学校里有一间Grief Grocery Store(解忧杂货铺),店长负责为同学们解决平时学习与生活中的小烦恼。假设你是店长Jim,请就以下来信写一封回信,说一说你的想法并提出建议,帮助这位同学解决问题。
Hi Jim,
I'm Jack. I'm in trouble these days. When I turn on the computer, I can't stop myself from playing computer games. As a result, I feel sleepy in class. My parents are angry. I want to make a change. What should I do?
Yours,
Jack
要求:(1)词数80左右,开头、结尾已给出,不计入总词数；
(2)文章中不能出现真实姓名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Jack,
I'm very glad to receive your email.

Yours,
Jim

写作专练
三、One possible version:
Dear Jack,
I'm very glad to receive your email.
We all face the same problem—when we
turn on the computer and start a game, we
think we will have a little fun, and then we
sit there and look at the screen, and we
forget about the time. To solve your
problem, here is my advice.
First, it is necessary for you to ask
your parents for help. When you need to use
the computer, tell your parents how much
time the task may take and ask them to
remind you when your time is up. Second,
what about doing something else to have
fun? Next time, when you want to play
computer games, you can try reading a
book, doing some exercise or talking to a
friend. I am sure you will find these
activities as fun as computer games.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Jim

【分析】
首先明确来信核心问题：Jack沉迷电脑游戏导致上课犯困、父母生气，想要改变，需给出合理建议。解题思路：1. 承接给定开头，先共情（点明沉迷游戏是普遍问题，理解Jack的困扰）；2. 给出具体可行的建议（找父母监督电脑使用时间、转移兴趣到其他活动）；3. 衔接给定结尾，表达鼓励，同时注意词数要求（80左右），不出现真实信息。
【解析】
按照书信结构写作：1. 开头承接给定内容，先共情：We all face the same problem—when we turn on the computer and start a game, we think we will have a little fun, and then we sit there and look at the screen, and we forget about the time. 2. 给出第一条建议：向父母求助，约定电脑使用时长，到点提醒：First, it is necessary for you to ask your parents for help. When you need to use the computer, tell your parents how much time the task may take and ask them to remind you when your time is up. 3. 给出第二条建议：转移兴趣，想玩游戏时换成读书、运动或和朋友交流：Second, what about doing something else to have fun? Next time, when you want to play computer games, you can try reading a book, doing some exercise or talking to a friend. 4. 衔接给定结尾，表达鼓励：I hope my suggestions can help you. 总词数符合要求，结构清晰，建议合理。
【答案】
Dear Jack,
I'm very glad to receive your email.
We all face the same problem—when we turn on the computer and start a game, we think we will have a little fun, and then we sit there and look at the screen, and we forget about the time. To solve your problem, here is my advice.
First, it is necessary for you to ask your parents for help. When you need to use the computer, tell your parents how much time the task may take and ask them to remind you when your time is up. Second, what about doing something else to have fun? Next time, when you want to play computer games, you can try reading a book, doing some exercise or talking to a friend. I am sure you will find these activities as fun as computer games.
I hope my suggestions can help you.
Yours,
Jim
【知识点】
英语书信写作、建议表达、话题词汇运用
【点评】
本题贴近学生日常学习生活，考查英语应用文写作能力，要求结构完整、建议具体可行，语言难度适中，能有效考查学生的语言运用和解决实际问题的能力。
【难度系数】
0.5