写作提优
单元写作要求
本单元以“生命之美”为话题，主要谈论生命的意义与价值、默默奉献的人生品格、个人对社会的贡献，以及对自身影响深远的人物与人生启示。常见写作角度：介绍对自己影响最深的人，讲述其事迹与精神品质。
写作方法策略 如何写以“影响自己的人”为主题的文章
写这类文章时，首先要确定四要素——体裁、时态、人称、结构。文章开篇要开门见山，点明对自己影响最大的核心人物，总述其核心品质与对自己的整体影响；主体部分叙述人物的典型事迹，展现其可贵品格；结尾总结升华，再次点明人物对自己的深刻影响，抒发人生感悟。
思路导引——佳作展示——高分词句
点明主旨 → The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most
The person who has influenced me most is Yuan Longping, ① widely known as the "Father of Hybrid Rice". I am deeply amazed by his contribution to agricultural research, and his story has greatly encouraged me to think about how to live a meaningful life.
详述事迹 → Yuan ② devoted himself to studying hybrid rice after graduating from university. For a couple of decades, ③ although he met countless difficulties in his research, he worked tirelessly to dig out the potential of high-yield rice and contributed a lot to solving the global food shortage problem.
总结启发 → His spirit inspires me to be a useful person to society. ④ I've learned that the beauty of life lies in devoting ourselves to things that benefit more people.
高分词句
①运用过去分词短语known ... 作后置定语。
②运用动名词短语作介词 to 的宾语（devote oneself to doing sth；contribute a lot to doing sth）。
③运用 although 引导让步状语从句。
④运用第一个 that 引导宾语从句；运用第二个 that 引导定语从句。
话题写作积累
1. 做某事真可惜
2. 掘地
3. 带头；引领
4. 把 A 和 B 比较
5. 伸出援手（帮助）
6. 下定决心做某事
7. 在干旱的环境中顽强生长的仙人掌告诉我们：无论处境多么艰难，都不能放弃自己的人生目标。

8. 读完这篇短文后，我终于理解了父母对我的期待，也明白了平凡人生的真正价值。

9. 生命的价值不在于长度，而在于深度。

1. It's a pity to do sth.
2. dig the ground
3. take the lead
4. compare A with B
5. give a helping hand
6. make up one's mind to do sth.
7. The cactus growing stubbornly in dry environments tells us that no matter how difficult the situation is, we can't give up our life goals.
8. After reading this short passage, I finally understand my parents' expectations for me and also realize the true value of an ordinary life.
9. The value of life lies not in its length, but in its depth.

本题是围绕“生命之美”主题的英语写作积累训练，考查九年级阶段对应的核心固定短语、话题相关常用语句的汉译英，帮助学生积累写作素材，掌握本单元相关的固定搭配与句式表达，提升对应主题的写作输出能力。