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任务二:请对课文和语篇中的佳句进行仿写。
1. 课文佳句:The world was made much smaller by the radio.
仿写:第一部电话于1876年被发明出来。
2. 课文佳句:To solve the problem of heavier-than-air flight,the Wright brothers began working with gliders.
仿写:为了更快地旅行,人们一次又一次地改进火车。
3. 语篇佳句:The fridge is one of the most useful inventions in daily life.
仿写:造纸术是中国古代最伟大的发明之一。
1. 课文佳句:The world was made much smaller by the radio.
仿写:第一部电话于1876年被发明出来。
The first telephone was invented in 1876.
2. 课文佳句:To solve the problem of heavier-than-air flight,the Wright brothers began working with gliders.
仿写:为了更快地旅行,人们一次又一次地改进火车。
To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again.
3. 语篇佳句:The fridge is one of the most useful inventions in daily life.
仿写:造纸术是中国古代最伟大的发明之一。
Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China.
答案
1. The first telephone was invented in 1876.
2. To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again.
3. Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China.
2. To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again.
3. Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China.
解析
【分析】
本题考查英语句子仿写，需先拆解原句的句式结构、语法形式及固定表达，再将仿写内容对应替换到原结构中：1. 第一题原句为一般过去时的被动语态，仿写需对应“主语+被动结构+时间状语”的结构；2. 第二题原句用动词不定式作目的状语，仿写需对应“目的状语+主句（主谓宾）+重复状语”的结构；3. 第三题原句为“one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数+范围”的结构，仿写需对应替换主语和范围内容。
【解析】
1. 第一题：原句是一般过去时被动语态，“第一部电话”译为The first telephone，“被发明”用一般过去时被动结构was invented，“1876年”译为in 1876，组合得The first telephone was invented in 1876。
2. 第二题：原句用To do作目的状语，“为了更快地旅行”译为To travel faster，“人们改进火车”译为people have improved trains，“一次又一次”译为over and over again，组合得To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again。
3. 第三题：原句是“one of the +形容词最高级+名词+范围”结构，“造纸术”译为Papermaking，“中国古代最伟大的发明之一”译为one of the greatest inventions in ancient China，组合得Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China。
【答案】
1. The first telephone was invented in 1876.
2. To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again.
3. Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China.
【知识点】
英语被动语态、动词不定式作目的状语、形容词最高级的用法
【点评】
本题为基础英语仿写题，重点考查学生对原句句式结构、语法形式的掌握，只需对应原结构替换核心内容即可完成，是巩固英语句式运用的常见题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题考查英语句子仿写，需先拆解原句的句式结构、语法形式及固定表达，再将仿写内容对应替换到原结构中：1. 第一题原句为一般过去时的被动语态，仿写需对应“主语+被动结构+时间状语”的结构；2. 第二题原句用动词不定式作目的状语，仿写需对应“目的状语+主句（主谓宾）+重复状语”的结构；3. 第三题原句为“one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数+范围”的结构，仿写需对应替换主语和范围内容。
【解析】
1. 第一题：原句是一般过去时被动语态，“第一部电话”译为The first telephone，“被发明”用一般过去时被动结构was invented，“1876年”译为in 1876，组合得The first telephone was invented in 1876。
2. 第二题：原句用To do作目的状语，“为了更快地旅行”译为To travel faster，“人们改进火车”译为people have improved trains，“一次又一次”译为over and over again，组合得To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again。
3. 第三题：原句是“one of the +形容词最高级+名词+范围”结构，“造纸术”译为Papermaking，“中国古代最伟大的发明之一”译为one of the greatest inventions in ancient China，组合得Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China。
【答案】
1. The first telephone was invented in 1876.
2. To travel faster, people have improved trains over and over again.
3. Papermaking is one of the greatest inventions in ancient China.
【知识点】
英语被动语态、动词不定式作目的状语、形容词最高级的用法
【点评】
本题为基础英语仿写题，重点考查学生对原句句式结构、语法形式的掌握，只需对应原结构替换核心内容即可完成，是巩固英语句式运用的常见题型，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.6
写作典范 人称:第一人称
假设你是李华,你校英文报社新增了关于项目式学习的专栏,你所在小组刚完成的项目是“设计飞行自行车”。请你代表小组用英语写一篇100词左右的短文向专栏投稿,介绍你们的设计。
主题:介绍“飞行自行车” 体裁:说明文
时态:一般过去时、一般现在时
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
[写作提纲]
[范文展示]
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
Our flying bike is an amazing invention. ①It can travel rapidly and is powered by solar power, so it's good for the environment. To keep it light and strong, we use carbon fiber as its body. You just need to press a button to make it start flying.
②During the project, we met some difficulties. The biggest one was safety. We solved this by designing a new type of wheel and a balanced glider. Also, choosing the right material was hard. But carbon fiber was finally chosen after many tests.
③From this project, we learned the importance of teamwork. Each of us was responsible for a certain job. Our ability to solve problems improved as well.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
[名师点评]
①介绍时紧扣产品特点,表达简洁清晰,体现了良好的说明文写作逻辑。
②围绕“困难——解决”展开叙述,问题具体,解决方式明确,过程完整。
③从团队合作与个人成长两方面总结收获,并自然过渡到未来展望,使文章主题得到升华。
假设你是李华,你校英文报社新增了关于项目式学习的专栏,你所在小组刚完成的项目是“设计飞行自行车”。请你代表小组用英语写一篇100词左右的短文向专栏投稿,介绍你们的设计。
主题:介绍“飞行自行车” 体裁:说明文
时态:一般过去时、一般现在时
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
[写作提纲]
[范文展示]
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
Our flying bike is an amazing invention. ①It can travel rapidly and is powered by solar power, so it's good for the environment. To keep it light and strong, we use carbon fiber as its body. You just need to press a button to make it start flying.
②During the project, we met some difficulties. The biggest one was safety. We solved this by designing a new type of wheel and a balanced glider. Also, choosing the right material was hard. But carbon fiber was finally chosen after many tests.
③From this project, we learned the importance of teamwork. Each of us was responsible for a certain job. Our ability to solve problems improved as well.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
[名师点评]
①介绍时紧扣产品特点,表达简洁清晰,体现了良好的说明文写作逻辑。
②围绕“困难——解决”展开叙述,问题具体,解决方式明确,过程完整。
③从团队合作与个人成长两方面总结收获,并自然过渡到未来展望,使文章主题得到升华。
答案
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
Our flying bike is an amazing invention. It can travel rapidly and is powered by solar power, so it's good for the environment. To keep it light and strong, we use carbon fiber as its body. You just need to press a button to make it start flying.
During the project, we met some difficulties. The biggest one was safety. We solved this by designing a new type of wheel and a balanced glider. Also, choosing the right material was hard. But carbon fiber was finally chosen after many tests.
From this project, we learned the importance of teamwork. Each of us was responsible for a certain job. Our ability to solve problems improved as well.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
Our flying bike is an amazing invention. It can travel rapidly and is powered by solar power, so it's good for the environment. To keep it light and strong, we use carbon fiber as its body. You just need to press a button to make it start flying.
During the project, we met some difficulties. The biggest one was safety. We solved this by designing a new type of wheel and a balanced glider. Also, choosing the right material was hard. But carbon fiber was finally chosen after many tests.
From this project, we learned the importance of teamwork. Each of us was responsible for a certain job. Our ability to solve problems improved as well.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作要求：人称用第一人称（李华），体裁为说明文，主题是介绍“飞行自行车”，时态结合一般过去时（项目过程）和一般现在时（产品特点）。写作思路为：1. 开头点明投稿目的（分享小组项目）；2. 介绍飞行自行车的核心特点（动力、材质、操作方式）；3. 简述项目中遇到的困难及解决方法；4. 总结项目收获（团队合作、问题解决能力）；5. 结尾展望未来优化方向，控制词数在100词左右。
【解析】
按照写作思路分步完成：1. 开头直接引入，说明身份和投稿主题；2. 产品介绍部分，紧扣“环保、轻便坚固、易操作”的特点，用一般现在时描述；3. 项目过程部分，用一般过去时讲述遇到的安全、材料选择困难及解决办法；4. 收获部分，点明团队合作的重要性及个人能力提升；5. 结尾呼应开头，表达未来优化的期望，确保内容连贯、逻辑清晰，符合专栏投稿的语境。
【答案】
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
Our flying bike is an amazing invention. It can travel rapidly and is powered by solar power, so it's good for the environment. To keep it light and strong, we use carbon fiber as its body. You just need to press a button to make it start flying.
During the project, we met some difficulties. The biggest one was safety. We solved this by designing a new type of wheel and a balanced glider. Also, choosing the right material was hard. But carbon fiber was finally chosen after many tests.
From this project, we learned the importance of teamwork. Each of us was responsible for a certain job. Our ability to solve problems improved as well.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语说明文写作、英语时态运用
【点评】
范文结构完整，逻辑连贯，紧扣“飞行自行车”主题，既清晰介绍了产品特点，又完整呈现了项目过程中的困难与解决方法，还升华了团队收获的主题，语言简洁流畅，符合专栏投稿的要求，词数控制合理。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作要求：人称用第一人称（李华），体裁为说明文，主题是介绍“飞行自行车”，时态结合一般过去时（项目过程）和一般现在时（产品特点）。写作思路为：1. 开头点明投稿目的（分享小组项目）；2. 介绍飞行自行车的核心特点（动力、材质、操作方式）；3. 简述项目中遇到的困难及解决方法；4. 总结项目收获（团队合作、问题解决能力）；5. 结尾展望未来优化方向，控制词数在100词左右。
【解析】
按照写作思路分步完成：1. 开头直接引入，说明身份和投稿主题；2. 产品介绍部分，紧扣“环保、轻便坚固、易操作”的特点，用一般现在时描述；3. 项目过程部分，用一般过去时讲述遇到的安全、材料选择困难及解决办法；4. 收获部分，点明团队合作的重要性及个人能力提升；5. 结尾呼应开头，表达未来优化的期望，确保内容连贯、逻辑清晰，符合专栏投稿的语境。
【答案】
The Flying Bike Project
I am Li Hua. I'm glad to share our group's project on designing a flying bike.
Our flying bike is an amazing invention. It can travel rapidly and is powered by solar power, so it's good for the environment. To keep it light and strong, we use carbon fiber as its body. You just need to press a button to make it start flying.
During the project, we met some difficulties. The biggest one was safety. We solved this by designing a new type of wheel and a balanced glider. Also, choosing the right material was hard. But carbon fiber was finally chosen after many tests.
From this project, we learned the importance of teamwork. Each of us was responsible for a certain job. Our ability to solve problems improved as well.
We have learned a lot and are now looking to make our design even better in the future.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、英语说明文写作、英语时态运用
【点评】
范文结构完整，逻辑连贯，紧扣“飞行自行车”主题，既清晰介绍了产品特点，又完整呈现了项目过程中的困难与解决方法，还升华了团队收获的主题，语言简洁流畅，符合专栏投稿的要求，词数控制合理。
【难度系数】
0.6
