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四、书面表达
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友Frank给你写了一封电子邮件,询问你的一些个人信息。请你根据以下要点提示和写作要求,用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示:
1.你喜欢的运动和食物;
2.你喜欢的动物及对动物的看法。
写作要求:
1.短文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Frank,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to tell you something about myself.
Yours,
Li Ming
假如你是李明,你的美国朋友Frank给你写了一封电子邮件,询问你的一些个人信息。请你根据以下要点提示和写作要求,用英语给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示:
1.你喜欢的运动和食物;
2.你喜欢的动物及对动物的看法。
写作要求:
1.短文应包含以上所有要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息;
3.词数70左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Frank,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to tell you something about myself.
Yours,
Li Ming
答案
One possible version:
Dear Frank,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to tell you something about myself.
In my free time, I like to play ping-pong with my friend. We play it in the gym three times a week. Sometimes I jog on the sports field. I think exercising is good for both my body and my mind. Besides exercise, I also have healthy eating habits. I often eat baozi, porridge and an apple for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I'd like all kinds of meat like beef, mutton, pork and fish with vegetables. All these give me enough energy to focus on my study.
When I am free at weekends, I like watching animals in the zoo. I like white whales, and I think they are clever. But now many animals are in danger, so I think we should try to save them.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
Dear Frank,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to tell you something about myself.
In my free time, I like to play ping-pong with my friend. We play it in the gym three times a week. Sometimes I jog on the sports field. I think exercising is good for both my body and my mind. Besides exercise, I also have healthy eating habits. I often eat baozi, porridge and an apple for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I'd like all kinds of meat like beef, mutton, pork and fish with vegetables. All these give me enough energy to focus on my study.
When I am free at weekends, I like watching animals in the zoo. I like white whales, and I think they are clever. But now many animals are in danger, so I think we should try to save them.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
解析
【分析】
本题是一封给美国朋友Frank的回信，需围绕两个核心要点（喜欢的运动和食物、喜欢的动物及看法）完成写作。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先介绍个人喜欢的运动，补充运动的频率和好处；2. 接着介绍喜欢的食物，体现健康的饮食习惯；3. 再介绍喜欢的动物，表达对动物的看法，可适当加入保护动物的想法；4. 补充合适的结尾，确保覆盖所有要点、词数符合要求，语言通顺无真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接内容；2. 第一部分写运动：用“like to play ping-pong”等表达，说明运动频率和对身心的益处；3. 第二部分写食物：以“healthy eating habits”引出，举例早中晚餐的食物；4. 第三部分写动物：说明喜欢的动物（如白鲸），表达其聪明的特点，再加入保护濒危动物的观点；5. 最后添加结尾“Best wishes.”，确保所有要点覆盖，词数约70，语言自然流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Frank,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to tell you something about myself.
In my free time, I like to play ping-pong with my friend. We play it in the gym three times a week. Sometimes I jog on the sports field. I think exercising is good for both my body and my mind. Besides exercise, I also have healthy eating habits. I often eat baozi, porridge and an apple for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I'd like all kinds of meat like beef, mutton, pork and fish with vegetables. All these give me enough energy to focus on my study.
When I am free at weekends, I like watching animals in the zoo. I like white whales, and I think they are clever. But now many animals are in danger, so I think we should try to save them.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作，要点式书面表达，日常话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题为英语书信写作题，贴近学生日常交流场景，要求明确，考查学生整合信息、组织语言的能力，需涵盖所有给定要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题是一封给美国朋友Frank的回信，需围绕两个核心要点（喜欢的运动和食物、喜欢的动物及看法）完成写作。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先介绍个人喜欢的运动，补充运动的频率和好处；2. 接着介绍喜欢的食物，体现健康的饮食习惯；3. 再介绍喜欢的动物，表达对动物的看法，可适当加入保护动物的想法；4. 补充合适的结尾，确保覆盖所有要点、词数符合要求，语言通顺无真实信息。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头已给出，直接衔接内容；2. 第一部分写运动：用“like to play ping-pong”等表达，说明运动频率和对身心的益处；3. 第二部分写食物：以“healthy eating habits”引出，举例早中晚餐的食物；4. 第三部分写动物：说明喜欢的动物（如白鲸），表达其聪明的特点，再加入保护濒危动物的观点；5. 最后添加结尾“Best wishes.”，确保所有要点覆盖，词数约70，语言自然流畅。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Frank,
Thanks for your email. I'm happy to tell you something about myself.
In my free time, I like to play ping-pong with my friend. We play it in the gym three times a week. Sometimes I jog on the sports field. I think exercising is good for both my body and my mind. Besides exercise, I also have healthy eating habits. I often eat baozi, porridge and an apple for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I'd like all kinds of meat like beef, mutton, pork and fish with vegetables. All these give me enough energy to focus on my study.
When I am free at weekends, I like watching animals in the zoo. I like white whales, and I think they are clever. But now many animals are in danger, so I think we should try to save them.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Ming
【知识点】
英语书信写作，要点式书面表达，日常话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题为英语书信写作题，贴近学生日常交流场景，要求明确，考查学生整合信息、组织语言的能力，需涵盖所有给定要点并适当拓展，符合初中英语写作的考查要求，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.5
