写作指导
1. 写作任务
假设今天是星期天,你的父母带你去公园玩。公园里有很多人,有些孩子在游船上,有些老人在打太极(Tai Chi),有些人在慢跑,一个男孩在画画,有些女孩穿着汉服在拍照……
请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文,描述一下公园里的情景。
要求:
(1)条理清晰,意思连贯。
(2)语句通顺,书写规范。
(3)包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,60个词左右。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题
体裁:
人称:
时态:
第二步:列提纲

第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)It is today. 今天是星期天。
(2)My family are all . 我的家人都在家。
(3)The air is and the sunshine is . 空气清新,阳光明媚。
(4)I'm with . 我和我的父母在公园里。
(5)There are a lot of people . 公园里有很多人。
(6)Let's see at the moment. 让我们来看看此刻他们正在做什么。
中间句:
(1)Jim is . 吉姆正在做他的家庭作业。
(2)Is she ? 她正在画一只猫吗?
(3)Some children are . 一些孩子正在参加一次游船。
(4) are and are . 有些人在唱歌跳舞,有些人在散步。
结尾句:
(1)They are all . 他们都玩得很开心。
(2)Everyone is . 每个人都在享受自己的生活。
(3)As the saying goes...俗话说……
名言名句:
(1)There is no time like the present. 现在正是时候。/机不可失,时不再来。
(2)Life is short, and it is up to you to make it sweet. 人生苦短,让它变甜取决于你。
1. 写作任务
假设今天是星期天,你的父母带你去公园玩。公园里有很多人,有些孩子在游船上,有些老人在打太极(Tai Chi),有些人在慢跑,一个男孩在画画,有些女孩穿着汉服在拍照……
请根据以上提示写一篇英语短文,描述一下公园里的情景。
要求:
(1)条理清晰,意思连贯。
(2)语句通顺,书写规范。
(3)包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥,60个词左右。
2. 思路点拨
第一步:审题
体裁:
人称:
时态:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句:
(1)It is today. 今天是星期天。
(2)My family are all . 我的家人都在家。
(3)The air is and the sunshine is . 空气清新,阳光明媚。
(4)I'm with . 我和我的父母在公园里。
(5)There are a lot of people . 公园里有很多人。
(6)Let's see at the moment. 让我们来看看此刻他们正在做什么。
中间句:
(1)Jim is . 吉姆正在做他的家庭作业。
(2)Is she ? 她正在画一只猫吗?
(3)Some children are . 一些孩子正在参加一次游船。
(4) are and are . 有些人在唱歌跳舞,有些人在散步。
结尾句:
(1)They are all . 他们都玩得很开心。
(2)Everyone is . 每个人都在享受自己的生活。
(3)As the saying goes...俗话说……
名言名句:
(1)There is no time like the present. 现在正是时候。/机不可失,时不再来。
(2)Life is short, and it is up to you to make it sweet. 人生苦短,让它变甜取决于你。
答案
答题卡
体裁: 记叙文
人称: 第一人称和第三人称
时态: 现在进行时和一般现在时
提纲填空答案:
Time: It is Sunday today.
Weather: The air is fresh and the sunshine is bright.
Place: There are a lot of people in the park.
Some children are taking part in a boat tour.
Some old people are playing Tai Chi.
A boy is drawing pictures.
Some girls are taking photos in Hanfu.
Some people are jogging.
Others are taking a walk.
They are all having a good time.
完整作文:
It is Sunday today. The air is fresh and the sunshine is bright. I'm in the park with my parents. There are a lot of people in the park. Let's see what they are doing at the moment.
Some children are taking part in a boat tour. Some old people are playing Tai Chi. Some people are jogging. A boy is drawing pictures. Some girls are taking photos in Hanfu. Others are taking a walk.
They are all having a good time.
体裁: 记叙文
人称: 第一人称和第三人称
时态: 现在进行时和一般现在时
提纲填空答案:
Time: It is Sunday today.
Weather: The air is fresh and the sunshine is bright.
Place: There are a lot of people in the park.
Some children are taking part in a boat tour.
Some old people are playing Tai Chi.
A boy is drawing pictures.
Some girls are taking photos in Hanfu.
Some people are jogging.
Others are taking a walk.
They are all having a good time.
完整作文:
It is Sunday today. The air is fresh and the sunshine is bright. I'm in the park with my parents. There are a lot of people in the park. Let's see what they are doing at the moment.
Some children are taking part in a boat tour. Some old people are playing Tai Chi. Some people are jogging. A boy is drawing pictures. Some girls are taking photos in Hanfu. Others are taking a walk.
They are all having a good time.
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