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七、书面表达。
假如你是王强，你打算邀请你的英国笔友 Ryan 来你的家乡南通游玩。请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一封邀请信。
提示：
1. The basic information of your hometown（至少两点）；
2. The bright spots in your hometown（至少三点）；
3. The feelings in your hometown.
注意：
1. 参考要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露真实校名、姓名等信息；
3. 词数 100 左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Ryan，
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nantong.
Hope to see you soon in Nantong.
Yours，
Wang Qiang
假如你是王强，你打算邀请你的英国笔友 Ryan 来你的家乡南通游玩。请根据以下要点提示，用英语写一封邀请信。
提示：
1. The basic information of your hometown（至少两点）；
2. The bright spots in your hometown（至少三点）；
3. The feelings in your hometown.
注意：
1. 参考要点，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得透露真实校名、姓名等信息；
3. 词数 100 左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Ryan，
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nantong.
Nantong is a modern city with a long history. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to the Wolf Hill. It is a beautiful hill near the Yangtze River. We can try some delicious fish in the river. How nice!
If you feel tired, you can go to Binjiang Park to have a rest. We can also go shopping and buy some presents in different malls. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Nantong.
Yours，
Wang Qiang
答案
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nantong.
Nantong is a modern city with a long history. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to the Wolf Hill. It is a beautiful hill near the Yangtze River. We can try some delicious fish in the river. How nice! If you feel tired, you can go to Binjiang Park to have a rest. We can also go shopping and buy some presents in different malls. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Nantong.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nantong.
Nantong is a modern city with a long history. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to the Wolf Hill. It is a beautiful hill near the Yangtze River. We can try some delicious fish in the river. How nice! If you feel tired, you can go to Binjiang Park to have a rest. We can also go shopping and buy some presents in different malls. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Nantong.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先明确核心要求：你是王强，要给英国笔友写邀请信邀请他来南通游玩，必须覆盖三个指定要点。首先梳理思路：首先完成第一个要点“家乡基本信息”，至少写两点，可以先写南通的地理位置，再写它的城市特质，轻松凑够两点。接下来完成第二个要点“家乡亮点”，至少三点，可以挑选南通有代表性的游玩项目：比如逛狼山吃江鲜、去滨江公园休闲、去商圈购物，刚好三点符合要求。最后补充第三个要点“在家乡的感受”，写出自己在这里生活很舒适，相信对方也能玩得开心。最后把内容用通顺的英语串联起来，控制总词数在100左右，注意不要出现真实校名姓名，开头结尾已经给出不需要额外撰写。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为给笔友的邀请信，整体以第一人称为主，描述客观城市信息用一般现在时，描述后续带对方游玩的计划用一般将来时，语气贴合日常给好友写信的风格即可。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 家乡基础信息部分：写明南通地处江苏东南部，是一座兼具悠久历史和现代感的城市，满足至少两点的要求。
② 家乡亮点部分：依次列出三个游玩亮点：第一可以游览紧邻长江的狼山，品尝长江出产的美味河鲜；第二可以到滨江公园放松休息，享受舒适的自然环境；第三可以去不同的商场逛街，挑选特色伴手礼，满足至少三点的要求。
③ 感受部分：写出日常在家乡生活时春日处处绿树、闻花香听鸟鸣的惬意，表达确定对方会玩得很愉快的感受。
3. 连句成篇：用自然的衔接词把内容串联起来，调整语句流畅度，检查语法错误，确认没有泄露私人信息，词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nantong.
Nantong is a modern city with a long history. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to the Wolf Hill. It is a beautiful hill near the Yangtze River. We can try some delicious fish in the river. How nice! If you feel tired, you can go to Binjiang Park to have a rest. We can also go shopping and buy some presents in different malls. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Nantong.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【知识点】
邀请信写作；地点描述表达；书面表达谋篇
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作，要点提示清晰明确，难度适中。既考查了学生对英语书信基础规范的掌握，也锻炼了学生用英语介绍城市、表达个人感受的语言输出能力，写作时注意要完整覆盖所有给定要点，适当补充细节可以让文章更生动自然，避免内容空洞。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先第一步先明确核心要求：你是王强，要给英国笔友写邀请信邀请他来南通游玩，必须覆盖三个指定要点。首先梳理思路：首先完成第一个要点“家乡基本信息”，至少写两点，可以先写南通的地理位置，再写它的城市特质，轻松凑够两点。接下来完成第二个要点“家乡亮点”，至少三点，可以挑选南通有代表性的游玩项目：比如逛狼山吃江鲜、去滨江公园休闲、去商圈购物，刚好三点符合要求。最后补充第三个要点“在家乡的感受”，写出自己在这里生活很舒适，相信对方也能玩得开心。最后把内容用通顺的英语串联起来，控制总词数在100左右，注意不要出现真实校名姓名，开头结尾已经给出不需要额外撰写。
【解析】
1. 审题定位：文体为给笔友的邀请信，整体以第一人称为主，描述客观城市信息用一般现在时，描述后续带对方游玩的计划用一般将来时，语气贴合日常给好友写信的风格即可。
2. 搭建内容框架：
① 家乡基础信息部分：写明南通地处江苏东南部，是一座兼具悠久历史和现代感的城市，满足至少两点的要求。
② 家乡亮点部分：依次列出三个游玩亮点：第一可以游览紧邻长江的狼山，品尝长江出产的美味河鲜；第二可以到滨江公园放松休息，享受舒适的自然环境；第三可以去不同的商场逛街，挑选特色伴手礼，满足至少三点的要求。
③ 感受部分：写出日常在家乡生活时春日处处绿树、闻花香听鸟鸣的惬意，表达确定对方会玩得很愉快的感受。
3. 连句成篇：用自然的衔接词把内容串联起来，调整语句流畅度，检查语法错误，确认没有泄露私人信息，词数符合100左右的要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
Dear Ryan,
I am writing to invite you to visit my hometown Nantong.
Nantong is a modern city with a long history. It is in the southeast of Jiangsu. There are a lot of places of interest around it. In spring, there are green trees everywhere. Every morning we can smell the beautiful flowers and hear the birds sing.
I'll show you around the city when you come here. I'll take you to the Wolf Hill. It is a beautiful hill near the Yangtze River. We can try some delicious fish in the river. How nice! If you feel tired, you can go to Binjiang Park to have a rest. We can also go shopping and buy some presents in different malls. I'm sure you'll have a good time.
Hope to see you soon in Nantong.
Yours,
Wang Qiang
【知识点】
邀请信写作；地点描述表达；书面表达谋篇
【点评】
本题属于提纲类应用文写作，要点提示清晰明确，难度适中。既考查了学生对英语书信基础规范的掌握，也锻炼了学生用英语介绍城市、表达个人感受的语言输出能力，写作时注意要完整覆盖所有给定要点，适当补充细节可以让文章更生动自然，避免内容空洞。
【难度系数】
0.6
