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四、提升题 书面表达。
校报英语版块正在开展以“中华传统节日与本土文化融合”为主题的征稿活动。请你根据以下写作要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先说说你喜欢的传统节日，再陈述喜欢它的原因，最后描述你们家是怎么融合本地艺术、饮食、历史等来庆祝这个节日的。
写作要点：
1. What is your favourite traditional Chinese festival?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How does your family celebrate it? (local art, food, culture ...)
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite traditional Chinese festival
校报英语版块正在开展以“中华传统节日与本土文化融合”为主题的征稿活动。请你根据以下写作要点提示，写一篇短文投稿，先说说你喜欢的传统节日，再陈述喜欢它的原因，最后描述你们家是怎么融合本地艺术、饮食、历史等来庆祝这个节日的。
写作要点：
1. What is your favourite traditional Chinese festival?
2. Why do you like it?
3. How does your family celebrate it? (local art, food, culture ...)
要求：
1. 短文应包括所有的写作要点，条理清晰，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息；
3. 词数80—120，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite traditional Chinese festival
答案
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is the most important traditional festival in China and I love it so much.
I like it because it is a time for family reunions. It also carries our traditional culture and brings us warmth and happiness. It lets us slow down and enjoy sweet moments with our family.
During the festival, my family celebrate it in our local way. We cook special local food and enjoy a big family dinner together. We also watch traditional local art shows and put up red paper cuttings at home. These local customs have been passed down in our hometown for many years. They make our Spring Festival more meaningful and full of local features.
I like it because it is a time for family reunions. It also carries our traditional culture and brings us warmth and happiness. It lets us slow down and enjoy sweet moments with our family.
During the festival, my family celebrate it in our local way. We cook special local food and enjoy a big family dinner together. We also watch traditional local art shows and put up red paper cuttings at home. These local customs have been passed down in our hometown for many years. They make our Spring Festival more meaningful and full of local features.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“中华传统节日与本土文化融合”主题投稿，需覆盖三个写作要点：说明最喜欢的传统节日、阐述喜欢的原因、描述家庭结合本地元素的庆祝方式。解题思路：1. 确定核心节日（选春节，贴合主题且易拓展）；2. 围绕“家庭团聚、文化传承”梳理喜欢的原因；3. 结合本地饮食、艺术、文化设计具体庆祝场景；4. 确保行文连贯，词数80-120，无真实信息，符合征稿要求。
【解析】
首先点明最喜欢的传统节日是春节，说明其作为中国最重要传统节日的地位；接着从家庭团聚、文化传承、带来温暖等角度阐述喜欢的原因；最后结合本地特色，描述家庭制作本地特色菜、观看传统艺术表演、张贴剪纸等庆祝方式，体现本土文化与节日的融合，确保所有要点覆盖，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is the most important traditional festival in China and I love it so much.
I like it because it is a time for family reunions. It also carries our traditional culture and brings us warmth and happiness. It lets us slow down and enjoy sweet moments with our family.
During the festival, my family celebrate it in our local way. We cook special local food and enjoy a big family dinner together. We also watch traditional local art shows and put up red paper cuttings at home. These local customs have been passed down in our hometown for many years. They make our Spring Festival more meaningful and full of local features.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、传统节日文化
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体充实，情感真挚，将传统节日与本土饮食、艺术、文化自然融合，行文连贯流畅，符合征稿要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“中华传统节日与本土文化融合”主题投稿，需覆盖三个写作要点：说明最喜欢的传统节日、阐述喜欢的原因、描述家庭结合本地元素的庆祝方式。解题思路：1. 确定核心节日（选春节，贴合主题且易拓展）；2. 围绕“家庭团聚、文化传承”梳理喜欢的原因；3. 结合本地饮食、艺术、文化设计具体庆祝场景；4. 确保行文连贯，词数80-120，无真实信息，符合征稿要求。
【解析】
首先点明最喜欢的传统节日是春节，说明其作为中国最重要传统节日的地位；接着从家庭团聚、文化传承、带来温暖等角度阐述喜欢的原因；最后结合本地特色，描述家庭制作本地特色菜、观看传统艺术表演、张贴剪纸等庆祝方式，体现本土文化与节日的融合，确保所有要点覆盖，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My favourite traditional Chinese festival is the Spring Festival. It is the most important traditional festival in China and I love it so much.
I like it because it is a time for family reunions. It also carries our traditional culture and brings us warmth and happiness. It lets us slow down and enjoy sweet moments with our family.
During the festival, my family celebrate it in our local way. We cook special local food and enjoy a big family dinner together. We also watch traditional local art shows and put up red paper cuttings at home. These local customs have been passed down in our hometown for many years. They make our Spring Festival more meaningful and full of local features.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、传统节日文化
【点评】
短文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有写作要点，内容具体充实，情感真挚，将传统节日与本土饮食、艺术、文化自然融合，行文连贯流畅，符合征稿要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.4
