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六、(2026·宜兴树人中学阶段检测)书面表达(35 分)
寒假即将来临,为倡导同学们度过一个愉快而有意义的寒假,你校英语俱乐部举办题为“My colourful winter holiday”的征文比赛。请根据下面思维导图提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍你的寒假计划。
要求:1. 须包含全部要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数不少于 80,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
My colourful winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. What should we do to have a colourful winter holiday?
First, I plan
This is my plan for the winter holiday. I hope that all of us can have a great winter holiday.
寒假即将来临,为倡导同学们度过一个愉快而有意义的寒假,你校英语俱乐部举办题为“My colourful winter holiday”的征文比赛。请根据下面思维导图提示,用英语写一篇短文介绍你的寒假计划。
要求:1. 须包含全部要点,可适当发挥;2. 词数不少于 80,开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。
My colourful winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. What should we do to have a colourful winter holiday?
First, I plan
to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables. I will also have some fruit between meals.
Then, I plan to do some sports. I plan to go swimming three times a week and play basketball with my friends at weekends. Next, for the Spring Festival, I will go to my grandparents' house. I will have a big dinner with all the family members and then we will watch the great Spring Festival Gala together.
Finally, I will go to an old people's home with my parents during festivals. Mum says that old people there need more help and care.
Then, I plan to do some sports. I plan to go swimming three times a week and play basketball with my friends at weekends. Next, for the Spring Festival, I will go to my grandparents' house. I will have a big dinner with all the family members and then we will watch the great Spring Festival Gala together.
Finally, I will go to an old people's home with my parents during festivals. Mum says that old people there need more help and care.
This is my plan for the winter holiday. I hope that all of us can have a great winter holiday.
答案
六、
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:须包含思维导图中的全部要点(健康饮食、运动、庆祝春节、其他活动),可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引入,用题目给出的开头句引出"如何度过多彩寒假"的主题;第二步,分点展开论述,按"健康饮食→运动→春节活动→其他活动"的逻辑,依次补充具体细节(如饮食内容、运动项目、春节安排);第三步,进行总结,用题目给出的结尾句总结计划并表达美好期待。
[词句积累]
①plan to do sth计划做某事 ②three times a week一周三次 ③at weekends在周末 ④Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
⑤First, I plan to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables.("will+动词原形"结构表将来)
⑥Mum says that old people there need more help and care.(that引导宾语从句)
One possible version:
My colourful winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. What should we do to have a colourful winter holiday?
First, I plan to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables. I will also have some fruit between meals.
Then, I plan to do some sports. I plan to go swimming three times a week and play basketball with my friends at weekends. Next, for the Spring Festival, I will go to my grandparents' house. I will have a big dinner with all the family members and then we will watch the great Spring Festival Gala together.
Finally, I will go to an old people's home with my parents during festivals. Mum says that old people there need more help and care.
This is my plan for the winter holiday. I hope that all of us can have a great winter holiday.
写作指导
[审题步骤]
①体裁:说明文。②时态:主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。③提示:须包含思维导图中的全部要点(健康饮食、运动、庆祝春节、其他活动),可适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇引入,用题目给出的开头句引出"如何度过多彩寒假"的主题;第二步,分点展开论述,按"健康饮食→运动→春节活动→其他活动"的逻辑,依次补充具体细节(如饮食内容、运动项目、春节安排);第三步,进行总结,用题目给出的结尾句总结计划并表达美好期待。
[词句积累]
①plan to do sth计划做某事 ②three times a week一周三次 ③at weekends在周末 ④Spring Festival Gala春节联欢晚会
⑤First, I plan to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables.("will+动词原形"结构表将来)
⑥Mum says that old people there need more help and care.(that引导宾语从句)
One possible version:
My colourful winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. What should we do to have a colourful winter holiday?
First, I plan to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables. I will also have some fruit between meals.
Then, I plan to do some sports. I plan to go swimming three times a week and play basketball with my friends at weekends. Next, for the Spring Festival, I will go to my grandparents' house. I will have a big dinner with all the family members and then we will watch the great Spring Festival Gala together.
Finally, I will go to an old people's home with my parents during festivals. Mum says that old people there need more help and care.
This is my plan for the winter holiday. I hope that all of us can have a great winter holiday.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要先明确核心要求：这是一篇介绍寒假计划的提纲类作文，体裁为说明文，核心描述未来的安排，所以主要使用一般将来时，必须覆盖思维导图给出的全部4个要点，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作思路：题目已经给出了开头和结尾，我们只需要填充中间的主体内容，按照"健康饮食→运动安排→春节庆祝→其他活动"的顺序依次展开，每个要点补充1-2个贴合生活的具体细节，比如写健康饮食时可以说明三餐的具体食物，写运动时补充运动项目和频率，写春节时加入年夜饭、看春晚等真实场景，其他活动可以设计做公益的内容，最后用合适的逻辑连接词串联所有内容，保证行文流畅，词数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 审题确认规则：
① 体裁：计划类说明文，主题为介绍多彩寒假安排
② 时态：以一般将来时为主，描述未来的计划
③ 硬性要求：必须包含健康饮食、体育锻炼、庆祝春节、其他活动全部4个要点，词数≥80，首尾句已给出无需自行创作
2. 搭建行文逻辑：
使用First、Then、Next、Finally作为递进连接词，依次展开四个要点，每个要点补充生活化细节，避免内容空洞，自然衔接给定的首尾句。
3. 完整参考内容按照逻辑填充要点，保证内容通顺符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My colourful winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. What should we do to have a colourful winter holiday?
First, I plan to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables. I will also have some fruit between meals.
Then, I plan to do some sports. I plan to go swimming three times a week and play basketball with my friends at weekends. Next, for the Spring Festival, I will go to my grandparents' house. I will have a big dinner with all the family members and then we will watch the great Spring Festival Gala together.
Finally, I will go to an old people's home with my parents during festivals. Mum says that old people there need more help and care.
This is my plan for the winter holiday. I hope that all of us can have a great winter holiday.
【知识点】
一般将来时应用；提纲类书面表达；节日场景写作
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题目所有要求的要点，逻辑清晰，使用递进连接词让行文条理分明，补充的细节贴合学生日常生活实际，还合理运用了宾语从句等高分句式，用词准确地道，符合初中阶段该类写作的评分标准。同学们写这类提纲作文时，可以先标记所有必写要点，避免漏点失分，适当补充生活化的细节可以让作文内容更饱满出彩。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道书面表达题，首先要先明确核心要求：这是一篇介绍寒假计划的提纲类作文，体裁为说明文，核心描述未来的安排，所以主要使用一般将来时，必须覆盖思维导图给出的全部4个要点，不能遗漏。接下来梳理写作思路：题目已经给出了开头和结尾，我们只需要填充中间的主体内容，按照"健康饮食→运动安排→春节庆祝→其他活动"的顺序依次展开，每个要点补充1-2个贴合生活的具体细节，比如写健康饮食时可以说明三餐的具体食物，写运动时补充运动项目和频率，写春节时加入年夜饭、看春晚等真实场景，其他活动可以设计做公益的内容，最后用合适的逻辑连接词串联所有内容，保证行文流畅，词数达标即可。
【解析】
1. 审题确认规则：
① 体裁：计划类说明文，主题为介绍多彩寒假安排
② 时态：以一般将来时为主，描述未来的计划
③ 硬性要求：必须包含健康饮食、体育锻炼、庆祝春节、其他活动全部4个要点，词数≥80，首尾句已给出无需自行创作
2. 搭建行文逻辑：
使用First、Then、Next、Finally作为递进连接词，依次展开四个要点，每个要点补充生活化细节，避免内容空洞，自然衔接给定的首尾句。
3. 完整参考内容按照逻辑填充要点，保证内容通顺符合要求。
【答案】
One possible version:
My colourful winter holiday
The winter holiday is coming. What should we do to have a colourful winter holiday?
First, I plan to have healthy food. I will have milk and bread for breakfast. For lunch and dinner, I will eat fish, meat and a lot of vegetables. I will also have some fruit between meals.
Then, I plan to do some sports. I plan to go swimming three times a week and play basketball with my friends at weekends. Next, for the Spring Festival, I will go to my grandparents' house. I will have a big dinner with all the family members and then we will watch the great Spring Festival Gala together.
Finally, I will go to an old people's home with my parents during festivals. Mum says that old people there need more help and care.
This is my plan for the winter holiday. I hope that all of us can have a great winter holiday.
【知识点】
一般将来时应用；提纲类书面表达；节日场景写作
【点评】
本篇参考范文完全覆盖题目所有要求的要点，逻辑清晰，使用递进连接词让行文条理分明，补充的细节贴合学生日常生活实际，还合理运用了宾语从句等高分句式，用词准确地道，符合初中阶段该类写作的评分标准。同学们写这类提纲作文时，可以先标记所有必写要点，避免漏点失分，适当补充生活化的细节可以让作文内容更饱满出彩。
【难度系数】
0.7
