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八、写作。(10 分)
假如你是 Nick,来自美国纽约,你打算暑假去中国北京游览,根据提示,写一写你的出行计划吧。
假如你是 Nick,来自美国纽约,你打算暑假去中国北京游览,根据提示,写一写你的出行计划吧。
答案
八、参考范文：
My name is Nick. I come from New York. Summer holiday is coming. I am going to
travel around Beijing next week. There are a lot of famous places to go. Here is my plan.
On Monday, I am going to visit the Great Wall. I know the Great Wall is the longest wall
in the world. On Tuesday, I am going to visit the Forbidden City. On Wednesday, I am
going to visit the Temple of Heaven. I am going to visit the Summer Palace on Thursday.
I hear it is very beautiful. On Friday, I am going to visit the Ming Tombs. I think I will
have a great time in Beijing.
My name is Nick. I come from New York. Summer holiday is coming. I am going to
travel around Beijing next week. There are a lot of famous places to go. Here is my plan.
On Monday, I am going to visit the Great Wall. I know the Great Wall is the longest wall
in the world. On Tuesday, I am going to visit the Forbidden City. On Wednesday, I am
going to visit the Temple of Heaven. I am going to visit the Summer Palace on Thursday.
I hear it is very beautiful. On Friday, I am going to visit the Ming Tombs. I think I will
have a great time in Beijing.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作主题为北京旅行计划，需介绍自己的身份（Nick，来自美国纽约）；接着根据表格中周一至周五对应的景点，使用一般将来时（be going to结构）依次描述每天的游览安排；最后表达对此次北京之行的期待，确保内容覆盖所有表格信息，语句通顺、时态正确。
【解析】1. 开篇介绍：说明自己的名字、国籍及暑假去北京旅行的计划；2. 按表格顺序安排行程：周一去长城，周二去故宫，周三去天坛，周四去颐和园，周五去明十三陵，均使用be going to结构表达计划；3. 结尾表达对旅行的期待，总结感受。具体内容如下：My name is Nick. I come from New York. Summer holiday is coming. I am going to travel around Beijing next week. There are a lot of famous places to go. Here is my plan. On Monday, I am going to visit the Great Wall. I know the Great Wall is the longest wall in the world. On Tuesday, I am going to visit the Forbidden City. On Wednesday, I am going to visit the Temple of Heaven. I am going to visit the Summer Palace on Thursday. I hear it is very beautiful. On Friday, I am going to visit the Ming Tombs. I think I will have a great time in Beijing.
【答案】My name is Nick. I come from New York. Summer holiday is coming. I am going to travel around Beijing next week. There are a lot of famous places to go. Here is my plan. On Monday, I am going to visit the Great Wall. I know the Great Wall is the longest wall in the world. On Tuesday, I am going to visit the Forbidden City. On Wednesday, I am going to visit the Temple of Heaven. I am going to visit the Summer Palace on Thursday. I hear it is very beautiful. On Friday, I am going to visit the Ming Tombs. I think I will have a great time in Beijing.
【知识点】一般将来时、英语写作、景点英文表达
【点评】本题为结合表格信息的英语应用文写作题，考查学生运用一般将来时描述计划的能力，要求内容贴合给定行程，语言准确通顺，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】1. 开篇介绍：说明自己的名字、国籍及暑假去北京旅行的计划；2. 按表格顺序安排行程：周一去长城，周二去故宫，周三去天坛，周四去颐和园，周五去明十三陵，均使用be going to结构表达计划；3. 结尾表达对旅行的期待，总结感受。具体内容如下：My name is Nick. I come from New York. Summer holiday is coming. I am going to travel around Beijing next week. There are a lot of famous places to go. Here is my plan. On Monday, I am going to visit the Great Wall. I know the Great Wall is the longest wall in the world. On Tuesday, I am going to visit the Forbidden City. On Wednesday, I am going to visit the Temple of Heaven. I am going to visit the Summer Palace on Thursday. I hear it is very beautiful. On Friday, I am going to visit the Ming Tombs. I think I will have a great time in Beijing.
【答案】My name is Nick. I come from New York. Summer holiday is coming. I am going to travel around Beijing next week. There are a lot of famous places to go. Here is my plan. On Monday, I am going to visit the Great Wall. I know the Great Wall is the longest wall in the world. On Tuesday, I am going to visit the Forbidden City. On Wednesday, I am going to visit the Temple of Heaven. I am going to visit the Summer Palace on Thursday. I hear it is very beautiful. On Friday, I am going to visit the Ming Tombs. I think I will have a great time in Beijing.
【知识点】一般将来时、英语写作、景点英文表达
【点评】本题为结合表格信息的英语应用文写作题，考查学生运用一般将来时描述计划的能力，要求内容贴合给定行程，语言准确通顺，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5
