Ⅰ. Complete the table about your memorable travel story（完成关于你的一次难忘的旅行的表格）
| Writing Structure | Writing Tips | My memorable travel story |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Opening | When, where and who | |
| Body | 1. Details during the trip（actions, scenes）
2. The people you met or small things that happened | |
| Closing | 1. Your feeling about the trip
2. What you gained or why it is memorable | |

I.（供参考）
| Writing Structure | Writing Tips | My memorable travel story |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Opening | When, where and who | Last summer vacation
Lijiang Ancient Town
My grandma and me |
| Body | 1. Details during the trip (actions, scenes)
2. The people you met or small things that happened | Quiet stone streets
Clear water, wooden bridges, beautiful houses
A small tie-dye shop |
续表
| Writing Structure | Writing Tips | My memorable travel story |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Closing | 1. Your feeling about the trip
2. What you gain or why it is memorable | Enjoy the slow life
Feel the warmth of local people |

【分析】本题是英语写作的表格填写题，需依据写作结构的三个模块（开头、主体、结尾）的提示，结合自身难忘的旅行经历，对应填写各部分内容：开头明确时间、地点、同行人物；主体填写旅行中的具体场景/细节，以及遇到的人或小事；结尾填写旅行感受和收获/难忘的原因，参考示例内容完成表格。
【解析】1. 开头部分：根据提示“When, where and who”，填写时间（Last summer vacation）、地点（Lijiang Ancient Town）、同行人物（My grandma and me）；2. 主体部分：根据提示“旅行细节（场景、动作）、遇到的人或小事”，填写具体场景（Quiet stone streets, Clear water, wooden bridges, beautiful houses）和相关小事（A small tie-dye shop）；3. 结尾部分：根据提示“旅行感受、收获/难忘原因”，填写感受（Enjoy the slow life）和收获（Feel the warmth of local people），完成表格填写。
【答案】
| Writing Structure | Writing Tips | My memorable travel story |
| --- | --- | --- |
| Opening | When, where and who | Last summer vacation
Lijiang Ancient Town
My grandma and me |
| Body | 1. Details during the trip (actions, scenes)
2. The people you met or small things that happened | Quiet stone streets
Clear water, wooden bridges, beautiful houses
A small tie-dye shop |
| Closing | 1. Your feeling about the trip
2. What you gained or why it is memorable | Enjoy the slow life
Feel the warmth of local people |
【知识点】英语记叙文写作、旅行话题表达
【点评】本题考查学生对英语写作结构的掌握，要求结合自身经历填写，贴近生活实际，能引导学生梳理旅行经历并表达感受，难度适中。
【难度系数】0.5

Ⅱ. Writing（写作）
Please write a short passage based on the chart above with the title “My Memorable Travel Story” in at least 80 words.
My Memorable Travel Story

II. One possible version:
My Memorable Travel Story
Last summer vacation, I went to Lijiang Ancient Town with my grandma. I was looking forward to it for a long time, and I felt very excited when we arrived.
We walked slowly along the quiet stone streets. The clear water flowed gently under the small wooden bridges, and the houses on both sides were simple and beautiful. We stopped at a small tie-dye shop. The old lady in the shop was very kind. She taught me to fold the cloth and dye it with natural colours, and told me interesting stories about the town.
This trip was not busy at all. I enjoyed the slow life there and felt the warmth of the local people. I love the trip!

【分析】
写作时需围绕“难忘的旅行故事”主题，先明确旅行的时间、地点及同行人物，再选取旅行中具体的细节（如特色景色、有趣经历）展开描述，最后点明旅行带来的感受，确保内容充实、词数达标，语言通顺自然，突出“难忘”的核心。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：1. 开篇交代旅行的基本信息（时间、地点、同行者），引出旅行的期待与开始；2. 中间部分具体描写旅行中的场景（如丽江的石板路、小桥流水）及亲身经历（如扎染体验），丰富内容；3. 结尾表达对此次旅行的感受，呼应“难忘”的主题，注意词数不少于80词，语言符合英语表达习惯。
【答案】
II. One possible version:
My Memorable Travel Story
Last summer vacation, I went to Lijiang Ancient Town with my grandma. I was looking forward to it for a long time, and I felt very excited when we arrived.
We walked slowly along the quiet stone streets. The clear water flowed gently under the small wooden bridges, and the houses on both sides were simple and beautiful. We stopped at a small tie-dye shop. The old lady in the shop was very kind. She taught me to fold the cloth and dye it with natural colours, and told me interesting stories about the town.
This trip was not busy at all. I enjoyed the slow life there and felt the warmth of the local people. I love the trip!
【知识点】
英语记叙文写作、旅行主题表达
【点评】
该范文以丽江旅行为载体，通过具体的场景描写和亲身经历，生动诠释了“难忘的旅行”，结构清晰，细节饱满，情感真挚，符合题目要求，是一篇优秀的写作范例。
【难度系数】
0.5