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假如你是Lucy，昨天下午你所居住的地方遭遇了一场暴风雨。请你给你的好友
Lily写一封电子邮件，向她描述暴风雨来临时的情况，当时你的家人都在做什么以
及暴风雨后的情况。
【要求】（1）邮件须包括所有要点内容，并适当拓展；（2）文中不得出现个人真
实姓名和校名；（3）80词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
Let me tell you something about the rainstorm yesterday afternoon.
Yours,
Lucy
Lily写一封电子邮件，向她描述暴风雨来临时的情况，当时你的家人都在做什么以
及暴风雨后的情况。
【要求】（1）邮件须包括所有要点内容，并适当拓展；（2）文中不得出现个人真
实姓名和校名；（3）80词左右。首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lily,
Let me tell you something about the rainstorm yesterday afternoon.
At first,it was just another normal day.By four o'clock yesterday afternoon, everything was fine. However, at about half past four,I was doing my homework when I suddenly noticed it felt like midnight outside. Something turned day into night.
At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen.I was so scared,but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood.
After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours,we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly.The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.
Yours,
Lucy
答案
At first,it was just another normal day.By four o'clock yesterday afternoon, everything was fine. However, at about half past four,I was doing my homework when I suddenly noticed it felt like midnight outside. Something turned day into night.
At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen.I was so scared,but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood.
After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours,we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly.The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.(共 129 词)
At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen.I was so scared,but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood.
After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours,we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly.The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.(共 129 词)
解析
【分析】本题要求以Lucy的身份给好友Lily写电子邮件，需涵盖三个核心要点：暴风雨来临时的情况、家人当时的活动、暴风雨后的情况，首句已给出，需围绕要点适当拓展，注意邮件格式、时态（过去相关时态）、字数要求，不得出现真实信息。解题思路：先承接首句描述暴风雨来临前的状态，再写暴风雨来临的征兆，接着分别叙述家人当时的活动，最后写暴风雨后的场景及感悟，确保要点齐全、语言通顺。
【解析】首先承接首句，描述暴风雨来临前的平静，再写暴风雨来临的征兆（天变黑），接着用过去进行时描述家人当时的活动：父亲在客厅看报，母亲在厨房做饭，最后写暴风雨后的情况：到处是垃圾，和邻居一起清理，邻里关系更亲近，符合邮件的交际要求。
【答案】At first,it was just another normal day.By four o'clock yesterday afternoon, everything was fine. However, at about half past four,I was doing my homework when I suddenly noticed it felt like midnight outside. Something turned day into night.At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen.I was so scared,but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood.After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours,we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly.The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.
【知识点】英语邮件写作、过去进行时、一般过去时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定场景完成邮件写作，涵盖指定要点，同时考查过去时态的正确运用，语言需通顺连贯，符合邮件的交际功能。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】首先承接首句，描述暴风雨来临前的平静，再写暴风雨来临的征兆（天变黑），接着用过去进行时描述家人当时的活动：父亲在客厅看报，母亲在厨房做饭，最后写暴风雨后的情况：到处是垃圾，和邻居一起清理，邻里关系更亲近，符合邮件的交际要求。
【答案】At first,it was just another normal day.By four o'clock yesterday afternoon, everything was fine. However, at about half past four,I was doing my homework when I suddenly noticed it felt like midnight outside. Something turned day into night.At that time, my father was looking through the newspaper in the living room while my mother was cooking dinner in the kitchen.I was so scared,but I told my family what was happening loudly as quickly as possible—The rainstorm came! The dark cloud was spreading over the land like a flood.After the rainstorm, there was rubbish everywhere. With the support of our kind neighbours,we cleaned it and got back to our lives quickly.The disaster brought families and neighbours closer than before.
【知识点】英语邮件写作、过去进行时、一般过去时
【点评】本题考查学生的英语书面表达能力，要求结合给定场景完成邮件写作，涵盖指定要点，同时考查过去时态的正确运用，语言需通顺连贯，符合邮件的交际功能。
【难度系数】0.6
