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六、VI. 书面表达。
假设你是李华，你的朋友Peter遇到了困难，写信向你求助。请从以下问题中选一个，写一封回信提供你的建议。
问题选项：
My parents always compare me to my classmates. I feel a lot of pressure.
I argued with my best friend and now we aren't talking. I feel lonely and sad.
I failed an important exam. I feel like I let everyone down.
写作要求：
1. 格式正确（称呼、正文、结尾、签名）；
2. 词数：100词左右。
假设你是李华，你的朋友Peter遇到了困难，写信向你求助。请从以下问题中选一个，写一封回信提供你的建议。
问题选项：
My parents always compare me to my classmates. I feel a lot of pressure.
I argued with my best friend and now we aren't talking. I feel lonely and sad.
I failed an important exam. I feel like I let everyone down.
写作要求：
1. 格式正确（称呼、正文、结尾、签名）；
2. 词数：100词左右。
答案
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel unhappy because your parents always compare you to
your classmates.
First, please understand that your parents probably do this because they care about you
and want you to do better. Maybe you could talk to them calmly. Tell them how you feel,
and say you are trying your best. You could also ask them to tell you exactly what they
expect, so you know what to improve.
Remember, you don't have to be exactly like others. Just try to learn from your
classmates and make progress step by step. Believe in yourself!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel unhappy because your parents always compare you to
your classmates.
First, please understand that your parents probably do this because they care about you
and want you to do better. Maybe you could talk to them calmly. Tell them how you feel,
and say you are trying your best. You could also ask them to tell you exactly what they
expect, so you know what to improve.
Remember, you don't have to be exactly like others. Just try to learn from your
classmates and make progress step by step. Believe in yourself!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达中的建议类书信写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确题目要求：需从三个问题中选一个，写一封格式正确（称呼、正文、结尾、签名）、词数约100词的回信；2. 选择问题：结合参考答案，选取“父母总拿自己和同学比，压力大”的问题；3. 构思内容结构：开头共情安慰，中间给出具体可行的建议，结尾鼓励祝福；4. 确保语言符合中学生身份，流畅自然，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 格式遵循：使用书信标准格式，开头称呼Dear Peter，结尾用Best wishes，署名Li Hua；
2. 正文内容：① 开头表达对Peter困扰的理解，点明其问题；② 给出建议：先理解父母的初衷是关心，建议主动与父母沟通，说出自身感受和努力，明确父母的期望；再强调无需和他人攀比，逐步进步即可；③ 结尾送上鼓励与祝福；
3. 语言调整：确保用词恰当，语句通顺，词数控制在100词左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel unhappy because your parents always compare you to your classmates.
First, please understand that your parents probably do this because they care about you and want you to do better. Maybe you could talk to them calmly. Tell them how you feel, and say you are trying your best. You could also ask them to tell you exactly what they expect, so you know what to improve.
Remember, you don't have to be exactly like others. Just try to learn from your classmates and make progress step by step. Believe in yourself!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类应用文、情绪表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，格式规范，针对问题给出了合理且具体的建议，语言真诚自然，符合中学生身份，词数达标，是一篇优秀的参考例文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语书面表达中的建议类书信写作题，解题思路如下：1. 明确题目要求：需从三个问题中选一个，写一封格式正确（称呼、正文、结尾、签名）、词数约100词的回信；2. 选择问题：结合参考答案，选取“父母总拿自己和同学比，压力大”的问题；3. 构思内容结构：开头共情安慰，中间给出具体可行的建议，结尾鼓励祝福；4. 确保语言符合中学生身份，流畅自然，控制词数。
【解析】
1. 格式遵循：使用书信标准格式，开头称呼Dear Peter，结尾用Best wishes，署名Li Hua；
2. 正文内容：① 开头表达对Peter困扰的理解，点明其问题；② 给出建议：先理解父母的初衷是关心，建议主动与父母沟通，说出自身感受和努力，明确父母的期望；再强调无需和他人攀比，逐步进步即可；③ 结尾送上鼓励与祝福；
3. 语言调整：确保用词恰当，语句通顺，词数控制在100词左右，符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Peter,
I'm sorry to hear that you feel unhappy because your parents always compare you to your classmates.
First, please understand that your parents probably do this because they care about you and want you to do better. Maybe you could talk to them calmly. Tell them how you feel, and say you are trying your best. You could also ask them to tell you exactly what they expect, so you know what to improve.
Remember, you don't have to be exactly like others. Just try to learn from your classmates and make progress step by step. Believe in yourself!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议类应用文、情绪表达
【点评】
该范文严格遵循题目要求，格式规范，针对问题给出了合理且具体的建议，语言真诚自然，符合中学生身份，词数达标，是一篇优秀的参考例文。
【难度系数】
0.4
