三、实战演练
快乐是独自完成一项任务后的成就感,是绞尽脑汁解出一道数学题之后的喜悦,是走上领奖台掌声响起时的一份骄傲……
假设你的英语老师要求全班同学以“
要点:
1. 什么使你感到快乐?
2. 它使你感到快乐的原因。
要求:
1. 请补全标题,如 hobbies, sports, reading, housework 或 helping others 等;
2. 短文须包含以上要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 词数 70 左右(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life.
快乐是独自完成一项任务后的成就感,是绞尽脑汁解出一道数学题之后的喜悦,是走上领奖台掌声响起时的一份骄傲……
假设你的英语老师要求全班同学以“
Helping Others
Make(s) Me Happy”为题,写一篇英语发言稿,将以 class report 的形式进行班内分享。请根据以下要点和要求,用英语写一篇短文。要点:
1. 什么使你感到快乐?
2. 它使你感到快乐的原因。
要求:
1. 请补全标题,如 hobbies, sports, reading, housework 或 helping others 等;
2. 短文须包含以上要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;
4. 词数 70 左右(首句已为你写好,不计入总词数)。
Helping Others
Make(s) Me HappyEveryone hopes to get happiness in daily life.
Helping others brings joy to my heart. It is not just about giving help, but about sharing a part of myself and making a difference in someone's life. Helping others makes me happy. When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I've made the world a better place, even in a small way. It gives me a sense of happiness. The joy comes from seeing others smile. And it encourages me to continue helping others. In the future, I plan to continue my efforts in helping others. After all, happiness lies in giving, not receiving.
答案
One possible version:
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. Helping others brings joy to my heart. It is not just about giving help, but about sharing a part of myself and making a difference in someone's life. Helping others makes me happy. When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I've made the world a better place, even in a small way. It gives me a sense of happiness. The joy comes from seeing others smile. And it encourages me to continue helping others. In the future, I plan to continue my efforts in helping others. After all, happiness lies in giving, not receiving.
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. Helping others brings joy to my heart. It is not just about giving help, but about sharing a part of myself and making a difference in someone's life. Helping others makes me happy. When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I've made the world a better place, even in a small way. It gives me a sense of happiness. The joy comes from seeing others smile. And it encourages me to continue helping others. In the future, I plan to continue my efforts in helping others. After all, happiness lies in giving, not receiving.
解析
【解析】
1. 补全标题为“Helping Others”,契合题目可选主题要求;
2. 承接给定首句,开篇明确点明帮助他人是自身快乐的来源;
3. 围绕题目要点阐述原因:说明帮助他人不仅是付出,更是自我价值的传递,能给他人生活带来改变,看到他人的微笑可获得成就感,最后升华主题,点明幸福在于给予而非索取;
4. 内容完整,行文连贯,符合词数限制及发言稿的写作规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. Helping others brings joy to my heart. It is not just about giving help, but about sharing a part of myself and making a difference in someone's life. Helping others makes me happy. When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I've made the world a better place, even in a small way. It gives me a sense of happiness. The joy comes from seeing others smile. And it encourages me to continue helping others. In the future, I plan to continue my efforts in helping others. After all, happiness lies in giving, not receiving.
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作、观点阐述方法、情感表达句式
【点评】
本文紧扣“帮助他人使我快乐”的主题,完整涵盖题目要求的所有要点,逻辑清晰,语言表达流畅自然,结尾升华主题,符合发言稿的写作规范与词数限制,是一篇贴合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
1. 补全标题为“Helping Others”,契合题目可选主题要求;
2. 承接给定首句,开篇明确点明帮助他人是自身快乐的来源;
3. 围绕题目要点阐述原因:说明帮助他人不仅是付出,更是自我价值的传递,能给他人生活带来改变,看到他人的微笑可获得成就感,最后升华主题,点明幸福在于给予而非索取;
4. 内容完整,行文连贯,符合词数限制及发言稿的写作规范。
【答案】
One possible version:
Helping Others Makes Me Happy
Everyone hopes to get happiness in daily life. Helping others brings joy to my heart. It is not just about giving help, but about sharing a part of myself and making a difference in someone's life. Helping others makes me happy. When I lend a helping hand, I feel like I've made the world a better place, even in a small way. It gives me a sense of happiness. The joy comes from seeing others smile. And it encourages me to continue helping others. In the future, I plan to continue my efforts in helping others. After all, happiness lies in giving, not receiving.
【知识点】
英语发言稿写作、观点阐述方法、情感表达句式
【点评】
本文紧扣“帮助他人使我快乐”的主题,完整涵盖题目要求的所有要点,逻辑清晰,语言表达流畅自然,结尾升华主题,符合发言稿的写作规范与词数限制,是一篇贴合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.7
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