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Ⅳ. 书面表达。
做计划是提升自我的一个途径,寒假即将到来,你有什么提升自我的计划吗? 学校校报英文版为此开设了“My Winter Resolutions”专栏。请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
★What resolutions do you have?
★Why do you make these resolutions?
★How will you achieve your resolutions?
要求: 1. 信息内容完整,语句连贯;
2. 80 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Winter Resolutions
As the winter vacation is coming, it is the perfect time to make resolutions.
做计划是提升自我的一个途径,寒假即将到来,你有什么提升自我的计划吗? 学校校报英文版为此开设了“My Winter Resolutions”专栏。请写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
★What resolutions do you have?
★Why do you make these resolutions?
★How will you achieve your resolutions?
要求: 1. 信息内容完整,语句连贯;
2. 80 词左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
My Winter Resolutions
As the winter vacation is coming, it is the perfect time to make resolutions.
答案
One possible version:
As the winter vacation is coming, it is the perfect time to make resolutions.
First, I am going to read two English books. Reading helps me learn new words and explore different cultures. Second, I am going to practice basketball with my friends daily. I want to grow taller and stronger, and team sports also teach me to get along with others. Finally, I am going to help my parents cook dinner twice a week. Cooking is a useful life skill, and I want to share the housework with them.
To keep my promises, I am going to write my goals on sticky notes and stick them on my desk. I'll also ask my best friend to check my progress every week. I believe small steps will turn my resolutions into real changes. Let's make this winter vacation meaningful!
As the winter vacation is coming, it is the perfect time to make resolutions.
First, I am going to read two English books. Reading helps me learn new words and explore different cultures. Second, I am going to practice basketball with my friends daily. I want to grow taller and stronger, and team sports also teach me to get along with others. Finally, I am going to help my parents cook dinner twice a week. Cooking is a useful life skill, and I want to share the housework with them.
To keep my promises, I am going to write my goals on sticky notes and stick them on my desk. I'll also ask my best friend to check my progress every week. I believe small steps will turn my resolutions into real changes. Let's make this winter vacation meaningful!
解析
【分析】本题为英语书面表达题，要求围绕“My Winter Resolutions”主题投稿，需涵盖三个核心要点：具体的寒假计划、制定计划的原因、实现计划的方法。解题思路为：先承接给定开头，分点列出清晰的计划，每个计划对应合理原因，再说明实现计划的具体措施，最后适当收尾，确保内容完整、语句连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头后，分三点阐述计划：读2本英语书（原因是学习新单词、了解不同文化）；每天和朋友练篮球（原因是强身健体、学会团队合作）；每周帮父母做2次饭（原因是学习生活技能、分担家务）；2. 说明实现计划的方法：将目标写在便签贴在书桌，找好友每周检查进度；3. 结尾表达对寒假的期待，确保内容连贯，符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
As the winter vacation is coming, it is the perfect time to make resolutions.
First, I am going to read two English books. Reading helps me learn new words and explore different cultures. Second, I am going to practice basketball with my friends daily. I want to grow taller and stronger, and team sports also teach me to get along with others. Finally, I am going to help my parents cook dinner twice a week. Cooking is a useful life skill, and I want to share the housework with them.
To keep my promises, I am going to write my goals on sticky notes and stick them on my desk. I'll also ask my best friend to check my progress every week. I believe small steps will turn my resolutions into real changes. Let's make this winter vacation meaningful!
【知识点】英语书面表达、计划类话题写作、原因表述
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点，结构清晰，易于学生组织内容，注重语言连贯性与要点完整性，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤如下：1. 承接开头后，分三点阐述计划：读2本英语书（原因是学习新单词、了解不同文化）；每天和朋友练篮球（原因是强身健体、学会团队合作）；每周帮父母做2次饭（原因是学习生活技能、分担家务）；2. 说明实现计划的方法：将目标写在便签贴在书桌，找好友每周检查进度；3. 结尾表达对寒假的期待，确保内容连贯，符合80词左右的要求。
【答案】One possible version:
As the winter vacation is coming, it is the perfect time to make resolutions.
First, I am going to read two English books. Reading helps me learn new words and explore different cultures. Second, I am going to practice basketball with my friends daily. I want to grow taller and stronger, and team sports also teach me to get along with others. Finally, I am going to help my parents cook dinner twice a week. Cooking is a useful life skill, and I want to share the housework with them.
To keep my promises, I am going to write my goals on sticky notes and stick them on my desk. I'll also ask my best friend to check my progress every week. I believe small steps will turn my resolutions into real changes. Let's make this winter vacation meaningful!
【知识点】英语书面表达、计划类话题写作、原因表述
【点评】本题结合学生生活实际，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求涵盖指定要点，结构清晰，易于学生组织内容，注重语言连贯性与要点完整性，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】0.6
