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民以食为天。中国有许多美味佳肴,每道菜肴都有着不同的味道,也承载着不同的记忆。现校园英语报刊正举办以"My favourite food memory"为主题的征文活动,请你写一篇文章,介绍你最喜欢的食物,分享关于该食物的记忆。
内容要点如下:
(1)What is your favourite food?
(2)Why do you like the food?
(3)What's your food memory?
注意:
(1)词数80～100；
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
内容要点如下:
(1)What is your favourite food?
(2)Why do you like the food?
(3)What's your food memory?
注意:
(1)词数80～100；
(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
答案
One possible version:
My favourite food memory
My favourite food is hot pot. It's a
popular dish in China.
I love it because I can choose various
ingredients to cook in the spicy or mild
soup. I can pick a lot of ingredients, from
fresh vegetables to all kinds of meat, and
cook them in the pot. And I can eat them
with delicious sauces.
My favourite food memory is having
hot pot with my family on a snowy day.
Indoors, we sat around the table, sharing
laughter and stories. As we cooked the
food, chatted, and burst into laughter, the
delicious flavours filled not only our
stomachs but also our hearts. That moment
brought me love and togetherness. It will
stay in my mind forever.
My favourite food memory
My favourite food is hot pot. It's a
popular dish in China.
I love it because I can choose various
ingredients to cook in the spicy or mild
soup. I can pick a lot of ingredients, from
fresh vegetables to all kinds of meat, and
cook them in the pot. And I can eat them
with delicious sauces.
My favourite food memory is having
hot pot with my family on a snowy day.
Indoors, we sat around the table, sharing
laughter and stories. As we cooked the
food, chatted, and burst into laughter, the
delicious flavours filled not only our
stomachs but also our hearts. That moment
brought me love and togetherness. It will
stay in my mind forever.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语主题征文写作题，要求围绕“My favourite food memory”展开，需涵盖三个核心内容要点：点明最喜欢的食物、说明喜欢该食物的原因、分享与该食物相关的记忆。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活且易展开的食物（如火锅）作为写作对象；2. 从食材选择、口味体验等角度阐述喜欢的理由；3. 结合具体生活场景（如与家人的温馨时刻）构建记忆，融入真情实感，同时控制词数在80-100，保证语言连贯自然。
【解析】
文章采用三段式结构：第一段开篇点题，明确最喜欢的食物是火锅，说明其在中国的普及性；第二段从食材多样、汤底可选、酱料美味三个维度阐述喜欢的原因；第三段分享与家人在下雪天吃火锅的记忆，通过场景描写（围坐餐桌、分享故事、欢声笑语）体现亲情与团聚的温暖，升华主题，完全符合征文的内容要求。
【答案】
My favourite food memory
My favourite food is hot pot. It's a popular dish in China.
I love it because I can choose various ingredients to cook in the spicy or mild soup. I can pick a lot of ingredients, from fresh vegetables to all kinds of meat, and cook them in the pot. And I can eat them with delicious sauces.
My favourite food memory is having hot pot with my family on a snowy day. Indoors, we sat around the table, sharing laughter and stories. As we cooked the food, chatted, and burst into laughter, the delicious flavours filled not only our stomachs but also our hearts. That moment brought me love and togetherness. It will stay in my mind forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题征文、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖所有内容要点，细节生动具体，情感真挚自然，语言流畅地道，符合校园英语报刊的征文要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一道英语主题征文写作题，要求围绕“My favourite food memory”展开，需涵盖三个核心内容要点：点明最喜欢的食物、说明喜欢该食物的原因、分享与该食物相关的记忆。解题思路：1. 选取贴近生活且易展开的食物（如火锅）作为写作对象；2. 从食材选择、口味体验等角度阐述喜欢的理由；3. 结合具体生活场景（如与家人的温馨时刻）构建记忆，融入真情实感，同时控制词数在80-100，保证语言连贯自然。
【解析】
文章采用三段式结构：第一段开篇点题，明确最喜欢的食物是火锅，说明其在中国的普及性；第二段从食材多样、汤底可选、酱料美味三个维度阐述喜欢的原因；第三段分享与家人在下雪天吃火锅的记忆，通过场景描写（围坐餐桌、分享故事、欢声笑语）体现亲情与团聚的温暖，升华主题，完全符合征文的内容要求。
【答案】
My favourite food memory
My favourite food is hot pot. It's a popular dish in China.
I love it because I can choose various ingredients to cook in the spicy or mild soup. I can pick a lot of ingredients, from fresh vegetables to all kinds of meat, and cook them in the pot. And I can eat them with delicious sauces.
My favourite food memory is having hot pot with my family on a snowy day. Indoors, we sat around the table, sharing laughter and stories. As we cooked the food, chatted, and burst into laughter, the delicious flavours filled not only our stomachs but also our hearts. That moment brought me love and togetherness. It will stay in my mind forever.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、主题征文、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题，全面覆盖所有内容要点，细节生动具体，情感真挚自然，语言流畅地道，符合校园英语报刊的征文要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
