第三节 书面表达(共15分)
你校阅读俱乐部正在制作一期以“我最喜爱的故事”为主题的英语墙报,向全校同学推荐优秀读物。请你写一篇读后感作为墙报稿件。词数80左右。
内容要点:
1. 故事名称和作者;
2. 简要概括故事的主要内容;
3. 你最喜欢的人物/角色和理由;
4. 你从这个故事中学到了什么。
你校阅读俱乐部正在制作一期以“我最喜爱的故事”为主题的英语墙报,向全校同学推荐优秀读物。请你写一篇读后感作为墙报稿件。词数80左右。
内容要点:
1. 故事名称和作者;
2. 简要概括故事的主要内容;
3. 你最喜欢的人物/角色和理由;
4. 你从这个故事中学到了什么。
答案
The story I’d like to share is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells the story of Tom who witnesses a murder but is too afraid to tell anyone. An innocent man is put in prison. Tom hesitates to speak out because the real killer may hurt him. But in the end, he bravely stands up in court and saves the innocent man.
My favourite character is Tom because he is brave and honest. He chooses to do what is right even though he is scared.
This story teaches me that real courage is doing the right thing when we are afraid. We should always be honest and tell the truth. That is what makes a good person.
My favourite character is Tom because he is brave and honest. He chooses to do what is right even though he is scared.
This story teaches me that real courage is doing the right thing when we are afraid. We should always be honest and tell the truth. That is what makes a good person.
解析
【分析】
本题要求写一篇以“我最喜爱的故事”为主题的英语读后感,需覆盖四个内容要点。解题思路为:1. 选择熟悉的经典故事,明确其名称与作者;2. 用简洁语言概括故事核心情节;3. 确定最喜欢的人物并阐述理由;4. 提炼故事带给自己的感悟,控制词数在80左右,确保语言准确流畅。
【解析】
写作时遵循“开篇点题-简述故事-人物评价-感悟总结”的结构:①开篇直接点明推荐的故事《The Adventures of Tom Sawyer》及作者Mark Twain;②简述故事核心:汤姆目睹谋杀,起初因害怕不敢作证,最终在法庭勇敢指证,解救无辜者;③说明最喜欢汤姆的原因:他勇敢诚实,即使恐惧仍选择做正确的事;④总结感悟:真正的勇气是害怕时仍坚持正义,要保持诚实。
【答案】
The story I’d like to share is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells the story of Tom who witnesses a murder but is too afraid to tell anyone. An innocent man is put in prison. Tom hesitates to speak out because the real killer may hurt him. But in the end, he bravely stands up in court and saves the innocent man.
My favourite character is Tom because he is brave and honest. He chooses to do what is right even though he is scared.
This story teaches me that real courage is doing the right thing when we are afraid. We should always be honest and tell the truth. That is what makes a good person.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、故事类读后感写作、英语内容整合
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有内容要点,语言简洁规范,逻辑清晰,既准确传达了故事内容,又表达了个人真实感悟,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求写一篇以“我最喜爱的故事”为主题的英语读后感,需覆盖四个内容要点。解题思路为:1. 选择熟悉的经典故事,明确其名称与作者;2. 用简洁语言概括故事核心情节;3. 确定最喜欢的人物并阐述理由;4. 提炼故事带给自己的感悟,控制词数在80左右,确保语言准确流畅。
【解析】
写作时遵循“开篇点题-简述故事-人物评价-感悟总结”的结构:①开篇直接点明推荐的故事《The Adventures of Tom Sawyer》及作者Mark Twain;②简述故事核心:汤姆目睹谋杀,起初因害怕不敢作证,最终在法庭勇敢指证,解救无辜者;③说明最喜欢汤姆的原因:他勇敢诚实,即使恐惧仍选择做正确的事;④总结感悟:真正的勇气是害怕时仍坚持正义,要保持诚实。
【答案】
The story I’d like to share is The Adventures of Tom Sawyer by Mark Twain. It tells the story of Tom who witnesses a murder but is too afraid to tell anyone. An innocent man is put in prison. Tom hesitates to speak out because the real killer may hurt him. But in the end, he bravely stands up in court and saves the innocent man.
My favourite character is Tom because he is brave and honest. He chooses to do what is right even though he is scared.
This story teaches me that real courage is doing the right thing when we are afraid. We should always be honest and tell the truth. That is what makes a good person.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、故事类读后感写作、英语内容整合
【点评】
该作文紧扣主题,完整覆盖所有内容要点,语言简洁规范,逻辑清晰,既准确传达了故事内容,又表达了个人真实感悟,符合书面表达的要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
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