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八、书面表达(21分)
Teens' Talk Magazine 向中学生征集有关"环保"话题的投稿。假设你是李华,请以"Protecting the Ocean"为题,从海洋的重要性、它面临的问题以及如何保护海洋方面撰写一篇文章,呼吁人们保护海洋。
注意事项:1.短文内容须自拟,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;2.词数70左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.文中不得使用真实的个人姓名和学校名称。
Protecting the Ocean
The ocean is of great importance.
Let's work together to protect the ocean!
Teens' Talk Magazine 向中学生征集有关"环保"话题的投稿。假设你是李华,请以"Protecting the Ocean"为题,从海洋的重要性、它面临的问题以及如何保护海洋方面撰写一篇文章,呼吁人们保护海洋。
注意事项:1.短文内容须自拟,要求语句通顺,意思连贯,符合题意;2.词数70左右,文章开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;3.文中不得使用真实的个人姓名和学校名称。
Protecting the Ocean
The ocean is of great importance.
It provides us with food and helps control the climate. It is also home to many amazing animals and plants. However, the ocean is facing serious problems. Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life. Overfishing makes some fish disappear.
We must take action to protect it. We should stop throwing rubbish into the sea and use less plastic. We can also join beach clean-up activities. Everyone can do something to help.
Let's work together to protect the ocean!
答案
八、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①题材:环保类作文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:文章应围绕海洋的重要性、面临的问题以及保护措施展开,可适当发挥,确保上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明海洋的重要性;第二步,指出海洋面临的问题;第三步,提出保护海洋的措施,并呼吁大家共同保护海洋。
[词句积累]
①provide sb with sth 给某人提供某物 ②face serious problems 面临严重的问题 ③take action 采取行动
④Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life.(and连接两个并列的谓语)
⑤Overfishing makes some fish disappear.(动名词作主语;make+宾语+宾语补足语)
One possible version:
Protecting the Ocean
The ocean is of great importance. It provides us with food and helps control the climate. It is also home to many amazing animals and plants. However, the ocean is facing serious problems. Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life. Overfishing makes some fish disappear.
We must take action to protect it. We should stop throwing rubbish into the sea and use less plastic. We can also join beach clean-up activities. Everyone can do something to help.
Let's work together to protect the ocean!
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①题材:环保类作文。②时态:以一般现在时为主。③提示:文章应围绕海洋的重要性、面临的问题以及保护措施展开,可适当发挥,确保上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明海洋的重要性;第二步,指出海洋面临的问题;第三步,提出保护海洋的措施,并呼吁大家共同保护海洋。
[词句积累]
①provide sb with sth 给某人提供某物 ②face serious problems 面临严重的问题 ③take action 采取行动
④Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life.(and连接两个并列的谓语)
⑤Overfishing makes some fish disappear.(动名词作主语;make+宾语+宾语补足语)
One possible version:
Protecting the Ocean
The ocean is of great importance. It provides us with food and helps control the climate. It is also home to many amazing animals and plants. However, the ocean is facing serious problems. Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life. Overfishing makes some fish disappear.
We must take action to protect it. We should stop throwing rubbish into the sea and use less plastic. We can also join beach clean-up activities. Everyone can do something to help.
Let's work together to protect the ocean!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题为保护海洋，必须覆盖三个指定写作模块：海洋的重要性、海洋面临的问题、保护海洋的行动，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在70左右，题干已经给出首尾句不需要额外创作。我们可以顺着题干给出的逻辑箭头一步步构思：第一步先想海洋的价值，选取自己熟悉的短语来描述，比如海洋给人类提供食物、调节气候，是海洋生物的家园；第二步用转折过渡，列举身边常见的海洋污染问题，比如塑料垃圾污染、过度捕捞；第三步对应问题给出可行的解决行动，比如少用塑料、不往海里扔垃圾，最后自然衔接题干给出的结尾，全程注意语句通顺，不要使用超纲表达，保证逻辑连贯。
【解析】
我们按照三步写作法完成内容创作：
1. 承接开头句展开重要性描述：使用常用短语provide sb. with sth.，写出海洋为人类提供食物、助力调节气候，同时是大量珍稀海洋动植物的栖息地，清晰完成第一部分要点。
2. 用转折词However过渡，引出海洋现存问题：点明海洋正面临严峻危机，列举塑料垃圾污染水体、伤害海洋生物，过度捕捞导致部分鱼类消失的典型现象，完成第二部分要点。
3. 过渡到行动倡议：点明我们必须采取行动保护海洋，列举普通人可实现的措施：不向海洋丢弃垃圾、减少塑料使用、参与海滩清理活动，说明每个人都可以贡献力量，顺畅衔接题干给出的结尾句，整体内容连贯，语法正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protecting the Ocean
The ocean is of great importance. It provides us with food and helps control the climate. It is also home to many amazing animals and plants. However, the ocean is facing serious problems. Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life. Overfishing makes some fish disappear.
We must take action to protect it. We should stop throwing rubbish into the sea and use less plastic. We can also join beach clean-up activities. Everyone can do something to help.
Let's work together to protect the ocean!
【知识点】
英语主题写作，一般现在时运用，环保话题表达
【点评】
本题是初中阶段典型的提示类应用文写作，已经明确给出了三段式的写作逻辑框架，降低了构思门槛，学生只需要结合自身掌握的基础词汇，对应三个要点填充内容，做好语句衔接，规避基础语法错误就可以顺利完成写作，同时题目也能引导学生树立保护海洋的环保意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确核心要求：主题为保护海洋，必须覆盖三个指定写作模块：海洋的重要性、海洋面临的问题、保护海洋的行动，时态以一般现在时为主，词数控制在70左右，题干已经给出首尾句不需要额外创作。我们可以顺着题干给出的逻辑箭头一步步构思：第一步先想海洋的价值，选取自己熟悉的短语来描述，比如海洋给人类提供食物、调节气候，是海洋生物的家园；第二步用转折过渡，列举身边常见的海洋污染问题，比如塑料垃圾污染、过度捕捞；第三步对应问题给出可行的解决行动，比如少用塑料、不往海里扔垃圾，最后自然衔接题干给出的结尾，全程注意语句通顺，不要使用超纲表达，保证逻辑连贯。
【解析】
我们按照三步写作法完成内容创作：
1. 承接开头句展开重要性描述：使用常用短语provide sb. with sth.，写出海洋为人类提供食物、助力调节气候，同时是大量珍稀海洋动植物的栖息地，清晰完成第一部分要点。
2. 用转折词However过渡，引出海洋现存问题：点明海洋正面临严峻危机，列举塑料垃圾污染水体、伤害海洋生物，过度捕捞导致部分鱼类消失的典型现象，完成第二部分要点。
3. 过渡到行动倡议：点明我们必须采取行动保护海洋，列举普通人可实现的措施：不向海洋丢弃垃圾、减少塑料使用、参与海滩清理活动，说明每个人都可以贡献力量，顺畅衔接题干给出的结尾句，整体内容连贯，语法正确，词数符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Protecting the Ocean
The ocean is of great importance. It provides us with food and helps control the climate. It is also home to many amazing animals and plants. However, the ocean is facing serious problems. Plastic waste pollutes the water and harms sea life. Overfishing makes some fish disappear.
We must take action to protect it. We should stop throwing rubbish into the sea and use less plastic. We can also join beach clean-up activities. Everyone can do something to help.
Let's work together to protect the ocean!
【知识点】
英语主题写作，一般现在时运用，环保话题表达
【点评】
本题是初中阶段典型的提示类应用文写作，已经明确给出了三段式的写作逻辑框架，降低了构思门槛，学生只需要结合自身掌握的基础词汇，对应三个要点填充内容，做好语句衔接，规避基础语法错误就可以顺利完成写作，同时题目也能引导学生树立保护海洋的环保意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
