese culture through them.
Before class, please search online for some information about calligraphy's history, styles and famous works. It'll help you better understand this class.
I think learning calligraphy is amazing. It not only improves your handwriting but also calms your mind. Besides, it's a great way to explore Chinese culture. I'm sure you'll enjoy it!
Looking forward to our class!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
1. 英文书信写作
2. 要点类书面表达
3. 中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干所有要求的写作要点，内容贴合“教外国友人学中文”的设定场景，语气亲切自然，符合朋友间邮件的交流风格，补充的书法相关文化细节贴合题目“了解中国文化”的大背景，没有出现真实姓名、校名等违规内容，词数符合要求，是一篇非常规范的应试范文。同学们写作时可以优先把四个核心必写要点交代清楚，再适当补充少量细节丰富内容即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
