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假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Lisa对中国歌曲很感兴趣,想请你推荐一首你最喜欢的中国歌曲。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一封80词左右的回信,介绍这首歌,并谈谈你对它的感受。
提示:1. What is the name of the song? 2. How does it sound? (e. g., sweet, soft, energetic, moving) 3. How does it make you feel? 4. Why do you like it?
提示:1. What is the name of the song? 2. How does it sound? (e. g., sweet, soft, energetic, moving) 3. How does it make you feel? 4. Why do you like it?
答案
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to know you are interested in Chinese songs. My favorite Chinese song is *Jasmine Flower*. It sounds soft and sweet, and its beautiful melody is very classic.
Whenever I listen to it, I feel peaceful and relaxed. I like it not only because its lyrics are lovely, but also it is a symbol of Chinese traditional folk music. I hope you will enjoy it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm glad to know you are interested in Chinese songs. My favorite Chinese song is *Jasmine Flower*. It sounds soft and sweet, and its beautiful melody is very classic.
Whenever I listen to it, I feel peaceful and relaxed. I like it not only because its lyrics are lovely, but also it is a symbol of Chinese traditional folk music. I hope you will enjoy it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语应用文写作任务，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Lisa写回信，需围绕“推荐最喜欢的中国歌曲”主题，涵盖歌曲名称、曲风特点、个人聆听感受、喜欢的原因四个要点，词数约80，同时符合英文书信格式规范，语言需自然得体，贴合中学生表达水平。
【解析】
1. 遵循英文书信格式：开头用称呼Dear Lisa，结尾用Yours, Li Hua；
2. 紧扣提示要点组织内容：先点明很高兴Lisa对中国歌曲感兴趣，接着介绍最喜欢的歌曲是《Jasmine Flower》，描述其曲风为soft and sweet、旋律经典；再说明聆听感受是peaceful and relaxed，喜欢的原因是歌词可爱且是中国传统民间音乐的象征；最后表达希望Lisa喜欢这首歌，控制词数在80左右，确保语句通顺。
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to know you are interested in Chinese songs. My favorite Chinese song is *Jasmine Flower*. It sounds soft and sweet, and its beautiful melody is very classic.
Whenever I listen to it, I feel peaceful and relaxed. I like it not only because its lyrics are lovely, but also it is a symbol of Chinese traditional folk music. I hope you will enjoy it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题类英语写作、中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本题将英语写作与中国文化相结合，既考查学生对英文书信格式的掌握，又要求学生围绕主题组织要点、表达个人感受，兼顾语言运用能力和文化意识的考查，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语应用文写作任务，要求以李华的身份给英国笔友Lisa写回信，需围绕“推荐最喜欢的中国歌曲”主题，涵盖歌曲名称、曲风特点、个人聆听感受、喜欢的原因四个要点，词数约80，同时符合英文书信格式规范，语言需自然得体，贴合中学生表达水平。
【解析】
1. 遵循英文书信格式：开头用称呼Dear Lisa，结尾用Yours, Li Hua；
2. 紧扣提示要点组织内容：先点明很高兴Lisa对中国歌曲感兴趣，接着介绍最喜欢的歌曲是《Jasmine Flower》，描述其曲风为soft and sweet、旋律经典；再说明聆听感受是peaceful and relaxed，喜欢的原因是歌词可爱且是中国传统民间音乐的象征；最后表达希望Lisa喜欢这首歌，控制词数在80左右，确保语句通顺。
【答案】
Dear Lisa,
I'm glad to know you are interested in Chinese songs. My favorite Chinese song is *Jasmine Flower*. It sounds soft and sweet, and its beautiful melody is very classic.
Whenever I listen to it, I feel peaceful and relaxed. I like it not only because its lyrics are lovely, but also it is a symbol of Chinese traditional folk music. I hope you will enjoy it too.
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书信写作、话题类英语写作、中国文化英语表达
【点评】
本题将英语写作与中国文化相结合，既考查学生对英文书信格式的掌握，又要求学生围绕主题组织要点、表达个人感受，兼顾语言运用能力和文化意识的考查，是常见的英语写作题型。
【难度系数】
0.6
①开篇以“I'm excited to recommend a piece of Chinese music that I truly love”直接点明推荐主题，简洁明了，符合书信交际功能。
②用sweet、sad、moving、emotional等形容词精准表达对歌曲的感受，用词贴切且富有感染力。
③用combines instruments、creates a unique sound、reflects the beauty of traditional Chinese culture等短语生动展现了歌曲的特点，表达地道，体现了对音乐的理解与欣赏。
④结尾用“let it take you on a journey into Chinese music”呼应主题，升华音乐的文化交流价值，富有感染力。
[范文评析]
1. 总评:范文契合“推荐中国音乐”的主题,清晰地回应了题目中关于“歌曲名称、音乐特点、个人感受、推荐理由”的所有提示,情感真挚,传递了分享中国音乐的热情。
2. 结构布局:范文采用“开篇点明推荐曲目→正文阐述音乐特点与个人感受→结尾表达祝愿并发出邀请”的三段式结构,逻辑清晰,层次分明。
写作实践
假如你是李华,你的交换生好友Emily一直很喜欢中国古典音乐。下周你校将举办一场中国古典音乐会,请你根据以下提示,用英语给她写一封邮件,邀请她一起参加。
提示:1. When and where will the concert be held? 2. What pieces will be performed? (e. g., Butterfly Lovers, Horse Racing) 3. Why do you think Emily will enjoy it? 4. What can you learn from the concert?
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
Yours,
Li Hua
②用sweet、sad、moving、emotional等形容词精准表达对歌曲的感受，用词贴切且富有感染力。
③用combines instruments、creates a unique sound、reflects the beauty of traditional Chinese culture等短语生动展现了歌曲的特点，表达地道，体现了对音乐的理解与欣赏。
④结尾用“let it take you on a journey into Chinese music”呼应主题，升华音乐的文化交流价值，富有感染力。
[范文评析]
1. 总评:范文契合“推荐中国音乐”的主题,清晰地回应了题目中关于“歌曲名称、音乐特点、个人感受、推荐理由”的所有提示,情感真挚,传递了分享中国音乐的热情。
2. 结构布局:范文采用“开篇点明推荐曲目→正文阐述音乐特点与个人感受→结尾表达祝愿并发出邀请”的三段式结构,逻辑清晰,层次分明。
写作实践
假如你是李华,你的交换生好友Emily一直很喜欢中国古典音乐。下周你校将举办一场中国古典音乐会,请你根据以下提示,用英语给她写一封邮件,邀请她一起参加。
提示:1. When and where will the concert be held? 2. What pieces will be performed? (e. g., Butterfly Lovers, Horse Racing) 3. Why do you think Emily will enjoy it? 4. What can you learn from the concert?
注意:1. 词数80左右;2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3. 邮件开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will start at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall.
There will be some famous pieces, such as Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing.
The music is played with traditional instruments like the erhu and the pipa.
It sounds beautiful and moving. I know you enjoy Chinese classical music, so this is a great chance for you to enjoy it live.
I think we can learn more about Chinese culture from the concert.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
标准提分版：
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will start at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall. There will be some famous pieces, such as Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing. The music is played with traditional instruments like the erhu and the pipa. It sounds beautiful and moving. I know you enjoy Chinese classical music, so this is a great chance for you to enjoy it live. I think we can learn more about Chinese culture from the concert.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶优化版：
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will begin at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall. Some wonderful pieces which tell beautiful stories will be performed, including Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing. The musicians will play traditional instruments like the erhu and pipa, which create a unique and moving sound.
I'm sure you will enjoy it because the music is full of energy and touches the heart. This concert is more than just music. It helps us understand Chinese culture better and communicate feelings without words.
Let me know if you'd like to go with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will start at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall. There will be some famous pieces, such as Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing. The music is played with traditional instruments like the erhu and the pipa. It sounds beautiful and moving. I know you enjoy Chinese classical music, so this is a great chance for you to enjoy it live. I think we can learn more about Chinese culture from the concert.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
进阶优化版：
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will begin at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall. Some wonderful pieces which tell beautiful stories will be performed, including Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing. The musicians will play traditional instruments like the erhu and pipa, which create a unique and moving sound.
I'm sure you will enjoy it because the music is full of energy and touches the heart. This concert is more than just music. It helps us understand Chinese culture better and communicate feelings without words.
Let me know if you'd like to go with me!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题为英语邀请信写作题，要求以李华的身份给喜欢中国古典音乐的交换生Emily写邮件，邀请她参加学校的中国古典音乐会。解题思路：① 沿用已给出的邮件开篇，正文需依次补充四个核心要点：音乐会的时间与地点、演奏的曲目、Emily会喜欢这场音乐会的原因、能从音乐会收获的内容；② 补充符合书信语气的结尾句，使邮件结构完整；③ 用词贴合中国古典音乐的特点，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 正文先明确音乐会的具体信息：时间为下周五晚7点，地点在学校音乐厅；2. 列出演奏曲目（如《梁祝》《赛马》），说明使用二胡、琵琶等传统乐器，体现中国古典音乐特色；3. 结合Emily喜欢中国古典音乐的特点，说明这是她现场欣赏的好机会；4. 点明能从音乐会深入了解中国文化，最后补充询问是否愿意参加的语句，使邮件完整。
【答案】
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will start at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall. There will be some famous pieces, such as Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing. The music is played with traditional instruments like the erhu and the pipa. It sounds beautiful and moving. I know you enjoy Chinese classical music, so this is a great chance for you to enjoy it live. I think we can learn more about Chinese culture from the concert.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作、中国古典音乐英语表达、英语邮件格式
【点评】
本题围绕邀请参加中国古典音乐会展开，要求覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言贴合主题，能有效考察学生的英语写作综合能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
本题为英语邀请信写作题，要求以李华的身份给喜欢中国古典音乐的交换生Emily写邮件，邀请她参加学校的中国古典音乐会。解题思路：① 沿用已给出的邮件开篇，正文需依次补充四个核心要点：音乐会的时间与地点、演奏的曲目、Emily会喜欢这场音乐会的原因、能从音乐会收获的内容；② 补充符合书信语气的结尾句，使邮件结构完整；③ 用词贴合中国古典音乐的特点，语言连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 正文先明确音乐会的具体信息：时间为下周五晚7点，地点在学校音乐厅；2. 列出演奏曲目（如《梁祝》《赛马》），说明使用二胡、琵琶等传统乐器，体现中国古典音乐特色；3. 结合Emily喜欢中国古典音乐的特点，说明这是她现场欣赏的好机会；4. 点明能从音乐会深入了解中国文化，最后补充询问是否愿意参加的语句，使邮件完整。
【答案】
Dear Emily,
How's everything going? Next Friday, our school will hold a concert and I'd like to invite you to join me.
The concert will start at 7:00 p.m. in the School Concert Hall. There will be some famous pieces, such as Butterfly Lovers and Horse Racing. The music is played with traditional instruments like the erhu and the pipa. It sounds beautiful and moving. I know you enjoy Chinese classical music, so this is a great chance for you to enjoy it live. I think we can learn more about Chinese culture from the concert.
Looking forward to your reply!
Yours,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语邀请信写作、中国古典音乐英语表达、英语邮件格式
【点评】
本题围绕邀请参加中国古典音乐会展开，要求覆盖所有提示要点，结构清晰，语言贴合主题，能有效考察学生的英语写作综合能力，符合初中英语写作的考查要求。
【难度系数】
0.6
