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我们的家乡盐城是一个让人打开心扉的地方。她东临黄海、环境优美、四季分明。假如你即将参加盐城文旅举办的以“My favourite season inYancheng”为主题的演讲比赛，请自拟演讲稿，演讲内容包括以下几个方面：
1. Which is your favourite season in Yancheng?
2. What's the weather like in this season?
3. What do you usually do in this season?
4. What do you think of this season?
注意事项：词数90左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite season in Yancheng
Hello, everybody!
That's all. Thanks for listening.
思路点拨
1. 审体裁：本文是介绍最喜欢的季节的演讲稿，是一篇应用文。
2. 审内容：最喜欢的季节、季节特点、个人体验、对家乡的喜爱。
3. 审时态：一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅：需覆盖“喜欢的季节、季节特点、个人活动、对季节的看法”四个要点；90词左右，开头结尾已给出不计入总词数；行文需连贯，符合演讲稿的表达逻辑。
范文欣赏
My favourite season in Yancheng
Hello, everybody!
My favourite season in Yancheng is winter.
It usually comes in December and ends in February. It's very cold and often snows in winter.
When it's snowy, I always go out and make snowmen. Besides, I can go skiing with my friends. I think it's one of the most exciting sports. Sometimes, we have snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other and have a great time. If the snow is deep, we like to walk in the snow.
Winter is quite special and I like it very much.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
我们的家乡盐城是一个让人打开心扉的地方。她东临黄海、环境优美、四季分明。假如你即将参加盐城文旅举办的以“My favourite season inYancheng”为主题的演讲比赛，请自拟演讲稿，演讲内容包括以下几个方面：
1. Which is your favourite season in Yancheng?
2. What's the weather like in this season?
3. What do you usually do in this season?
4. What do you think of this season?
注意事项：词数90左右；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
My favourite season in Yancheng
Hello, everybody!
That's all. Thanks for listening.
思路点拨
1. 审体裁：本文是介绍最喜欢的季节的演讲稿，是一篇应用文。
2. 审内容：最喜欢的季节、季节特点、个人体验、对家乡的喜爱。
3. 审时态：一般现在时为主。
4. 审篇幅：需覆盖“喜欢的季节、季节特点、个人活动、对季节的看法”四个要点；90词左右，开头结尾已给出不计入总词数；行文需连贯，符合演讲稿的表达逻辑。
范文欣赏
My favourite season in Yancheng
Hello, everybody!
My favourite season in Yancheng is winter.
It usually comes in December and ends in February. It's very cold and often snows in winter.
When it's snowy, I always go out and make snowmen. Besides, I can go skiing with my friends. I think it's one of the most exciting sports. Sometimes, we have snowball fights. We throw snowballs at each other and have a great time. If the snow is deep, we like to walk in the snow.
Winter is quite special and I like it very much.
That's all. Thanks for listening.
答案
My favourite season in Yancheng is autumn.
The weather here is cool and sunny, the wind blows gently, and the air is full of the smell of ripe crops near the Yellow Sea. I often go cycling around the countryside with my family, and we also pick fresh fruits on the nearby farm. Sometimes I go to the seaside to enjoy the sunset with my friends. It is the most comfortable season of the year, and it brings me lots of warm sweet memories.
The weather here is cool and sunny, the wind blows gently, and the air is full of the smell of ripe crops near the Yellow Sea. I often go cycling around the countryside with my family, and we also pick fresh fruits on the nearby farm. Sometimes I go to the seaside to enjoy the sunset with my friends. It is the most comfortable season of the year, and it brings me lots of warm sweet memories.
解析
本题为译林版八年级上册主题演讲稿写作，核心要求如下：①体裁为应用文演讲稿，以一般现在时作为主导时态；②需完整覆盖4个指定要点：点明你在盐城最喜欢的季节、描述该季节的天气状况、介绍你在该季节常进行的活动、表达你对该季节的评价；③词数控制在90左右，可使用题干给出的高级表达替换基础简单句，行文连贯自然，贴合演讲场景，融入盐城本地地域特色，传递对家乡的喜爱。
（2026·无锡江南中学阶段检测）春之繁华，夏之碧叶，秋之硕果，冬之静雪，四季更迭，每一季都有它独特的韵味。你校将开展以“My favourite season in my hometown”为主题的英语演讲比赛，假如你是Peter，请你根据以下问题提示并适当发挥想象，写一篇英语演讲稿。
提示：
1. What is the weather like?
2. What does your city look like?
3. Why do you like this season? (at least two points)
4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points)
5. What do you think of your hometown in this season?
My favourite season in my hometown
提示：
1. What is the weather like?
2. What does your city look like?
3. Why do you like this season? (at least two points)
4. What activities do people enjoy doing in this season? (at least two points)
5. What do you think of your hometown in this season?
My favourite season in my hometown
Hello everyone! I'm Peter. My favourite season in my hometown is autumn.
The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it's not too hot or cold.
The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it's not too hot or cold.
People enjoy picking fruits on farms and having picnics in parks. Some also fly kites in the open air.
In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It's the most wonderful time of the year!
In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It's the most wonderful time of the year!
答案
写作能力突破
写作指导 [审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇英语演讲稿,是说明文。②时态:时态以"一般现在时"为主,符合演讲类文本的常用时态。③提示:覆盖了"天气、城市样貌、喜欢的原因、季节活动、对家乡的看法"所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己及最喜欢的季节;第二步,描述天气与城市样貌;说明喜欢的原因;介绍季节活动;第三步,评价家乡的秋天,升华主题。
[词句积累]
①be covered with 被……覆盖 ②have picnics 进行野餐
③The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats.（破折号补充说明）
One possible version:
My favourite season in my hometown
Hello everyone! I'm Peter. My favourite season in my hometown is autumn.
The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it's not too hot or cold. People enjoy picking fruits on farms and having picnics in parks. Some also fly kites in the open air.
In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It's the most wonderful time of the year!
写作指导 [审题步骤]
①体裁:本文是一篇英语演讲稿,是说明文。②时态:时态以"一般现在时"为主,符合演讲类文本的常用时态。③提示:覆盖了"天气、城市样貌、喜欢的原因、季节活动、对家乡的看法"所有要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍自己及最喜欢的季节;第二步,描述天气与城市样貌;说明喜欢的原因;介绍季节活动;第三步,评价家乡的秋天,升华主题。
[词句积累]
①be covered with 被……覆盖 ②have picnics 进行野餐
③The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats.（破折号补充说明）
One possible version:
My favourite season in my hometown
Hello everyone! I'm Peter. My favourite season in my hometown is autumn.
The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it's not too hot or cold. People enjoy picking fruits on farms and having picnics in parks. Some also fly kites in the open air.
In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It's the most wonderful time of the year!
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步要完成审题：首先明确体裁是校园英语演讲稿，格式上需要有开场问候、自我介绍，语言风格要口语化、亲切自然；时态确定以一般现在时为主，用来客观介绍家乡季节的常规特征。接下来要逐一对应题干给出的5个提示要求，不能遗漏要点：先明确自己要写的最喜欢的季节，之后依次完成天气描述、城市样貌刻画、写出至少2个喜爱该季节的理由、至少2项当地居民的特色活动，最后给出自己对这个季节里家乡的整体评价，适当补充细节让内容更饱满流畅，符合演讲的场景要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分：按照演讲稿的规范先向在场听众问好，介绍自己的身份，直接点明自己最喜欢的家乡季节，快速切入主题。
2. 主体段落：依次覆盖所有提示要点：首先描述该季节的天气特征，接着描绘城市在这个季节里的外观景色，之后给出2个及以上自己喜爱这个季节的原因，再列举2项及以上当地居民在该季节常开展的休闲活动，内容衔接自然，适当用补充说明的句式让表达更生动。
3. 收尾部分：总结自己对该季节下家乡的整体感受，升华情感，自然结束演讲。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season in my hometown
Hello everyone! I'm Peter. My favourite season in my hometown is autumn.
The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it's not too hot or cold. People enjoy picking fruits on farms and having picnics in parks. Some also fly kites in the open air.
In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It's the most wonderful time of the year!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，一般现在时运用，要点作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题主题贴合学生日常校园活动场景，写作提示清晰明确，难度适中。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏题干给出的所有要求要点，同时要符合演讲稿的格式特点，避免写成生硬的流水账，适当加入比喻类的细节描写可以给文章增色不少，拿到更高的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先第一步要完成审题：首先明确体裁是校园英语演讲稿，格式上需要有开场问候、自我介绍，语言风格要口语化、亲切自然；时态确定以一般现在时为主，用来客观介绍家乡季节的常规特征。接下来要逐一对应题干给出的5个提示要求，不能遗漏要点：先明确自己要写的最喜欢的季节，之后依次完成天气描述、城市样貌刻画、写出至少2个喜爱该季节的理由、至少2项当地居民的特色活动，最后给出自己对这个季节里家乡的整体评价，适当补充细节让内容更饱满流畅，符合演讲的场景要求。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分：按照演讲稿的规范先向在场听众问好，介绍自己的身份，直接点明自己最喜欢的家乡季节，快速切入主题。
2. 主体段落：依次覆盖所有提示要点：首先描述该季节的天气特征，接着描绘城市在这个季节里的外观景色，之后给出2个及以上自己喜爱这个季节的原因，再列举2项及以上当地居民在该季节常开展的休闲活动，内容衔接自然，适当用补充说明的句式让表达更生动。
3. 收尾部分：总结自己对该季节下家乡的整体感受，升华情感，自然结束演讲。
【答案】
One possible version:
My favourite season in my hometown
Hello everyone! I'm Peter. My favourite season in my hometown is autumn.
The weather is cool and sunny. The city is covered with golden leaves—trees look like they're wearing yellow coats. I love autumn because the air is fresh, and there are lots of delicious fruits like apples and grapes. Also, it's not too hot or cold. People enjoy picking fruits on farms and having picnics in parks. Some also fly kites in the open air.
In autumn, my hometown is beautiful and lively. It's the most wonderful time of the year!
【知识点】
英语演讲稿写作，一般现在时运用，要点作文谋篇布局
【点评】
本题主题贴合学生日常校园活动场景，写作提示清晰明确，难度适中。同学们写作时要注意不要遗漏题干给出的所有要求要点，同时要符合演讲稿的格式特点，避免写成生硬的流水账，适当加入比喻类的细节描写可以给文章增色不少，拿到更高的分数。
【难度系数】
0.6
