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假如你是汤姆，请根据下面的图片信息，以“What Are My Family Doing?”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你和家人正在做的事情。
要求:
1. 包含图片全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80。
Father Grandmother Grandfather
What Are My Family Doing?
范文欣赏
What Are My Family Doing?
It's a sunny Sunday. Now it's ten a.m.
My family are all at home. Let's see what everyone is doing!
Look! My sister is painting. She likes painting flowers. My mother is playing the piano. She likes piano music. My father is watching TV. My grandmother is watering flowers. She likes all kinds of flowers. My grandfather is drinking tea. What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.
We are all having a good time now.
We are a happy family.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和句式，通过提炼加工把提示信息有机地整合成为一篇短文。短文包含了题目所有要点，结构严谨、文笔流畅、语言准确，详尽地介绍了作者及家人正在做的事情。
在本文写作中，作者能够运用本单元所学词汇、句式，将正在做的事情进行具体的描述。如：painting、playing the piano、watching TV、doing my homework等词语的运用，体现了作者善于运用所学知识进行表达，达到学以致用的目的。同时作者在文中用“What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.”等句式使文章显得生动风趣，贴近生活。
假如你是汤姆，请根据下面的图片信息，以“What Are My Family Doing?”为题，写一篇短文，介绍你和家人正在做的事情。
要求:
1. 包含图片全部信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数不少于80。
Father Grandmother Grandfather
What Are My Family Doing?
范文欣赏
What Are My Family Doing?
It's a sunny Sunday. Now it's ten a.m.
My family are all at home. Let's see what everyone is doing!
Look! My sister is painting. She likes painting flowers. My mother is playing the piano. She likes piano music. My father is watching TV. My grandmother is watering flowers. She likes all kinds of flowers. My grandfather is drinking tea. What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.
We are all having a good time now.
We are a happy family.
【名师点评】
作者按照题目要求，运用所学词汇和句式，通过提炼加工把提示信息有机地整合成为一篇短文。短文包含了题目所有要点，结构严谨、文笔流畅、语言准确，详尽地介绍了作者及家人正在做的事情。
在本文写作中，作者能够运用本单元所学词汇、句式，将正在做的事情进行具体的描述。如：painting、playing the piano、watching TV、doing my homework等词语的运用，体现了作者善于运用所学知识进行表达，达到学以致用的目的。同时作者在文中用“What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.”等句式使文章显得生动风趣，贴近生活。
答案
What Are My Family Doing?
It's a sunny Sunday. Now it's ten a.m. My family are all at home. Let's see what everyone is doing!
Look! My sister is painting. She likes painting flowers. My mother is playing the piano. She likes piano music. My father is watching TV. My grandmother is watering flowers. She likes all kinds of flowers. My grandfather is drinking tea. What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.
We are all having a good time now. We are a happy family.
It's a sunny Sunday. Now it's ten a.m. My family are all at home. Let's see what everyone is doing!
Look! My sister is painting. She likes painting flowers. My mother is playing the piano. She likes piano music. My father is watching TV. My grandmother is watering flowers. She likes all kinds of flowers. My grandfather is drinking tea. What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.
We are all having a good time now. We are a happy family.
解析
【分析】
首先明确写作任务：以汤姆的身份，围绕题目“What Are My Family Doing?”介绍家人正在做的事，需包含图片中所有家人（爸爸、奶奶、爷爷）的活动，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。解题思路：1. 确定时态为现在进行时（be + doing），用于描述正在进行的动作；2. 开头交代时间（如周日上午十点）和场景（家人都在家），引出下文；3. 依次描述每个家人的活动，补充合理细节（如家人的爱好）；4. 结尾总结家庭氛围，升华主题。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：点明时间与场景，引出家人活动的主题；2. 中间：用“Look!”引导，逐个描述家人的动作，运用现在进行时结构，适当补充家人的爱好使内容充实；3. 结尾：总结家庭氛围，表达幸福的感受。具体写作需确保包含所有要点，满足词数要求，语言准确流畅。
【答案】
What Are My Family Doing?
It's a sunny Sunday. Now it's ten a.m. My family are all at home. Let's see what everyone is doing!
Look! My sister is painting. She likes painting flowers. My mother is playing the piano. She likes piano music. My father is watching TV. My grandmother is watering flowers. She likes all kinds of flowers. My grandfather is drinking tea. What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.
We are all having a good time now. We are a happy family.
【知识点】
现在进行时；英语短文写作；家庭成员话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，以第一人称视角展开，运用现在进行时准确描述了家人的活动，包含所有要点，结构清晰，语言流畅，适当补充家人爱好使内容生动，体现了对所学时态和词汇的灵活运用，达到学以致用的目的。
【难度系数】
0.6
首先明确写作任务：以汤姆的身份，围绕题目“What Are My Family Doing?”介绍家人正在做的事，需包含图片中所有家人（爸爸、奶奶、爷爷）的活动，可适当发挥，词数不少于80。解题思路：1. 确定时态为现在进行时（be + doing），用于描述正在进行的动作；2. 开头交代时间（如周日上午十点）和场景（家人都在家），引出下文；3. 依次描述每个家人的活动，补充合理细节（如家人的爱好）；4. 结尾总结家庭氛围，升华主题。
【解析】
写作步骤：1. 开头：点明时间与场景，引出家人活动的主题；2. 中间：用“Look!”引导，逐个描述家人的动作，运用现在进行时结构，适当补充家人的爱好使内容充实；3. 结尾：总结家庭氛围，表达幸福的感受。具体写作需确保包含所有要点，满足词数要求，语言准确流畅。
【答案】
What Are My Family Doing?
It's a sunny Sunday. Now it's ten a.m. My family are all at home. Let's see what everyone is doing!
Look! My sister is painting. She likes painting flowers. My mother is playing the piano. She likes piano music. My father is watching TV. My grandmother is watering flowers. She likes all kinds of flowers. My grandfather is drinking tea. What am I doing now? Haha, I am doing my homework.
We are all having a good time now. We are a happy family.
【知识点】
现在进行时；英语短文写作；家庭成员话题表达
【点评】
本文紧扣题目要求，以第一人称视角展开，运用现在进行时准确描述了家人的活动，包含所有要点，结构清晰，语言流畅，适当补充家人爱好使内容生动，体现了对所学时态和词汇的灵活运用，达到学以致用的目的。
【难度系数】
0.6
