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五、书面表达
你所在的学校正在举办一场“世界文明遗产展”英语主题活动，邀请同学们扮演小小讲解员，用英语向全校师生介绍一处历史遗迹或文物。请你写一篇英文讲解稿，向大家介绍一处你了解的历史遗迹(如埃及金字塔、中国长城、玛雅库库尔坎金字塔等)。
要求:(1)语句通顺,可适当发挥；(2)80词左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作思路指导】
(1)What is the historical site called?
(2)What is the historical site like?
(3) What interesting facts does it have?
【实战演练】
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about
Thank you!
你所在的学校正在举办一场“世界文明遗产展”英语主题活动，邀请同学们扮演小小讲解员，用英语向全校师生介绍一处历史遗迹或文物。请你写一篇英文讲解稿，向大家介绍一处你了解的历史遗迹(如埃及金字塔、中国长城、玛雅库库尔坎金字塔等)。
要求:(1)语句通顺,可适当发挥；(2)80词左右,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作思路指导】
(1)What is the historical site called?
(2)What is the historical site like?
(3) What interesting facts does it have?
【实战演练】
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about
Thank you!
答案
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about the Great Pyramid of Giza, one of the most famous ancient wonders.
Built around 4,500 years ago, it was the tomb of the Egyptian pharaoh Khufu. Made of huge stone blocks, it once stood as the tallest building in the world for over 3,800 years. Interestingly, no one knows exactly how the ancient Egyptians built it without modern machines. Many scientists are still studying its building secrets today.
This amazing structure shows how clever and hard-working the ancient people were.
Thank you!
(80 words)
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about the Great Pyramid of Giza, one of the most famous ancient wonders.
Built around 4,500 years ago, it was the tomb of the Egyptian pharaoh Khufu. Made of huge stone blocks, it once stood as the tallest building in the world for over 3,800 years. Interestingly, no one knows exactly how the ancient Egyptians built it without modern machines. Many scientists are still studying its building secrets today.
This amazing structure shows how clever and hard-working the ancient people were.
Thank you!
(80 words)
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“世界文明遗产展”主题撰写英文讲解稿，开头与结尾已给出，需介绍一处历史遗迹。写作时需紧扣三个核心思路：确定介绍的遗迹名称、描述遗迹的基本特征（如建造时间、用途、材质等）、补充相关有趣事实，同时要保证语句通顺，字数约80词，符合讲解稿的语境。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 选定熟悉的经典历史遗迹（如吉萨大金字塔，素材丰富且易组织语言）；2. 衔接给定开头，明确介绍的遗迹名称；3. 依次介绍遗迹的建造背景（时间、法老陵墓的用途）、材质、曾为世界最高建筑的历史地位；4. 加入“建造方法成谜”的有趣事实增强内容；5. 结尾升华体现古人的智慧，控制字数符合要求，确保语句通顺自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about the Great Pyramid of Giza, one of the most famous ancient wonders.
Built around 4,500 years ago, it was the tomb of the Egyptian pharaoh Khufu. Made of huge stone blocks, it once stood as the tallest building in the world for over 3,800 years. Interestingly, no one knows exactly how the ancient Egyptians built it without modern machines. Many scientists are still studying its building secrets today.
This amazing structure shows how clever and hard-working the ancient people were.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、文化遗产介绍、英文讲解稿写作
【点评】
本题结合文化主题考查英语写作能力，既要求学生运用基础英语知识组织语句，又引导学生了解世界文明遗产，符合主题活动的语境，是兼具语言性和文化性的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“世界文明遗产展”主题撰写英文讲解稿，开头与结尾已给出，需介绍一处历史遗迹。写作时需紧扣三个核心思路：确定介绍的遗迹名称、描述遗迹的基本特征（如建造时间、用途、材质等）、补充相关有趣事实，同时要保证语句通顺，字数约80词，符合讲解稿的语境。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 选定熟悉的经典历史遗迹（如吉萨大金字塔，素材丰富且易组织语言）；2. 衔接给定开头，明确介绍的遗迹名称；3. 依次介绍遗迹的建造背景（时间、法老陵墓的用途）、材质、曾为世界最高建筑的历史地位；4. 加入“建造方法成谜”的有趣事实增强内容；5. 结尾升华体现古人的智慧，控制字数符合要求，确保语句通顺自然。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hello, everyone!
Today I'd like to talk about the Great Pyramid of Giza, one of the most famous ancient wonders.
Built around 4,500 years ago, it was the tomb of the Egyptian pharaoh Khufu. Made of huge stone blocks, it once stood as the tallest building in the world for over 3,800 years. Interestingly, no one knows exactly how the ancient Egyptians built it without modern machines. Many scientists are still studying its building secrets today.
This amazing structure shows how clever and hard-working the ancient people were.
Thank you!
【知识点】
英语书面表达、文化遗产介绍、英文讲解稿写作
【点评】
本题结合文化主题考查英语写作能力，既要求学生运用基础英语知识组织语句，又引导学生了解世界文明遗产，符合主题活动的语境，是兼具语言性和文化性的写作题。
【难度系数】
0.5
