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六、书面表达
假如你是阳光中学八年级的学生李平,你的英国笔友玛丽对《西游记》的故事很感兴趣。请你根据下列表格中的提示,写一篇短文向她介绍中国四大古典名著之一《西游记》,并谈谈你对此书的看法。
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息;
4. 词数不少于100。
I'm glad to introduce one of the four greatest classical Chinese books to you.
假如你是阳光中学八年级的学生李平,你的英国笔友玛丽对《西游记》的故事很感兴趣。请你根据下列表格中的提示,写一篇短文向她介绍中国四大古典名著之一《西游记》,并谈谈你对此书的看法。
要求:
1. 参考提示内容,可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息;
4. 词数不少于100。
I'm glad to introduce one of the four greatest classical Chinese books to you.
It is Journey to the West, written in the 16th century by Wu Cheng'en. The novel is based on the true journey of the monk Xuanzang, who travelled to India to bring back Buddhist scriptures.
The story is full of magic and adventure. Monk Tang, the master, is helped by three strange but lively disciples: the Monkey King, who is brave and clever; Zhu Wuneng ( also called Pigsy), who is lazy yet funny; and Sha Wujing, who is quiet and loyal. They fight monsters, overcome eighty-one difficulties and finally reach the West.
I enjoy this book because the characters are vivid and the plot is exciting. The Monkey King is my favourite hero—he never gives up, even when the enemy is stronger. After reading the story, I learned that teamwork, courage and patience can help us win any "journey" in real life. If you like tales of adventure, you will love Journey to the West.
The story is full of magic and adventure. Monk Tang, the master, is helped by three strange but lively disciples: the Monkey King, who is brave and clever; Zhu Wuneng ( also called Pigsy), who is lazy yet funny; and Sha Wujing, who is quiet and loyal. They fight monsters, overcome eighty-one difficulties and finally reach the West.
I enjoy this book because the characters are vivid and the plot is exciting. The Monkey King is my favourite hero—he never gives up, even when the enemy is stronger. After reading the story, I learned that teamwork, courage and patience can help us win any "journey" in real life. If you like tales of adventure, you will love Journey to the West.
答案
One possible version:
I'm glad to introduce one of the four
greatest classical Chinese books to you. It
is Journey to the West, written in the 16th
century by Wu Cheng'en. The novel is
based on the true journey of the monk
Xuanzang, who travelled to India to bring
back Buddhist scriptures.
The story is full of magic and
adventure. Monk Tang, the master, is
helped by three strange but lively
disciples: the Monkey King, who is brave
and clever; Zhu Wuneng ( also called
Pigsy), who is lazy yet funny; and Sha
Wujing, who is quiet and loyal. They fight
monsters, overcome eighty-one difficulties
and finally reach the West.
I enjoy this book because the
characters are vivid and the plot is
exciting. The Monkey King is my favourite
hero—he never gives up, even when the
enemy is stronger. After reading the story,
I learned that teamwork, courage and
patience can help us win any "journey" in
real life. If you like tales of adventure, you
will love Journey to the West.
I'm glad to introduce one of the four
greatest classical Chinese books to you. It
is Journey to the West, written in the 16th
century by Wu Cheng'en. The novel is
based on the true journey of the monk
Xuanzang, who travelled to India to bring
back Buddhist scriptures.
The story is full of magic and
adventure. Monk Tang, the master, is
helped by three strange but lively
disciples: the Monkey King, who is brave
and clever; Zhu Wuneng ( also called
Pigsy), who is lazy yet funny; and Sha
Wujing, who is quiet and loyal. They fight
monsters, overcome eighty-one difficulties
and finally reach the West.
I enjoy this book because the
characters are vivid and the plot is
exciting. The Monkey King is my favourite
hero—he never gives up, even when the
enemy is stronger. After reading the story,
I learned that teamwork, courage and
patience can help us win any "journey" in
real life. If you like tales of adventure, you
will love Journey to the West.
解析
【分析】
这是一篇向笔友介绍中国古典名著《西游记》的书面表达题。解题思路如下：
1. 首先承接题目给出的开头句，先明确介绍的书籍是《Journey to the West》，同时点明作者信息，完成基础信息的交代；
2. 接着根据表格里的背景信息，结合玄奘取经的真实故事，说明这本书的创作依据，让内容更有说服力；
3. 然后介绍主要人物，不能只罗列名字，要补充每个人物的性格特点，让人物形象更鲜活，同时可以简单提及他们的取经经历，丰富内容；
4. 最后阐述自己的看法，包括喜欢这本书的原因，从书中获得的启示，还可以向笔友发出推荐，满足“适当发挥”的要求，同时保证词数达标。
【解析】
步骤1：开篇承接给定开头，引出书籍基本信息：点明书名《Journey to the West》，介绍作者Wu Cheng'en及成书时间，让读者快速了解书籍基础情况。
步骤2：介绍创作背景：说明这本书基于玄奘取经的真实故事，补充玄奘去印度求取佛经的细节，完善背景内容。
步骤3：介绍主要人物：分别描述唐僧师徒四人的性格特点，比如孙悟空的勇敢机智，猪八戒的慵懒有趣，沙悟净的沉默忠诚，同时简述他们一路上降妖除魔、历经磨难最终取得真经的经历，让故事内容更完整。
步骤4：阐述个人看法：说明自己喜欢这本书的原因（人物鲜活、情节精彩），点明最喜欢的角色及理由，再分享从书中得到的感悟（团队合作、勇气和耐心的重要性），最后向笔友推荐这本书，完成全文内容。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm glad to introduce one of the four
greatest classical Chinese books to you. It
is Journey to the West, written in the 16th
century by Wu Cheng'en. The novel is
based on the true journey of the monk
Xuanzang, who travelled to India to bring
back Buddhist scriptures.
The story is full of magic and
adventure. Monk Tang, the master, is
helped by three strange but lively
disciples: the Monkey King, who is brave
and clever; Zhu Wuneng ( also called
Pigsy), who is lazy yet funny; and Sha
Wujing, who is quiet and loyal. They fight
monsters, overcome eighty-one difficulties
and finally reach the West.
I enjoy this book because the
characters are vivid and the plot is
exciting. The Monkey King is my favourite
hero—he never gives up, even when the
enemy is stronger. After reading the story,
I learned that teamwork, courage and
patience can help us win any "journey" in
real life. If you like tales of adventure, you
will love Journey to the West.
【知识点】
1. 应用文书信写作
2. 名著内容英文介绍
3. 叙事议论结合写作
【点评】
这篇范文内容完整，涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，同时进行了合理发挥。文中对人物的描写生动形象，个人看法部分结合自身感悟，传递了积极的价值观，语言流畅自然，用词准确，符合书面表达的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
这是一篇向笔友介绍中国古典名著《西游记》的书面表达题。解题思路如下：
1. 首先承接题目给出的开头句，先明确介绍的书籍是《Journey to the West》，同时点明作者信息，完成基础信息的交代；
2. 接着根据表格里的背景信息，结合玄奘取经的真实故事，说明这本书的创作依据，让内容更有说服力；
3. 然后介绍主要人物，不能只罗列名字，要补充每个人物的性格特点，让人物形象更鲜活，同时可以简单提及他们的取经经历，丰富内容；
4. 最后阐述自己的看法，包括喜欢这本书的原因，从书中获得的启示，还可以向笔友发出推荐，满足“适当发挥”的要求，同时保证词数达标。
【解析】
步骤1：开篇承接给定开头，引出书籍基本信息：点明书名《Journey to the West》，介绍作者Wu Cheng'en及成书时间，让读者快速了解书籍基础情况。
步骤2：介绍创作背景：说明这本书基于玄奘取经的真实故事，补充玄奘去印度求取佛经的细节，完善背景内容。
步骤3：介绍主要人物：分别描述唐僧师徒四人的性格特点，比如孙悟空的勇敢机智，猪八戒的慵懒有趣，沙悟净的沉默忠诚，同时简述他们一路上降妖除魔、历经磨难最终取得真经的经历，让故事内容更完整。
步骤4：阐述个人看法：说明自己喜欢这本书的原因（人物鲜活、情节精彩），点明最喜欢的角色及理由，再分享从书中得到的感悟（团队合作、勇气和耐心的重要性），最后向笔友推荐这本书，完成全文内容。
【答案】
One possible version:
I'm glad to introduce one of the four
greatest classical Chinese books to you. It
is Journey to the West, written in the 16th
century by Wu Cheng'en. The novel is
based on the true journey of the monk
Xuanzang, who travelled to India to bring
back Buddhist scriptures.
The story is full of magic and
adventure. Monk Tang, the master, is
helped by three strange but lively
disciples: the Monkey King, who is brave
and clever; Zhu Wuneng ( also called
Pigsy), who is lazy yet funny; and Sha
Wujing, who is quiet and loyal. They fight
monsters, overcome eighty-one difficulties
and finally reach the West.
I enjoy this book because the
characters are vivid and the plot is
exciting. The Monkey King is my favourite
hero—he never gives up, even when the
enemy is stronger. After reading the story,
I learned that teamwork, courage and
patience can help us win any "journey" in
real life. If you like tales of adventure, you
will love Journey to the West.
【知识点】
1. 应用文书信写作
2. 名著内容英文介绍
3. 叙事议论结合写作
【点评】
这篇范文内容完整，涵盖了题目要求的所有要点，同时进行了合理发挥。文中对人物的描写生动形象，个人看法部分结合自身感悟，传递了积极的价值观，语言流畅自然，用词准确，符合书面表达的各项要求，是一篇优秀的范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
