四、假如你是动物园的一名讲解员,今天你将带领阳光中学的学生参观动物园。请你挑选几种孩子们感兴趣的动物,设计好参观路线,用英语写一篇讲解稿,为他们讲解这些动物的外形特征、生活习性等。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息;
2. 词数 70 左右。
写作要求:
1. 短文应包含以上所有提示信息;
2. 词数 70 左右。
答案
One possible version:
Welcome to our zoo, boys and girls!
First, let’s see the lions. My favourite animal is the lion. Lions are quite strong. They have golden fur. They can run very fast. Then we’ll see the monkeys. They are quite playful. They have long tails. They run and jump in the trees happily every day. Finally, we’ll see the giraffes. They are quite tall. They have long necks. They can eat leaves from tall trees.
I hope all of you can have a good time today.
Welcome to our zoo, boys and girls!
First, let’s see the lions. My favourite animal is the lion. Lions are quite strong. They have golden fur. They can run very fast. Then we’ll see the monkeys. They are quite playful. They have long tails. They run and jump in the trees happily every day. Finally, we’ll see the giraffes. They are quite tall. They have long necks. They can eat leaves from tall trees.
I hope all of you can have a good time today.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心身份是动物园讲解员,受众是中学生,整体语气要亲切口语化。第一步先写开篇欢迎语,快速切入参观主题;第二步要设计清晰的参观动线,用first、then、finally这类表先后顺序的词串联路线,挑选狮子、猴子、长颈鹿这类学生熟悉的感兴趣的动物,每介绍一种动物就同步补充对应的外形特征和生活习性细节,覆盖题干所有要求;最后收尾送上游玩祝福,全程控制词数在70左右,不要使用过于复杂的长难句,保证内容通顺易懂。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分:用简单的问候语欢迎来访的学生,自然开启本次动物园参观讲解,符合讲解员的身份设定。
2. 主体部分:用明确的顺序词串联参观路线,依次介绍狮子、猴子、长颈鹿三种动物,分别对应介绍它们的外形(金色毛发、长尾巴、长脖子)和生活习性(奔跑速度快、爱攀爬跳跃、取食高树树叶),完全覆盖题干要求的所有要点。
3. 结尾部分:送上游玩祝福,让整篇讲解稿结构完整,符合场景逻辑。
【答案】
One possible version:
Welcome to our zoo, boys and girls!
First, let’s see the lions. My favourite animal is the lion. Lions are quite strong. They have golden fur. They can run very fast. Then we’ll see the monkeys. They are quite playful. They have long tails. They run and jump in the trees happily every day. Finally, we’ll see the giraffes. They are quite tall. They have long necks. They can eat leaves from tall trees.
I hope all of you can have a good time today.
【知识点】
英文讲解稿写作;动物特征描述;逻辑顺序表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题干所有要求,参观路线清晰明了,选取的都是青少年感兴趣的常见动物,外形和习性的描述准确生动,语言简单口语化,非常适配讲解员面向中学生讲解的场景,词数符合要求,结构完整首尾呼应,很适合初中低年级学生模仿练习。
【难度系数】
0.7
拿到这道写作题首先要明确核心身份是动物园讲解员,受众是中学生,整体语气要亲切口语化。第一步先写开篇欢迎语,快速切入参观主题;第二步要设计清晰的参观动线,用first、then、finally这类表先后顺序的词串联路线,挑选狮子、猴子、长颈鹿这类学生熟悉的感兴趣的动物,每介绍一种动物就同步补充对应的外形特征和生活习性细节,覆盖题干所有要求;最后收尾送上游玩祝福,全程控制词数在70左右,不要使用过于复杂的长难句,保证内容通顺易懂。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分:用简单的问候语欢迎来访的学生,自然开启本次动物园参观讲解,符合讲解员的身份设定。
2. 主体部分:用明确的顺序词串联参观路线,依次介绍狮子、猴子、长颈鹿三种动物,分别对应介绍它们的外形(金色毛发、长尾巴、长脖子)和生活习性(奔跑速度快、爱攀爬跳跃、取食高树树叶),完全覆盖题干要求的所有要点。
3. 结尾部分:送上游玩祝福,让整篇讲解稿结构完整,符合场景逻辑。
【答案】
One possible version:
Welcome to our zoo, boys and girls!
First, let’s see the lions. My favourite animal is the lion. Lions are quite strong. They have golden fur. They can run very fast. Then we’ll see the monkeys. They are quite playful. They have long tails. They run and jump in the trees happily every day. Finally, we’ll see the giraffes. They are quite tall. They have long necks. They can eat leaves from tall trees.
I hope all of you can have a good time today.
【知识点】
英文讲解稿写作;动物特征描述;逻辑顺序表达
【点评】
本篇范文完全贴合题干所有要求,参观路线清晰明了,选取的都是青少年感兴趣的常见动物,外形和习性的描述准确生动,语言简单口语化,非常适配讲解员面向中学生讲解的场景,词数符合要求,结构完整首尾呼应,很适合初中低年级学生模仿练习。
【难度系数】
0.7
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