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十二、提升题 你准备如何度过下一个中秋节？根据下列要求，写一写你的中秋节旅行计划，然后和大家一起分享吧。
要求:1.介绍你的旅行计划；
2.介绍中秋节的文化传统；
3.条理清楚，语句准确，书写规范、美观；
4.不少于5句话。
My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
要求:1.介绍你的旅行计划；
2.介绍中秋节的文化传统；
3.条理清楚，语句准确，书写规范、美观；
4.不少于5句话。
My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
答案
My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
I will go to my grandma's home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. She lives in Nanchang, so I will go there by train with my parents. We will buy some mooncakes for Grandma. And we will eat mooncakes and watch the big and round moon at night. We will also talk about the story of Chang'e. The next day, we will visit the Tengwang Pavilion and eat delicious local food. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I love it and I'm so excited about this trip!
I will go to my grandma's home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. She lives in Nanchang, so I will go there by train with my parents. We will buy some mooncakes for Grandma. And we will eat mooncakes and watch the big and round moon at night. We will also talk about the story of Chang'e. The next day, we will visit the Tengwang Pavilion and eat delicious local food. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I love it and I'm so excited about this trip!
解析
【分析】本题要求写一篇关于中秋节旅行计划的英语短文，需同时包含旅行安排和中秋节文化传统，且不少于5句话。解题思路：1. 审题明确核心要求：围绕旅行计划展开，融入中秋文化元素；2. 构思旅行计划的具体内容：确定目的地、同行人员、交通方式、活动安排；3. 加入中秋节文化传统：如吃月饼、赏月、讲述嫦娥奔月的故事等；4. 组织语言，确保条理清晰、语句准确，满足字数要求。
【解析】根据题目要求，先介绍旅行计划：前往南昌的奶奶家，和父母乘火车出行，为奶奶买月饼，晚上一起吃月饼、赏月、讲嫦娥故事，次日游览滕王阁、品尝当地美食；再点明中秋节是中国传统节日，表达对节日和旅行的喜爱与期待，具体内容如下：
My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
I will go to my grandma's home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. She lives in Nanchang, so I will go there by train with my parents. We will buy some mooncakes for Grandma. And we will eat mooncakes and watch the big and round moon at night. We will also talk about the story of Chang'e. The next day, we will visit the Tengwang Pavilion and eat delicious local food. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I love it and I'm so excited about this trip!
【答案】My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
I will go to my grandma's home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. She lives in Nanchang, so I will go there by train with my parents. We will buy some mooncakes for Grandma. And we will eat mooncakes and watch the big and round moon at night. We will also talk about the story of Chang'e. The next day, we will visit the Tengwang Pavilion and eat delicious local food. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I love it and I'm so excited about this trip!
【知识点】英语节日写作、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，清晰呈现了中秋节的旅行计划，融入了吃月饼、赏月、嫦娥故事等中秋文化传统，条理清楚，语句通顺，符合不少于5句话的要求，是一篇符合标准的节日主题英语短文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】根据题目要求，先介绍旅行计划：前往南昌的奶奶家，和父母乘火车出行，为奶奶买月饼，晚上一起吃月饼、赏月、讲嫦娥故事，次日游览滕王阁、品尝当地美食；再点明中秋节是中国传统节日，表达对节日和旅行的喜爱与期待，具体内容如下：
My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
I will go to my grandma's home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. She lives in Nanchang, so I will go there by train with my parents. We will buy some mooncakes for Grandma. And we will eat mooncakes and watch the big and round moon at night. We will also talk about the story of Chang'e. The next day, we will visit the Tengwang Pavilion and eat delicious local food. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I love it and I'm so excited about this trip!
【答案】My Travel Plan for the Mid-Autumn Festival
I will go to my grandma's home for the Mid-Autumn Festival. She lives in Nanchang, so I will go there by train with my parents. We will buy some mooncakes for Grandma. And we will eat mooncakes and watch the big and round moon at night. We will also talk about the story of Chang'e. The next day, we will visit the Tengwang Pavilion and eat delicious local food. The Mid-Autumn Festival is a traditional Chinese festival. I love it and I'm so excited about this trip!
【知识点】英语节日写作、英语记叙文写作
【点评】本文紧扣题目要求，清晰呈现了中秋节的旅行计划，融入了吃月饼、赏月、嫦娥故事等中秋文化传统，条理清楚，语句通顺，符合不少于5句话的要求，是一篇符合标准的节日主题英语短文。
【难度系数】0.5
