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写作实战 答案（含基础版范文和进阶版范文）D36
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 对中国传统文化很感兴趣,写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。
提示:1.中国的传统节日之一,已有两千多年的历史;2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原;3.家人团聚,吃粽子和其他美食;4.中国大部分地区有赛龙舟的习俗;5.有三天假期,可以外出旅游。
要求:
1.短文内容必须包含所提供信息点,可适当发挥。
2.词数 80 左右。文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是李华,你的英国笔友 Jack 对中国传统文化很感兴趣,写信向你询问端午节的有关情况。请你根据以下提示给他回信。
提示:1.中国的传统节日之一,已有两千多年的历史;2.为了纪念著名诗人屈原;3.家人团聚,吃粽子和其他美食;4.中国大部分地区有赛龙舟的习俗;5.有三天假期,可以外出旅游。
要求:
1.短文内容必须包含所提供信息点,可适当发挥。
2.词数 80 左右。文章的开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
How’s it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you.
It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. It has a history of over two thousand years.
People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious foods. In most parts of China, people often have dragon boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a three-day holiday. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious foods. In most parts of China, people often have dragon boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a three-day holiday. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
主题写作专项
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Jack,
How's it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. It has a history of over two thousand years.
People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious foods. In most parts of China, people often have dragon boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a three-day holiday. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Jack,
How's it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, with a history of more than 2,000 years. It is celebrated to remember the great ancient poet Qu Yuan.
On this day, families usually get together to have a big meal. We eat zongzi, a kind of special food made of rice, and many other things. In many places, people also hold exciting dragon boat races. What's more, we also have a three-day holiday for this festival, and many people like to travel and relax during the festival.
I hope you can come to China to experience it someday.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 基础版范文
Dear Jack,
How's it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. It has a history of over two thousand years.
People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious foods. In most parts of China, people often have dragon boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a three-day holiday. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
＞ 进阶版范文
Dear Jack,
How's it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the most important traditional festivals in China, with a history of more than 2,000 years. It is celebrated to remember the great ancient poet Qu Yuan.
On this day, families usually get together to have a big meal. We eat zongzi, a kind of special food made of rice, and many other things. In many places, people also hold exciting dragon boat races. What's more, we also have a three-day holiday for this festival, and many people like to travel and relax during the festival.
I hope you can come to China to experience it someday.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题是英语书信写作任务，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Jack回信介绍端午节。解题思路：1. 牢记书信格式，题目已给出开头和结尾，只需补充中间段落；2. 必须包含所有提示信息：端午节是中国传统节日、有两千多年历史、纪念屈原、家人团聚吃粽子、赛龙舟、三天假期可外出旅游；3. 语言要贴合笔友间的亲切语气，词数控制在80左右，可适当添加简单细节让内容自然流畅。
【解析】
按照提示点的逻辑顺序组织内容：先介绍端午节的基本属性（传统节日、历史），再说明纪念屈原的意义，接着描述节日的核心活动（家人团聚、吃粽子、赛龙舟），最后提及假期安排，确保所有信息点都覆盖，语言简洁通顺，符合书信的口语化表达要求。具体内容如下：
It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals, with a history of over two thousand years. People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, families get together to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In most parts of China, there are exciting dragon boat races. We also have a three-day holiday, so we can go on a short trip to relax.
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How's it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. It has a history of over two thousand years.
People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious foods. In most parts of China, people often have dragon boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a three-day holiday. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、传统文化话题英语表达
【点评】
本题结合中国传统节日，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求涵盖所有给定信息点，语言通顺自然，符合书信格式，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用及跨文化交际表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题是英语书信写作任务，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Jack回信介绍端午节。解题思路：1. 牢记书信格式，题目已给出开头和结尾，只需补充中间段落；2. 必须包含所有提示信息：端午节是中国传统节日、有两千多年历史、纪念屈原、家人团聚吃粽子、赛龙舟、三天假期可外出旅游；3. 语言要贴合笔友间的亲切语气，词数控制在80左右，可适当添加简单细节让内容自然流畅。
【解析】
按照提示点的逻辑顺序组织内容：先介绍端午节的基本属性（传统节日、历史），再说明纪念屈原的意义，接着描述节日的核心活动（家人团聚、吃粽子、赛龙舟），最后提及假期安排，确保所有信息点都覆盖，语言简洁通顺，符合书信的口语化表达要求。具体内容如下：
It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals, with a history of over two thousand years. People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, families get together to eat zongzi and other delicious food. In most parts of China, there are exciting dragon boat races. We also have a three-day holiday, so we can go on a short trip to relax.
【答案】
Dear Jack,
How's it going? I am very glad to introduce the Dragon Boat Festival to you. It is one of the traditional Chinese festivals. It has a history of over two thousand years.
People celebrate it to remember the great poet Qu Yuan. On that day, people often get together with their family to eat zongzi and other delicious foods. In most parts of China, people often have dragon boat races. It is so exciting to watch this activity on TV. Besides, we also have a three-day holiday. So we can have a short journey to relax. How interesting the Dragon Boat Festival is! I like it very much.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、传统文化话题英语表达
【点评】
本题结合中国传统节日，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求涵盖所有给定信息点，语言通顺自然，符合书信格式，难度适中，能有效检验学生的英语综合运用及跨文化交际表达能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
