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假如你是李华,你们学校的英语演讲比赛即将拉开帷幕。你准备写一篇英语演讲稿谈谈同学们近期出现的健康问题:很多同学体重在增加,体质却在下降。请你根据以下提示问题完成此次的演讲稿。
What is the problem with students?
Why are they becoming unhealthy?
What are your suggestions for this?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Today I'd like to say something about health.
As we all know,
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
假如你是李华,你们学校的英语演讲比赛即将拉开帷幕。你准备写一篇英语演讲稿谈谈同学们近期出现的健康问题:很多同学体重在增加,体质却在下降。请你根据以下提示问题完成此次的演讲稿。
What is the problem with students?
Why are they becoming unhealthy?
What are your suggestions for this?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Today I'd like to say something about health.
As we all know,
many students are getting heavier and unhealthier
nowadays. There are some reasons for it.
Firstly, some students hardly ever exercise. They spend
most of their time studying,sleeping or surfing the internet. So
they don't have enough time to exercise. Secondly, some
students don't have good eating habits. They like junk food
more than fruit and vegetables. What's more, some students
stay up late to watch TV or play computer games,so they can't
sleep well,which also leads to bad health.
To live a healthy life,I think we should exercise more and
eat healthily. At the same time,it's necessary to make sure we
can sleep at least eight hours every day. Hope everyone can
develop a good living habit and keep fit.
nowadays. There are some reasons for it.
Firstly, some students hardly ever exercise. They spend
most of their time studying,sleeping or surfing the internet. So
they don't have enough time to exercise. Secondly, some
students don't have good eating habits. They like junk food
more than fruit and vegetables. What's more, some students
stay up late to watch TV or play computer games,so they can't
sleep well,which also leads to bad health.
To live a healthy life,I think we should exercise more and
eat healthily. At the same time,it's necessary to make sure we
can sleep at least eight hours every day. Hope everyone can
develop a good living habit and keep fit.
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
答案
One possible version:
Today I'd like to say something about health. As we all
know, many students are getting heavier and unhealthier
nowadays. There are some reasons for it.
Firstly, some students hardly ever exercise. They spend
most of their time studying,sleeping or surfing the internet. So
they don't have enough time to exercise. Secondly, some
students don't have good eating habits. They like junk food
more than fruit and vegetables. What's more, some students
stay up late to watch TV or play computer games,so they can't
sleep well,which also leads to bad health.
To live a healthy life,I think we should exercise more and
eat healthily. At the same time,it's necessary to make sure we
can sleep at least eight hours every day. Hope everyone can
develop a good living habit and keep fit.
Today I'd like to say something about health. As we all
know, many students are getting heavier and unhealthier
nowadays. There are some reasons for it.
Firstly, some students hardly ever exercise. They spend
most of their time studying,sleeping or surfing the internet. So
they don't have enough time to exercise. Secondly, some
students don't have good eating habits. They like junk food
more than fruit and vegetables. What's more, some students
stay up late to watch TV or play computer games,so they can't
sleep well,which also leads to bad health.
To live a healthy life,I think we should exercise more and
eat healthily. At the same time,it's necessary to make sure we
can sleep at least eight hours every day. Hope everyone can
develop a good living habit and keep fit.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务是完成一篇关于学生健康问题的英语演讲稿，需涵盖三个核心内容：学生的健康问题（体重增加、体质下降）、导致问题的原因、改善健康的建议。写作时要注意：人称以第三人称描述学生情况，第一人称提建议；时态统一用一般现在时；使用连接词（如firstly、secondly等）让逻辑清晰；确保拼写、语法正确，内容充实，词数约100词。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，引出学生健康问题：点明当下学生体重增加、体质变差的现状；
2. 分点说明原因：用firstly阐述学生缺乏锻炼（时间多用于学习、上网），secondly说明不良饮食习惯（偏好垃圾食品），what's more补充熬夜影响睡眠的问题；
3. 提出针对性建议：建议多锻炼、健康饮食、保证每日充足睡眠，最后呼吁养成良好生活习惯；
4. 全程使用一般现在时，借助连接词让行文连贯，符合演讲稿的表达风格，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today I'd like to say something about health. As we all know, many students are getting heavier and unhealthier nowadays. There are some reasons for it.
Firstly, some students hardly ever exercise. They spend most of their time studying, sleeping or surfing the internet. So they don't have enough time to exercise. Secondly, some students don't have good eating habits. They like junk food more than fruit and vegetables. What's more, some students stay up late to watch TV or play computer games, so they can't sleep well, which also leads to bad health.
To live a healthy life, I think we should exercise more and eat healthily. At the same time, it's necessary to make sure we can sleep at least eight hours every day. Hope everyone can develop a good living habit and keep fit.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、原因建议类作文
【点评】
该作文紧扣演讲稿主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的问题、原因、建议三部分；使用丰富连接词使逻辑连贯，句型多样，语法正确，符合写作规范，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
首先明确写作任务是完成一篇关于学生健康问题的英语演讲稿，需涵盖三个核心内容：学生的健康问题（体重增加、体质下降）、导致问题的原因、改善健康的建议。写作时要注意：人称以第三人称描述学生情况，第一人称提建议；时态统一用一般现在时；使用连接词（如firstly、secondly等）让逻辑清晰；确保拼写、语法正确，内容充实，词数约100词。
【解析】
1. 承接给定开头，引出学生健康问题：点明当下学生体重增加、体质变差的现状；
2. 分点说明原因：用firstly阐述学生缺乏锻炼（时间多用于学习、上网），secondly说明不良饮食习惯（偏好垃圾食品），what's more补充熬夜影响睡眠的问题；
3. 提出针对性建议：建议多锻炼、健康饮食、保证每日充足睡眠，最后呼吁养成良好生活习惯；
4. 全程使用一般现在时，借助连接词让行文连贯，符合演讲稿的表达风格，满足词数要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Today I'd like to say something about health. As we all know, many students are getting heavier and unhealthier nowadays. There are some reasons for it.
Firstly, some students hardly ever exercise. They spend most of their time studying, sleeping or surfing the internet. So they don't have enough time to exercise. Secondly, some students don't have good eating habits. They like junk food more than fruit and vegetables. What's more, some students stay up late to watch TV or play computer games, so they can't sleep well, which also leads to bad health.
To live a healthy life, I think we should exercise more and eat healthily. At the same time, it's necessary to make sure we can sleep at least eight hours every day. Hope everyone can develop a good living habit and keep fit.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、原因建议类作文
【点评】
该作文紧扣演讲稿主题，结构清晰，完整覆盖题目要求的问题、原因、建议三部分；使用丰富连接词使逻辑连贯，句型多样，语法正确，符合写作规范，是一篇优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
假如你是Dr Cooper,今天下午来了几位病人,请根据他们的情况把下面的病例补充完整。
答案
1. I put a bandage on it/...
2. I helped him get an X-ray/...
3. ate some food with peanuts/...
4. I gave her some medicine/...
2. I helped him get an X-ray/...
3. ate some food with peanuts/...
4. I gave her some medicine/...
解析
【分析】
这道题需要根据不同的健康问题，结合日常急救和生活常识，补充对应的原因或处理方式。首先明确每个病例的场景：手指割伤对应包扎处理，腿受伤摔倒对应检查伤情，花生过敏对应食用含花生的食物及用药处理，再匹配对应的英文表达即可。
【解析】
1. 手指割伤后，常见的处理方式是用绷带包扎，故填I put a bandage on it（合理即可）；
2. 摔倒导致腿部受伤，需检查是否有骨折，常见处理是安排X光检查，故填I helped him get an X-ray；
3. 花生过敏的原因通常是食用了含花生的食物，故填ate some food with peanuts；
4. 过敏后需使用药物缓解，故填I gave her some medicine。
【答案】
1. I put a bandage on it/...
2. I helped him get an X-ray/...
3. ate some food with peanuts/...
4. I gave her some medicine/...
【知识点】
急救常识、生活健康
【点评】
本题结合实际生活中的健康场景，考查学生对常见健康问题的原因和应对方式的掌握，贴近生活，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
这道题需要根据不同的健康问题，结合日常急救和生活常识，补充对应的原因或处理方式。首先明确每个病例的场景：手指割伤对应包扎处理，腿受伤摔倒对应检查伤情，花生过敏对应食用含花生的食物及用药处理，再匹配对应的英文表达即可。
【解析】
1. 手指割伤后，常见的处理方式是用绷带包扎，故填I put a bandage on it（合理即可）；
2. 摔倒导致腿部受伤，需检查是否有骨折，常见处理是安排X光检查，故填I helped him get an X-ray；
3. 花生过敏的原因通常是食用了含花生的食物，故填ate some food with peanuts；
4. 过敏后需使用药物缓解，故填I gave her some medicine。
【答案】
1. I put a bandage on it/...
2. I helped him get an X-ray/...
3. ate some food with peanuts/...
4. I gave her some medicine/...
【知识点】
急救常识、生活健康
【点评】
本题结合实际生活中的健康场景，考查学生对常见健康问题的原因和应对方式的掌握，贴近生活，难度适中。
【难度系数】
0.3
