第二部分 书面表达
假如你是来自七年级一班的李华。你的美国笔友David想要和同学一起表演一个故事作为演出节目,但是他不知道什么故事受欢迎,因此向你询问。请用英语写一个你最喜欢的小故事,并告诉他这个故事讲了什么,以及它告诉我们什么道理。
要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名、地名和校名;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰;
4.词数不少于80词。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
假如你是来自七年级一班的李华。你的美国笔友David想要和同学一起表演一个故事作为演出节目,但是他不知道什么故事受欢迎,因此向你询问。请用英语写一个你最喜欢的小故事,并告诉他这个故事讲了什么,以及它告诉我们什么道理。
要求:1.不得使用真实的姓名、地名和校名;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;
3.字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰;
4.词数不少于80词。
Dear David,
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear David,
I'm glad to hear that you will put on a story show with your classmates. My favorite story is *The Tortoise and the Hare*, and it is very popular with students around the world. I think it is a perfect choice for your performance.
The story is about a running race between a rabbit and a tortoise. The rabbit is sure he will win because he runs much faster than the tortoise. So he stops to rest and even falls asleep halfway to the finish line. But the slow tortoise never gives up, he keeps moving on step by step all the time. Finally, the tortoise gets to the end first before the rabbit wakes up.
This story tells us we can never be proud and stop working hard. Only if we keep trying, we can get success in the end. It is also very easy for you and your classmates to act it out. I believe your show will be wonderful!
Yours,
Li Hua
I'm glad to hear that you will put on a story show with your classmates. My favorite story is *The Tortoise and the Hare*, and it is very popular with students around the world. I think it is a perfect choice for your performance.
The story is about a running race between a rabbit and a tortoise. The rabbit is sure he will win because he runs much faster than the tortoise. So he stops to rest and even falls asleep halfway to the finish line. But the slow tortoise never gives up, he keeps moving on step by step all the time. Finally, the tortoise gets to the end first before the rabbit wakes up.
This story tells us we can never be proud and stop working hard. Only if we keep trying, we can get success in the end. It is also very easy for you and your classmates to act it out. I believe your show will be wonderful!
Yours,
Li Hua
解析
这是一篇建议类书信写作,符合七年级写作要求的完成思路如下:
1. 审题明确:写作核心是回应笔友David的求助,介绍一个适合表演的受欢迎小故事,清晰交代故事内容和对应的寓意,词数不少于80,不得出现真实个人信息。
2. 选材适配:选择角色少、情节简单、大众熟知的《龟兔赛跑》作为推荐故事,完全贴合七年级的词汇储备,故事生动有趣、寓意清晰,非常适合学生编排成小演出节目。
3. 行文结构:开篇先回应对方的需求,接着完整介绍故事的完整情节,最后点明故事传递的道理,给出适配表演的小提示,语气自然符合笔友交流的语境,行文连贯流畅。
1. 审题明确:写作核心是回应笔友David的求助,介绍一个适合表演的受欢迎小故事,清晰交代故事内容和对应的寓意,词数不少于80,不得出现真实个人信息。
2. 选材适配:选择角色少、情节简单、大众熟知的《龟兔赛跑》作为推荐故事,完全贴合七年级的词汇储备,故事生动有趣、寓意清晰,非常适合学生编排成小演出节目。
3. 行文结构:开篇先回应对方的需求,接着完整介绍故事的完整情节,最后点明故事传递的道理,给出适配表演的小提示,语气自然符合笔友交流的语境,行文连贯流畅。
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