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你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动，主题是介绍我国的自然旅游胜地。请你根据表格中的内容，以“Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem”为题，写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。
• 海拔约 1545 米
【要求】1. 短文须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右。
【参考词汇】：the Five Sacred Mountains 五岳；cliff 悬崖；Sunset Glow 晚霞夕照；historical site 历史遗迹
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
你校英语网站正在举办一次英文写作竞赛活动，主题是介绍我国的自然旅游胜地。请你根据表格中的内容，以“Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem”为题，写一篇介绍泰山的短文参赛。
• 海拔约 1545 米
【要求】1. 短文须包括所有要点提示，可适当发挥。
2. 词数 80 左右。
【参考词汇】：the Five Sacred Mountains 五岳；cliff 悬崖；Sunset Glow 晚霞夕照；historical site 历史遗迹
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
答案
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. ①It is about $1,545$ metres. It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views. ②There are high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. The Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow are among the most famous views.
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. ①It is about $1,545$ metres high. (用 high 升格) It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views ②such as high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. (用 such as 升格) The Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow are among the most famous views.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views. ②There are high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. The Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow are among the most famous views.
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. ①It is about $1,545$ metres high. (用 high 升格) It is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views ②such as high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. (用 such as 升格) The Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow are among the most famous views.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍自然旅游胜地的说明类短文写作，解题时首先要梳理表格给出的全部要点，避免出现信息遗漏：首先整理概况类要点：泰山位于山东中部、海拔约1545米、是中国五岳之一；接着整理美景类要点：有高耸悬崖、古老松树、云海景观，旭日东升和晚霞夕照尤为著名；最后整理其他类要点：游客可以探索历史遗迹，通往山顶有台阶小路也配套缆车服务。写作时按照“基本概况-自然美景-人文与游览配套”的逻辑顺序排布内容，适当使用连接词让语句衔接自然，用上题干给出的参考词汇，调整内容长度将词数控制在80左右即可。
【解析】
第一步：开篇介绍泰山核心基础信息，依次点明它的地理位置、海拔高度、五岳的属性，完成概况部分所有要点的表述，描述海拔时补充high，让表达更准确规范。
第二步：介绍泰山的自然景观，用such as引出高悬崖、古松、云海的举例，再专门点明“旭日东升”和“晚霞夕照”的知名特色，完成美景部分的要点覆盖。
第三步：补充游览相关内容，说明游客可以探索历史遗迹，同时介绍通往山顶的步道和缆车服务，整体调整语句流畅度，控制总词数符合80左右的要求，规避语法错误。
【答案】
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. It is about 1,545 metres high, and it is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views such as high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. The Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow are especially famous here.
Visitors can explore historical sites on the mountain. There are steps and paths leading to the top, as well as cable car service.
【知识点】
英语景点写作，说明文表达
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作，所有核心信息点都已明确给出，学生只需要将提示内容用通顺的英文串联起来，注意不要遗漏要点，适当优化衔接表达让行文更流畅，能够很好地锻炼学生的信息整合和基础英文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇介绍自然旅游胜地的说明类短文写作，解题时首先要梳理表格给出的全部要点，避免出现信息遗漏：首先整理概况类要点：泰山位于山东中部、海拔约1545米、是中国五岳之一；接着整理美景类要点：有高耸悬崖、古老松树、云海景观，旭日东升和晚霞夕照尤为著名；最后整理其他类要点：游客可以探索历史遗迹，通往山顶有台阶小路也配套缆车服务。写作时按照“基本概况-自然美景-人文与游览配套”的逻辑顺序排布内容，适当使用连接词让语句衔接自然，用上题干给出的参考词汇，调整内容长度将词数控制在80左右即可。
【解析】
第一步：开篇介绍泰山核心基础信息，依次点明它的地理位置、海拔高度、五岳的属性，完成概况部分所有要点的表述，描述海拔时补充high，让表达更准确规范。
第二步：介绍泰山的自然景观，用such as引出高悬崖、古松、云海的举例，再专门点明“旭日东升”和“晚霞夕照”的知名特色，完成美景部分的要点覆盖。
第三步：补充游览相关内容，说明游客可以探索历史遗迹，同时介绍通往山顶的步道和缆车服务，整体调整语句流畅度，控制总词数符合80左右的要求，规避语法错误。
【答案】
Mount Taishan: A Cultural and Natural Gem
Mount Taishan lies in the middle of Shandong Province, China. It is about 1,545 metres high, and it is one of the Five Sacred Mountains of China.
The mountain is famous for its beautiful views such as high cliffs, ancient pine trees, and the sea of clouds. The Sunrise from the East and Sunset Glow are especially famous here.
Visitors can explore historical sites on the mountain. There are steps and paths leading to the top, as well as cable car service.
【知识点】
英语景点写作，说明文表达
【点评】
本题属于基础应用类写作，所有核心信息点都已明确给出，学生只需要将提示内容用通顺的英文串联起来，注意不要遗漏要点，适当优化衔接表达让行文更流畅，能够很好地锻炼学生的信息整合和基础英文写作能力。
【难度系数】
0.6
