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（二）书面表达
假设你是李明，你校报社正在开展以“Communication Turns Hard to Easy”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿，要点如下：
（1）分享你曾经遇到的一个问题或烦恼；
（2）介绍你运用沟通解决问题的过程；
（3）谈谈你从这次经历中得到的感悟与思考。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
（2）思路构建
Communication Turns Hard to Easy
Communication plays an important role in our daily life. It can
假设你是李明，你校报社正在开展以“Communication Turns Hard to Easy”为主题的征文活动。请你用英语写一篇短文向报社投稿，要点如下：
（1）分享你曾经遇到的一个问题或烦恼；
（2）介绍你运用沟通解决问题的过程；
（3）谈谈你从这次经历中得到的感悟与思考。
作文要求：语句连贯，词数70左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
写作指导
（1）审题定调
文体：
记叙文
时态：一般过去时和一般现在时
人称：第一人称为主
（2）思路构建
Communication Turns Hard to Easy
Communication plays an important role in our daily life. It can
turn hard problems into easy ones.
答案
（1）记叙文；一般过去时和一般现在时；第一人称为主
One possible version:
Communication Turns Hard to Easy
Communication plays an important role in our daily life. It can turn hard problems into easy ones.
Last month, I felt very worried about my maths grades. I didn't do well in the exam and I often felt sad.
Then I decided to talk to my parents. I told them about my worries and problems. They listened to me carefully and gave me some useful advice on how to study maths. After that, we made a better study plan together.
A few weeks later, my maths grades got better. This experience taught me that communication can help us get out of worry and find our way. Now, I feel closer to my family and more confident about my studies.
One possible version:
Communication Turns Hard to Easy
Communication plays an important role in our daily life. It can turn hard problems into easy ones.
Last month, I felt very worried about my maths grades. I didn't do well in the exam and I often felt sad.
Then I decided to talk to my parents. I told them about my worries and problems. They listened to me carefully and gave me some useful advice on how to study maths. After that, we made a better study plan together.
A few weeks later, my maths grades got better. This experience taught me that communication can help us get out of worry and find our way. Now, I feel closer to my family and more confident about my studies.
解析
【分析】
这是一道英语书面表达题，需围绕“Communication Turns Hard to Easy”主题完成征文。首先审题确定文体为记叙文，时态以一般过去时（叙述经历）为主，结合一般现在时（表达感悟），人称用第一人称。写作需遵循给定框架：开篇点明沟通的重要性；接着描述遇到的具体问题，以及通过沟通解决问题的过程；最后分享沟通带来的感悟与收获，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：文体为记叙文，时态使用一般过去时叙述经历，一般现在时表达感悟，人称以第一人称“我”为主。
2. 写作步骤：① 开篇承接已给开头，点明沟通的作用（如把难题变简单）；② 叙述经历：上个月因数学成绩差感到担忧，后决定与父母交流，告知烦恼，父母给予学习建议，共同制定学习计划；③ 结果与感悟：成绩提升，感悟沟通能帮助摆脱烦恼，拉近与家人的距离，增强学习自信。
【答案】
（1）记叙文；一般过去时和一般现在时；第一人称为主
One possible version:
Communication Turns Hard to Easy
Communication plays an important role in our daily life. It can turn hard problems into easy ones.
Last month, I felt very worried about my maths grades. I didn't do well in the exam and I often felt sad.
Then I decided to talk to my parents. I told them about my worries and problems. They listened to me carefully and gave me some useful advice on how to study maths. After that, we made a better study plan together.
A few weeks later, my maths grades got better. This experience taught me that communication can help us get out of worry and find our way. Now, I feel closer to my family and more confident about my studies.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，记叙文写作，主题英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，要点完整，叙事流畅，感悟真实，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的英语书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一道英语书面表达题，需围绕“Communication Turns Hard to Easy”主题完成征文。首先审题确定文体为记叙文，时态以一般过去时（叙述经历）为主，结合一般现在时（表达感悟），人称用第一人称。写作需遵循给定框架：开篇点明沟通的重要性；接着描述遇到的具体问题，以及通过沟通解决问题的过程；最后分享沟通带来的感悟与收获，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 审题定调：文体为记叙文，时态使用一般过去时叙述经历，一般现在时表达感悟，人称以第一人称“我”为主。
2. 写作步骤：① 开篇承接已给开头，点明沟通的作用（如把难题变简单）；② 叙述经历：上个月因数学成绩差感到担忧，后决定与父母交流，告知烦恼，父母给予学习建议，共同制定学习计划；③ 结果与感悟：成绩提升，感悟沟通能帮助摆脱烦恼，拉近与家人的距离，增强学习自信。
【答案】
（1）记叙文；一般过去时和一般现在时；第一人称为主
One possible version:
Communication Turns Hard to Easy
Communication plays an important role in our daily life. It can turn hard problems into easy ones.
Last month, I felt very worried about my maths grades. I didn't do well in the exam and I often felt sad.
Then I decided to talk to my parents. I told them about my worries and problems. They listened to me carefully and gave me some useful advice on how to study maths. After that, we made a better study plan together.
A few weeks later, my maths grades got better. This experience taught me that communication can help us get out of worry and find our way. Now, I feel closer to my family and more confident about my studies.
【知识点】
英语书面表达，记叙文写作，主题英语写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，结构清晰，要点完整，叙事流畅，感悟真实，符合征文要求，是一篇优秀的英语书面表达作品。
【难度系数】
0.5
