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时光飞逝,回想初入校园的青涩模样,再看如今成长蜕变后的自己,你一定感慨万千。假设你是李华,请写一篇英语演讲稿,投稿学校英语专栏“This is me”。内容要求:介绍个人外表、性格、特长和喜好等方面的现状及变化,体现个人成长。
写作要求: 1. 词数:80—100 (开头不计入总词数);2. 适当进行拓展;3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
审题指导
1. 体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架
优秀范文:
亮点词块
①in many ways 在很多方面
②first of all 首先
③used to be 过去是
④in addition 此外
⑤be interested in 对……感兴趣
高分句子
⑥I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.(宾语从句)我觉得这个新爱好让我的生活变得更加丰富多彩了。
时光飞逝,回想初入校园的青涩模样,再看如今成长蜕变后的自己,你一定感慨万千。假设你是李华,请写一篇英语演讲稿,投稿学校英语专栏“This is me”。内容要求:介绍个人外表、性格、特长和喜好等方面的现状及变化,体现个人成长。
写作要求: 1. 词数:80—100 (开头不计入总词数);2. 适当进行拓展;3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称。
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua.
审题指导
1. 体裁:应用文 2.时态:以一般现在时为主 3.人称:第一人称
写作框架
优秀范文:
亮点词块
①in many ways 在很多方面
②first of all 首先
③used to be 过去是
④in addition 此外
⑤be interested in 对……感兴趣
高分句子
⑥I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.(宾语从句)我觉得这个新爱好让我的生活变得更加丰富多彩了。
答案
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Over the past few years, I have changed a lot in many ways.
First of all, I used to be short and thin, but now I am taller and stronger. In addition, my personality has changed too. I used to be shy and quiet. However, now I am more confident and outgoing and I am also more hard-working than before. As for my hobby, I used to only play computer games. Now, I am more interested in playing basketball. I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.
I will continue to improve myself in the future.
First of all, I used to be short and thin, but now I am taller and stronger. In addition, my personality has changed too. I used to be shy and quiet. However, now I am more confident and outgoing and I am also more hard-working than before. As for my hobby, I used to only play computer games. Now, I am more interested in playing basketball. I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.
I will continue to improve myself in the future.
解析
【分析】本题为英语应用文写作题，要求以李华的身份写英语演讲稿投稿学校英语专栏“This is me”，需围绕“成长蜕变”主题，涵盖个人外表、性格、特长喜好的现状及变化，时态以一般现在时为主、人称用第一人称。解题思路：先总述自身多方面的变化，再借助给定的逻辑词（first of all、in addition）分点对比外表、性格、爱好的过去与现在，最后用指定高分句子收尾，确保符合词数要求、不出现真实信息，运用给定亮点词块提升表达效果。
【解析】写作时，先承接给定开头，总起自身变化：“Over the past few years, I have changed a lot in many ways.”；接着用first of all对比外表的过去与现在：“I used to be short and thin, but now I am taller and stronger.”；再用in addition阐述性格的变化：“I used to be shy and quiet. However, now I am more confident and outgoing and I am also more hard-working than before.”；然后说明爱好的转变：“I used to only play computer games. Now, I am more interested in playing basketball.”；最后运用指定高分句子“I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.”，再加一句未来展望“I will continue to improve myself in the future.”，确保词数在80—100之间，符合写作要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Over the past few years, I have changed a lot in many ways.
First of all, I used to be short and thin, but now I am taller and stronger. In addition, my personality has changed too. I used to be shy and quiet. However, now I am more confident and outgoing and I am also more hard-working than before. As for my hobby, I used to only play computer games. Now, I am more interested in playing basketball. I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.
I will continue to improve myself in the future.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语演讲稿写作，英语时态运用
【点评】本题聚焦校园成长主题，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求运用指定词块和句式，结构清晰，符合校园专栏投稿的规范，是典型的英语写作训练题，能有效提升学生的话题拓展与规范表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作时，先承接给定开头，总起自身变化：“Over the past few years, I have changed a lot in many ways.”；接着用first of all对比外表的过去与现在：“I used to be short and thin, but now I am taller and stronger.”；再用in addition阐述性格的变化：“I used to be shy and quiet. However, now I am more confident and outgoing and I am also more hard-working than before.”；然后说明爱好的转变：“I used to only play computer games. Now, I am more interested in playing basketball.”；最后运用指定高分句子“I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.”，再加一句未来展望“I will continue to improve myself in the future.”，确保词数在80—100之间，符合写作要求。
【答案】Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Over the past few years, I have changed a lot in many ways.
First of all, I used to be short and thin, but now I am taller and stronger. In addition, my personality has changed too. I used to be shy and quiet. However, now I am more confident and outgoing and I am also more hard-working than before. As for my hobby, I used to only play computer games. Now, I am more interested in playing basketball. I think this new hobby makes my life more colourful.
I will continue to improve myself in the future.
【知识点】英语应用文写作，英语演讲稿写作，英语时态运用
【点评】本题聚焦校园成长主题，考查学生的英语应用文写作能力，要求运用指定词块和句式，结构清晰，符合校园专栏投稿的规范，是典型的英语写作训练题，能有效提升学生的话题拓展与规范表达能力。
【难度系数】0.5
