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五一假期即将来临,你的外国朋友杰克准备到你家做客。你和父母商量后计划带杰克去安徽黄山游玩。请你根据以下提示问题,写一篇短文提前向杰克介绍一下黄山。
Where is Mount Huangshan?
What beautiful natural scenery can tourists
enjoy there?
Why is Mount Huangshan so attractive to
tourists?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Hi Jack! Welcome to my home during the
coming May Day holiday.
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
五一假期即将来临,你的外国朋友杰克准备到你家做客。你和父母商量后计划带杰克去安徽黄山游玩。请你根据以下提示问题,写一篇短文提前向杰克介绍一下黄山。
Where is Mount Huangshan?
What beautiful natural scenery can tourists
enjoy there?
Why is Mount Huangshan so attractive to
tourists?
Please write more about it.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息,词数100词左右。
Hi Jack! Welcome to my home during the
coming May Day holiday.
My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this amazing place ahead of time.
Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province.
Covering an area of 160.6 square kilometres, it includes lots of natural wonders such as the magical sea of clouds, the well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks and comfortable hot springs.
If we get up early and head to the top of the mountain, we will be able to enjoy the beautiful sunrise. It is such a fantastic sight that you will never forget it. Every year, millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!
Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province.
Covering an area of 160.6 square kilometres, it includes lots of natural wonders such as the magical sea of clouds, the well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks and comfortable hot springs.
If we get up early and head to the top of the mountain, we will be able to enjoy the beautiful sunrise. It is such a fantastic sight that you will never forget it. Every year, millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!
请使用下面的表格完成自评并修改、誊写你的作文。
答案
One possible version:
Hi Jack! Welcome to my home during the coming May Day
holiday. My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount
Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this
amazing place ahead of time.
Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province.
Covering an area of 160.6 square kilometres, it includes lots of
natural wonders such as the magical sea of clouds, the
well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks
and comfortable hot springs.
If we get up early and head to the top of the mountain, we
will be able to enjoy the beautiful sunrise. It is such a fantastic
sight that you will never forget it. Every year, millions of tourists
from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure
we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!
Hi Jack! Welcome to my home during the coming May Day
holiday. My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount
Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this
amazing place ahead of time.
Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province.
Covering an area of 160.6 square kilometres, it includes lots of
natural wonders such as the magical sea of clouds, the
well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks
and comfortable hot springs.
If we get up early and head to the top of the mountain, we
will be able to enjoy the beautiful sunrise. It is such a fantastic
sight that you will never forget it. Every year, millions of tourists
from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure
we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!
解析
【分析】
这是一篇介绍黄山的英语应用文，写作时需紧扣提示问题：黄山的位置、自然景色、吸引游客的原因，同时要遵循要求：人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，词数约100词，内容丰富、句子逻辑清晰、语言准确。写作思路：先开头引出介绍黄山的内容，接着说明黄山的地理位置，再描述其独特自然景观，然后说明吸引游客的原因，最后表达旅行期待。
【解析】
1. 开头：问候杰克并引出介绍黄山的内容，如“Welcome to my home during the coming May Day holiday. My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this amazing place ahead of time.”；
2. 说明位置：用“Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province.”明确黄山的地理位置；
3. 描述自然景色：列举黄山的特色景观，如“the magical sea of clouds, the well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks and comfortable hot springs”；
4. 说明吸引力：补充日出等特色景观，用“enjoy the beautiful sunrise, such a fantastic sight that you will never forget it”体现黄山的魅力；
5. 结尾：总结并表达期待，如“Every year, millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!”。全程使用一般现在时，保证语言准确、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hi Jack! Welcome to my home during the coming May Day holiday. My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this amazing place ahead of time.
Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province. Covering an area of 160.6 square kilometres, it includes lots of natural wonders such as the magical sea of clouds, the well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks and comfortable hot springs.
If we get up early and head to the top of the mountain, we will be able to enjoy the beautiful sunrise. It is such a fantastic sight that you will never forget it. Every year, millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、地点表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了黄山的位置、自然景色及吸引力等内容，结构清晰，语言准确流畅，使用了丰富的词汇和句型，符合各项写作标准，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
这是一篇介绍黄山的英语应用文，写作时需紧扣提示问题：黄山的位置、自然景色、吸引游客的原因，同时要遵循要求：人称以第三人称为主，时态用一般现在时，词数约100词，内容丰富、句子逻辑清晰、语言准确。写作思路：先开头引出介绍黄山的内容，接着说明黄山的地理位置，再描述其独特自然景观，然后说明吸引游客的原因，最后表达旅行期待。
【解析】
1. 开头：问候杰克并引出介绍黄山的内容，如“Welcome to my home during the coming May Day holiday. My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this amazing place ahead of time.”；
2. 说明位置：用“Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province.”明确黄山的地理位置；
3. 描述自然景色：列举黄山的特色景观，如“the magical sea of clouds, the well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks and comfortable hot springs”；
4. 说明吸引力：补充日出等特色景观，用“enjoy the beautiful sunrise, such a fantastic sight that you will never forget it”体现黄山的魅力；
5. 结尾：总结并表达期待，如“Every year, millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!”。全程使用一般现在时，保证语言准确、逻辑连贯。
【答案】
One possible version:
Hi Jack! Welcome to my home during the coming May Day holiday. My parents and I plan to take you to visit Mount Huangshan, and now let me tell you something about this amazing place ahead of time.
Mount Huangshan lies in the south of Anhui Province. Covering an area of 160.6 square kilometres, it includes lots of natural wonders such as the magical sea of clouds, the well-known guest-greeting pine, unique strange-shaped rocks and comfortable hot springs.
If we get up early and head to the top of the mountain, we will be able to enjoy the beautiful sunrise. It is such a fantastic sight that you will never forget it. Every year, millions of tourists from all over the world come to visit Mount Huangshan. I am sure we will have an unforgettable trip there together during the holiday!
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时、地点表达
【点评】
这篇范文紧扣题目要求，完整覆盖了黄山的位置、自然景色及吸引力等内容，结构清晰，语言准确流畅，使用了丰富的词汇和句型，符合各项写作标准，是一篇优秀的介绍类短文。
【难度系数】
0.5
项目学习
中国地大物博,有许多自然奇观(桂林山水、本溪水洞、长白山天池……)。作为“地球守护者”,你需要选择家乡的一处自然奇观,研究其现状、问题及保护措施,并参考以下要点提示,制作一份英文海报,呼吁人们参与保护行动。
Where is the natural wonder?
—It's in...
What is special about it?
—It covers an area of...
—It's one of the most...places in the world.
—You can find a lot of...
—It is the most...
What problems does it face?
—...is becoming more/less...year by year.
—...will...within the next...years.
What should we do to protect it?
—Please stop...
—We should protect it by all means.
中国地大物博,有许多自然奇观(桂林山水、本溪水洞、长白山天池……)。作为“地球守护者”,你需要选择家乡的一处自然奇观,研究其现状、问题及保护措施,并参考以下要点提示,制作一份英文海报,呼吁人们参与保护行动。
Where is the natural wonder?
—It's in...
What is special about it?
—It covers an area of...
—It's one of the most...places in the world.
—You can find a lot of...
—It is the most...
What problems does it face?
—...is becoming more/less...year by year.
—...will...within the next...years.
What should we do to protect it?
—Please stop...
—We should protect it by all means.
答案
# Protect Our Beautiful Guilin Landscape!
🌍 Where is the natural wonder?
It's in Guilin, Guangxi, China.
✨ What is special about it?
—It covers an area of about 27,800 square kilometers.
—It's one of the most beautiful places in the world.
—You can find a lot of strange-shaped limestone mountains and clear winding rivers here.
—It is the most famous natural scenic spot in southern China.
⚠️ What problems does it face?
—The water quality of the Li River is becoming worse year by year because of tourists' rubbish.
—Some rare local plants will disappear within the next 10 years without proper protection.
🤝 What should we do to protect it?
—Please stop throwing any litter into the rivers or onto the mountains.
—We should protect it by all means, like planting more trees and following the tourism rules strictly.
Join us to keep Guilin's beauty forever!
🌍 Where is the natural wonder?
It's in Guilin, Guangxi, China.
✨ What is special about it?
—It covers an area of about 27,800 square kilometers.
—It's one of the most beautiful places in the world.
—You can find a lot of strange-shaped limestone mountains and clear winding rivers here.
—It is the most famous natural scenic spot in southern China.
⚠️ What problems does it face?
—The water quality of the Li River is becoming worse year by year because of tourists' rubbish.
—Some rare local plants will disappear within the next 10 years without proper protection.
🤝 What should we do to protect it?
—Please stop throwing any litter into the rivers or onto the mountains.
—We should protect it by all means, like planting more trees and following the tourism rules strictly.
Join us to keep Guilin's beauty forever!
解析
【分析】
本题要求制作一份关于家乡自然奇观的英文海报，需围绕给定的四个核心要点（位置、特色、面临的问题、保护措施）展开，同时要具备宣传呼吁性。解题思路：1. 选择知名度高、素材易整合的中国自然奇观（如桂林山水）；2. 对应每个要点填充具体内容，确保符合英文表达习惯；3. 设计海报格式，加入标题、模块区分及呼吁语，增强海报的可读性和感染力。
【解析】
1. 确定海报主题：以“Protect Our Beautiful Guilin Landscape!”为标题，明确核心内容；
2. 按要点依次撰写：
位置：说明桂林山水位于中国广西桂林；
特色：补充面积、世界地位、特色景观（石灰岩山峰与清澈河流）、知名度；
问题：指出漓江水质因游客垃圾变差、稀有植物10年内可能消失；
保护措施：提出停止乱扔垃圾、植树、遵守旅游规则；
3. 结尾加入呼吁语，号召人们参与保护，完成海报制作。
【答案】
# Protect Our Beautiful Guilin Landscape!
🌍 Where is the natural wonder?
It's in Guilin, Guangxi, China.
✨ What is special about it?
—It covers an area of about 27,800 square kilometers.
—It's one of the most beautiful places in the world.
—You can find a lot of strange-shaped limestone mountains and clear winding rivers here.
—It is the most famous natural scenic spot in southern China.
⚠️ What problems does it face?
—The water quality of the Li River is becoming worse year by year because of tourists' rubbish.
—Some rare local plants will disappear within the next 10 years without proper protection.
🤝 What should we do to protect it?
—Please stop throwing any litter into the rivers or onto the mountains.
—We should protect it by all means, like planting more trees and following the tourism rules strictly.
Join us to keep Guilin's beauty forever!
【知识点】
英文海报写作、自然保护英文表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题是跨学科实践类英语题目，将英语写作与自然保护、家乡文化结合，既锻炼学生的英语应用能力，又培养环保意识和对家乡自然景观的认知，内容贴近实际，具有较强的实践意义。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求制作一份关于家乡自然奇观的英文海报，需围绕给定的四个核心要点（位置、特色、面临的问题、保护措施）展开，同时要具备宣传呼吁性。解题思路：1. 选择知名度高、素材易整合的中国自然奇观（如桂林山水）；2. 对应每个要点填充具体内容，确保符合英文表达习惯；3. 设计海报格式，加入标题、模块区分及呼吁语，增强海报的可读性和感染力。
【解析】
1. 确定海报主题：以“Protect Our Beautiful Guilin Landscape!”为标题，明确核心内容；
2. 按要点依次撰写：
位置：说明桂林山水位于中国广西桂林；
特色：补充面积、世界地位、特色景观（石灰岩山峰与清澈河流）、知名度；
问题：指出漓江水质因游客垃圾变差、稀有植物10年内可能消失；
保护措施：提出停止乱扔垃圾、植树、遵守旅游规则；
3. 结尾加入呼吁语，号召人们参与保护，完成海报制作。
【答案】
# Protect Our Beautiful Guilin Landscape!
🌍 Where is the natural wonder?
It's in Guilin, Guangxi, China.
✨ What is special about it?
—It covers an area of about 27,800 square kilometers.
—It's one of the most beautiful places in the world.
—You can find a lot of strange-shaped limestone mountains and clear winding rivers here.
—It is the most famous natural scenic spot in southern China.
⚠️ What problems does it face?
—The water quality of the Li River is becoming worse year by year because of tourists' rubbish.
—Some rare local plants will disappear within the next 10 years without proper protection.
🤝 What should we do to protect it?
—Please stop throwing any litter into the rivers or onto the mountains.
—We should protect it by all means, like planting more trees and following the tourism rules strictly.
Join us to keep Guilin's beauty forever!
【知识点】
英文海报写作、自然保护英文表达、信息整合写作
【点评】
本题是跨学科实践类英语题目，将英语写作与自然保护、家乡文化结合，既锻炼学生的英语应用能力，又培养环保意识和对家乡自然景观的认知，内容贴近实际，具有较强的实践意义。
【难度系数】
0.5
