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1.写作任务
请结合下图内容提示,以“My Saturday”为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁:
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句：
(1)Do you want to
(2)Let me tell you my
(3)Saturday is
中间句：
(1)I usually
我通常早上7点起床,7点半吃早饭。
(2)I
我起床早,并且我从来上学不迟到。
(3)We usually have two classes
(4)After lunch,I
午饭后我有时和我的同学们参加体育活动。
(5)
(6)At 9:00 p.m.,
结尾句：
(1)What a
(2)I really
名言名句：
(1)Never put off till tomorrow what can be done today. 今日事,今日毕。
(2)Custom makes all things easy. 有个好习惯,事事皆不难。
3.范文品鉴
My Saturday
Saturday is a relaxing day for me. (整体介绍)
In the morning, I always get up at seven o'clock. Then, I exercise for half an hour. I have breakfast at about eight o'clock. After that, I do homework first and then play the piano. In the afternoon, I go to the clubs—an art club and a swimming club. The art club is from 2:30 to 3:30, and the swimming club is from 4:00 to 5:00. After that, I usually get home at 5:45. In the evening, I take a walk with my parents or read books in my room. I usually go to bed at 9:30. (分时间段描述活动)
I really have fun on Saturday. (总结话题)
请结合下图内容提示,以“My Saturday”为题,根据写作要求,用英语写一篇不少于60个词的短文。
写作要求:(1)短文须包含图中所有信息,并适当拓展;(2)文中不能出现真实的人名和校名。
2.思路点拨
第一步:审题 体裁:
记叙文
人称:第一人称
时态:一般现在时
第二步:列提纲
第三步:句子积累
开头句：
(1)Do you want to
know about
my day? 你想知道我的一天吗?(2)Let me tell you my
school life
. 让我告诉你我的学校生活。(3)Saturday is
a relaxing
day for
me. 周六对于我来说是放松的一天。中间句：
(1)I usually
get up at
7:00 a.m., and I eat breakfast at 7:30 a.m.我通常早上7点起床,7点半吃早饭。
(2)I
get up early
and I'm never late for
school.我起床早,并且我从来上学不迟到。
(3)We usually have two classes
in the afternoon
. 通常我们下午上两节课。(4)After lunch,I
sometimes
play sport with
my classmates.午饭后我有时和我的同学们参加体育活动。
(5)
When
I get home
, I sometimes help my parents with
housework or do my homework. 当我回到家,我有时帮助父母做家务或做我的作业。(6)At 9:00 p.m.,
it's time for me
to go to bed. 晚上9点,我该睡觉了。结尾句：
(1)What a
busy
day! 多么忙碌的一天啊!(2)I really
have fun
on Saturday. 我周六真的很开心。名言名句：
(1)Never put off till tomorrow what can be done today. 今日事,今日毕。
(2)Custom makes all things easy. 有个好习惯,事事皆不难。
3.范文品鉴
My Saturday
Saturday is a relaxing day for me. (整体介绍)
In the morning, I always get up at seven o'clock. Then, I exercise for half an hour. I have breakfast at about eight o'clock. After that, I do homework first and then play the piano. In the afternoon, I go to the clubs—an art club and a swimming club. The art club is from 2:30 to 3:30, and the swimming club is from 4:00 to 5:00. After that, I usually get home at 5:45. In the evening, I take a walk with my parents or read books in my room. I usually go to bed at 9:30. (分时间段描述活动)
I really have fun on Saturday. (总结话题)
答案
1. 写作任务
My Saturday
Saturday is a relaxing day for me. In the morning, I get up at 7:00 a.m. and exercise for 30 minutes. Then I have breakfast at 8:00 a.m. After breakfast, I do my homework and play the piano. In the afternoon, I go to an art club from 2:30 to 3:30 and a swimming club from 4:00 to 5:00. I get home at 5:45 p.m. In the evening, I take a walk with my parents or read books. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. I really have fun on Saturday.
2. 思路点拨
第一步：记叙文；第一人称；一般现在时
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) know about
(2) school life
(3) a relaxing; for
中间句：
(1) get up at
(2) get up early; never late for
(3) in the afternoon
(4) sometimes; with
(5) When; get home; with
(6) it's time for me
结尾句：
(1) busy
(2) have fun
My Saturday
Saturday is a relaxing day for me. In the morning, I get up at 7:00 a.m. and exercise for 30 minutes. Then I have breakfast at 8:00 a.m. After breakfast, I do my homework and play the piano. In the afternoon, I go to an art club from 2:30 to 3:30 and a swimming club from 4:00 to 5:00. I get home at 5:45 p.m. In the evening, I take a walk with my parents or read books. I go to bed at 9:30 p.m. I really have fun on Saturday.
2. 思路点拨
第一步：记叙文；第一人称；一般现在时
第三步：句子积累
开头句：
(1) know about
(2) school life
(3) a relaxing; for
中间句：
(1) get up at
(2) get up early; never late for
(3) in the afternoon
(4) sometimes; with
(5) When; get home; with
(6) it's time for me
结尾句：
(1) busy
(2) have fun
