经典例题
学校正在举办主题为“My pocket money”的英语征文活动，请你根据下面的要点写一篇短文，谈谈中学生应如何使用自己的零花钱。
【要点】1. 中学生是否应该有零花钱？
2. 你平时是如何使用零花钱的？
3. 怎样更好地管理你的零花钱？
【要求】1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯。
2. 必须包括要点中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥。
3. 80词左右。
4. 不得使用真实的姓名、校名和地名等。

My pocket money
I think middle school students should have some pocket money. It helps us learn to manage money by ourselves.
I usually use my pocket money to buy stationery and storybooks I need. Sometimes I spend a little on snacks, and I also give a small part of it to help children in poor areas.
To manage my pocket money better, I will write down all my spending every month, and save at least half of my pocket money in the money box, and never waste it on useless things.

【分析】
这是一道英语话题征文写作题，主题为“My pocket money”，需围绕三个指定要点完成写作。解题思路：1. 开篇明确核心观点：中学生应拥有零花钱并说明其意义；2. 结合自身实际，具体阐述零花钱的使用方式；3. 提出管理零花钱的可行方法，确保覆盖所有要点，语言连贯，词数控制在80左右，避免使用真实个人信息。
【解析】
写作遵循“观点-实际使用-管理方法”的结构：①开篇点明观点：I think middle school students should have some pocket money. It helps us learn to manage money by ourselves. ②具体说明使用情况：I usually use my pocket money to buy stationery and storybooks I need. Sometimes I spend a little on snacks, and I also give a small part of it to help children in poor areas. ③提出管理方法：To manage my pocket money better, I will write down all my spending every month, and save at least half of my pocket money in the money box, and never waste it on useless things. 全程保证语法正确、上下文连贯，符合词数要求。
【答案】
My pocket money
I think middle school students should have some pocket money. It helps us learn to manage money by ourselves.
I usually use my pocket money to buy stationery and storybooks I need. Sometimes I spend a little on snacks, and I also give a small part of it to help children in poor areas.
To manage my pocket money better, I will write down all my spending every month, and save at least half of my pocket money in the money box, and never waste it on useless things.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、话题表达、要点式写作
【点评】
作文紧扣主题，全面覆盖所有要求要点，结构清晰，语言简洁规范，符合80词左右的要求，观点明确，实用性强，符合中学生习作的标准。
【难度系数】
0.6

写作指导
1.本文是一篇话题作文。
2.时态为一般现在时。
3.写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏要点信息，可适当增加细节，突出写作重点。
写作模板

遣词造句
1.我通常把零花钱花在零食和学习用品上。（spend...on）

2.充分地使用零花钱确实是重要的。（It is＋adj.＋to do sth）

3.假如人们需要我的帮助，我将尽力伸出援助之手。（give sb a hand）

1. I usually spend my pocket money on snacks and school things.
2. It is really important to make good use of pocket money.
3. If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.

【分析】
本题是英语写作的遣词造句练习，需根据指定句型和短语完成句子：第一题要求用spend...on结构，主语为I，时态用一般现在时，明确花费的具体内容；第二题要求用It is + adj + to do sth句型，需正确使用不定式表达核心动作；第三题是if引导的条件状语从句，遵循主将从现原则，搭配give sb a hand短语。
【解析】
1. 遵循spend sth on sth的固定结构，主语I，副词usually体现一般现在时，宾语my pocket money，后接具体花费内容snacks and school things，组成句子：I usually spend my pocket money on snacks and school things.
2. 遵循It is + adj + to do sth的句型，It作形式主语，真正主语为不定式短语make good use of pocket money，组成句子：It is really important to make good use of pocket money.
3. if引导的条件状语从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，搭配短语give sb a hand，组成句子：If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
【答案】
1. I usually spend my pocket money on snacks and school things.
2. It is really important to make good use of pocket money.
3. If people need my help, I will try to give them a hand.
【知识点】
固定短语搭配、英语常用句型、一般现在时
【点评】
本题考查英语写作中基础遣词造句的能力，要求学生掌握指定的短语和句型结构，符合话题写作的基础要求，是英语学习中的重点基础内容，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3