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76. 梦想是一盏灯，为我们指引方向；梦想是一支笔，助我们描绘蓝图。假设你校英语俱乐部正在举办以“My Dream”为题的征文比赛，请你根据以下提示，把你的梦想写下来吧！
提示:(1) What do you want to be?
(2) Why do you want to be a(n) ...?
(3) How are you going to be a(n) ...?
要求:不少于100词,可适当发挥;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream
Everybody has his dream and so do I.
提示:(1) What do you want to be?
(2) Why do you want to be a(n) ...?
(3) How are you going to be a(n) ...?
要求:不少于100词,可适当发挥;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
My Dream
Everybody has his dream and so do I.
答案
One possible version:
My Dream
Everybody has his dream and so do I. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. On the one hand, I like reading and writing very much. On the other hand, I ' m pretty creative. Sometimes, I can share my ideas with my friends by writing.
To be a writer, I'm going to read more books written by famous writers because I can learn a lot from them. What's more, I'm going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines. Moreover, I want to study at a good university after I finish high school. I plan to study Chinese culture there.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
My Dream
Everybody has his dream and so do I. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. On the one hand, I like reading and writing very much. On the other hand, I ' m pretty creative. Sometimes, I can share my ideas with my friends by writing.
To be a writer, I'm going to read more books written by famous writers because I can learn a lot from them. What's more, I'm going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines. Moreover, I want to study at a good university after I finish high school. I plan to study Chinese culture there.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语话题征文写作题，主题是“My Dream”，需根据题目给出的三个提示（职业选择、原因、实现路径）完成写作，要求不少于100词，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 明确易展开的梦想职业（如作家）；2. 结合自身兴趣、优势说明选择该职业的原因；3. 分点阐述实现梦想的具体计划；4. 收尾升华呼应主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先确定梦想职业为作家，原因部分结合自身喜欢读写、有创造力的特点，说明写作可分享想法；实现计划从阅读名著学习、坚持写稿投稿、深造学习三个方面展开；最后用谚语“No pains, no gains.”收尾，使文章结构完整，内容充实，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Dream
Everybody has his dream and so do I. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. On the one hand, I like reading and writing very much. On the other hand, I ' m pretty creative. Sometimes, I can share my ideas with my friends by writing.
To be a writer, I'm going to read more books written by famous writers because I can learn a lot from them. What's more, I'm going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines. Moreover, I want to study at a good university after I finish high school. I plan to study Chinese culture there.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、英语应用文写作、英语句子表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目提示，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，内容充实，语言流畅，符合征文的字数要求，通过具体的原因和计划展现了对梦想的思考，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
本题为英语话题征文写作题，主题是“My Dream”，需根据题目给出的三个提示（职业选择、原因、实现路径）完成写作，要求不少于100词，开头已给出。解题思路：1. 明确易展开的梦想职业（如作家）；2. 结合自身兴趣、优势说明选择该职业的原因；3. 分点阐述实现梦想的具体计划；4. 收尾升华呼应主题，确保内容连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
首先确定梦想职业为作家，原因部分结合自身喜欢读写、有创造力的特点，说明写作可分享想法；实现计划从阅读名著学习、坚持写稿投稿、深造学习三个方面展开；最后用谚语“No pains, no gains.”收尾，使文章结构完整，内容充实，符合征文要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My Dream
Everybody has his dream and so do I. My dream is to be a writer when I grow up. On the one hand, I like reading and writing very much. On the other hand, I ' m pretty creative. Sometimes, I can share my ideas with my friends by writing.
To be a writer, I'm going to read more books written by famous writers because I can learn a lot from them. What's more, I'm going to keep on writing articles and send them to magazines. Moreover, I want to study at a good university after I finish high school. I plan to study Chinese culture there.
No pains, no gains. I believe as long as I try my best, my dream will come true some day.
【知识点】
英语话题作文写作、英语应用文写作、英语句子表达
【点评】
范文紧扣题目提示，结构清晰，逻辑连贯，内容充实，语言流畅，符合征文的字数要求，通过具体的原因和计划展现了对梦想的思考，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.4
