B 写作实战
请描述一件你亲身参与的"创造改变"的小事(比如一次环保行动、一次帮助他人的经历);具体说明这件事带来的变化;最后分享你对"小事也能创造改变"的理解。80词左右,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
请做:单元检测(十)、(十一)、(十二) 勤演练,汇真知
请描述一件你亲身参与的"创造改变"的小事(比如一次环保行动、一次帮助他人的经历);具体说明这件事带来的变化;最后分享你对"小事也能创造改变"的理解。80词左右,文中不得出现真实姓名和校名等信息。
One possible version:
Last month, I noticed that many students
threw rubbish on the playground. So I started a
"Clean Playground" activity. I asked my
classmates to join me, and we picked up rubbish
every afternoon. After a week, the playground
became clean and tidy. More and more students
began to put rubbish into bins. This experience
made me happy. I realized that even small things
can make a big difference. If everyone does a
little bit for our school or community, the world
will become better. Let's try our best to make a
difference!
Last month, I noticed that many students
threw rubbish on the playground. So I started a
"Clean Playground" activity. I asked my
classmates to join me, and we picked up rubbish
every afternoon. After a week, the playground
became clean and tidy. More and more students
began to put rubbish into bins. This experience
made me happy. I realized that even small things
can make a big difference. If everyone does a
little bit for our school or community, the world
will become better. Let's try our best to make a
difference!
请做:单元检测(十)、(十一)、(十二) 勤演练,汇真知
答案
【写作实战】
One possible version:
Last month, I noticed that many students
threw rubbish on the playground. So I started a
"Clean Playground" activity. I asked my
classmates to join me, and we picked up rubbish
every afternoon. After a week, the playground
became clean and tidy. More and more students
began to put rubbish into bins. This experience
made me happy. I realized that even small things
can make a big difference. If everyone does a
little bit for our school or community, the world
will become better. Let's try our best to make a
difference!
One possible version:
Last month, I noticed that many students
threw rubbish on the playground. So I started a
"Clean Playground" activity. I asked my
classmates to join me, and we picked up rubbish
every afternoon. After a week, the playground
became clean and tidy. More and more students
began to put rubbish into bins. This experience
made me happy. I realized that even small things
can make a big difference. If everyone does a
little bit for our school or community, the world
will become better. Let's try our best to make a
difference!
解析
【分析】
本题为英语写作实战题,要求围绕“亲身参与的‘创造改变’的小事”展开写作,需包含事件、带来的变化及对“小事也能创造改变”的理解,80词左右且不得出现真实信息。解题思路:①审题明确核心要求;②选取贴近学生生活的小事(如校园环保行动);③按“发现问题→采取行动→产生变化→感悟主题”的结构组织内容;④用简单易懂的英语表达,控制字数。
【解析】
1. 审题:确定写作任务为记叙文,需涵盖事件、变化、主题理解,避免真实信息;
2. 选材:选取校园环保小事(操场垃圾问题),符合学生生活实际;
3. 结构:①开头:点明发现的问题(操场垃圾多);②中间:发起“清洁操场”活动,号召同学参与;③结尾:说明变化(操场变干净,同学主动扔垃圾),升华主题(小事也能带来大改变);
4. 语言:用一般过去时叙述事件,一般现在时表达感悟,确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last month, I noticed that many students threw rubbish on the playground. So I started a "Clean Playground" activity. I asked my classmates to join me, and we picked up rubbish every afternoon. After a week, the playground became clean and tidy. More and more students began to put rubbish into bins. This experience made me happy. I realized that even small things can make a big difference. If everyone does a little bit for our school or community, the world will become better. Let's try our best to make a difference!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题感悟表达、时态运用
【点评】
本题话题贴近学生校园生活,结构清晰,易于学生构思,能有效考察学生的英语叙事能力和主题表达能力,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语写作实战题,要求围绕“亲身参与的‘创造改变’的小事”展开写作,需包含事件、带来的变化及对“小事也能创造改变”的理解,80词左右且不得出现真实信息。解题思路:①审题明确核心要求;②选取贴近学生生活的小事(如校园环保行动);③按“发现问题→采取行动→产生变化→感悟主题”的结构组织内容;④用简单易懂的英语表达,控制字数。
【解析】
1. 审题:确定写作任务为记叙文,需涵盖事件、变化、主题理解,避免真实信息;
2. 选材:选取校园环保小事(操场垃圾问题),符合学生生活实际;
3. 结构:①开头:点明发现的问题(操场垃圾多);②中间:发起“清洁操场”活动,号召同学参与;③结尾:说明变化(操场变干净,同学主动扔垃圾),升华主题(小事也能带来大改变);
4. 语言:用一般过去时叙述事件,一般现在时表达感悟,确保语句通顺、符合字数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Last month, I noticed that many students threw rubbish on the playground. So I started a "Clean Playground" activity. I asked my classmates to join me, and we picked up rubbish every afternoon. After a week, the playground became clean and tidy. More and more students began to put rubbish into bins. This experience made me happy. I realized that even small things can make a big difference. If everyone does a little bit for our school or community, the world will become better. Let's try our best to make a difference!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、主题感悟表达、时态运用
【点评】
本题话题贴近学生校园生活,结构清晰,易于学生构思,能有效考察学生的英语叙事能力和主题表达能力,符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
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