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六、VI. 书面表达。
为增强同学们的灾害防范意识，你校的英语周刊正面向全体同学征集“极端天气亲历故事”。请你以“An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience”为题，根据以下思维导图撰写一篇短文投稿。
要点：1. 要点齐全，适当拓展；
2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 100词左右 ______ 。
为增强同学们的灾害防范意识，你校的英语周刊正面向全体同学征集“极端天气亲历故事”。请你以“An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience”为题，根据以下思维导图撰写一篇短文投稿。
要点：1. 要点齐全，适当拓展；
2. 行文连贯，语法正确，书写规范；
3. 100词左右 ______ 。
答案
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience
In September, 2024, Super Typhoon Yagi hit my city, leaving an unforgettable memory.
Before the typhoon, my family prepared lots of water, food and candles. Dad fixed the
windows tightly, and Mom put important things in high places.
During the typhoon, the wind roared terribly and the rain poured down. We stayed
indoors, far from windows. The power went out, so we sat in the dark, listening to the
storm. I felt a little scared, but my parents comforted me.
After the storm, the streets were in a mess with broken branches and fallen signs. My
neighbors and I helped clean up together.
From this experience, I learned the importance of being prepared for disasters. We
should follow safety rules and help each other when facing dangers. It also made me realize
how powerful nature is, so we must respect it.
An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience
In September, 2024, Super Typhoon Yagi hit my city, leaving an unforgettable memory.
Before the typhoon, my family prepared lots of water, food and candles. Dad fixed the
windows tightly, and Mom put important things in high places.
During the typhoon, the wind roared terribly and the rain poured down. We stayed
indoors, far from windows. The power went out, so we sat in the dark, listening to the
storm. I felt a little scared, but my parents comforted me.
After the storm, the streets were in a mess with broken branches and fallen signs. My
neighbors and I helped clean up together.
From this experience, I learned the importance of being prepared for disasters. We
should follow safety rules and help each other when facing dangers. It also made me realize
how powerful nature is, so we must respect it.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇英语书面表达题，要求以“An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience”为题，结合思维导图的两个核心要点写作：一是台风前、中、后人们的行为，二是从经历中获得的教训。写作时需先点明事件背景，再分阶段描述具体内容，最后总结感悟，确保要点齐全、行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：说明台风来袭的时间、名称及事件带来的难忘记忆；
2. 分阶段描述：台风前，写家人准备物资、加固门窗等准备工作；台风中，描述恶劣天气及家人的应对；台风后，写清理现场的互助行动；
3. 总结感悟：从经历中提炼出防灾准备的重要性、团结互助、敬畏自然等教训，使文章完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience
In September, 2024, Super Typhoon Yagi hit my city, leaving an unforgettable memory.
Before the typhoon, my family prepared lots of water, food and candles. Dad fixed the windows tightly, and Mom put important things in high places.
During the typhoon, the wind roared terribly and the rain poured down. We stayed indoors, far from windows. The power went out, so we sat in the dark, listening to the storm. I felt a little scared, but my parents comforted me.
After the storm, the streets were in a mess with broken branches and fallen signs. My neighbors and I helped clean up together.
From this experience, I learned the importance of being prepared for disasters. We should follow safety rules and help each other when facing dangers. It also made me realize how powerful nature is, so we must respect it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文严格围绕思维导图要点展开，涵盖台风前、中、后的具体行为，以及从中获得的教训，行文连贯，语法正确，细节丰富，符合投稿要求，能有效传递灾害防范意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇英语书面表达题，要求以“An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience”为题，结合思维导图的两个核心要点写作：一是台风前、中、后人们的行为，二是从经历中获得的教训。写作时需先点明事件背景，再分阶段描述具体内容，最后总结感悟，确保要点齐全、行文连贯，符合词数要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇点题：说明台风来袭的时间、名称及事件带来的难忘记忆；
2. 分阶段描述：台风前，写家人准备物资、加固门窗等准备工作；台风中，描述恶劣天气及家人的应对；台风后，写清理现场的互助行动；
3. 总结感悟：从经历中提炼出防灾准备的重要性、团结互助、敬畏自然等教训，使文章完整。
【答案】
One possible version:
An Unforgettable Typhoon Experience
In September, 2024, Super Typhoon Yagi hit my city, leaving an unforgettable memory.
Before the typhoon, my family prepared lots of water, food and candles. Dad fixed the windows tightly, and Mom put important things in high places.
During the typhoon, the wind roared terribly and the rain poured down. We stayed indoors, far from windows. The power went out, so we sat in the dark, listening to the storm. I felt a little scared, but my parents comforted me.
After the storm, the streets were in a mess with broken branches and fallen signs. My neighbors and I helped clean up together.
From this experience, I learned the importance of being prepared for disasters. We should follow safety rules and help each other when facing dangers. It also made me realize how powerful nature is, so we must respect it.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、要点式写作、记叙文写作
【点评】
本文严格围绕思维导图要点展开，涵盖台风前、中、后的具体行为，以及从中获得的教训，行文连贯，语法正确，细节丰富，符合投稿要求，能有效传递灾害防范意识。
【难度系数】
0.6
