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五、Write.(写一写。)
Bonnie 的冰城之旅收获满满,你也一定有难忘的游玩经历吧! 根据思维导图的提示,写一篇题为“My Happy Trip in Harbin”的短文,不少于6句话。
Bonnie 的冰城之旅收获满满,你也一定有难忘的游玩经历吧! 根据思维导图的提示,写一篇题为“My Happy Trip in Harbin”的短文,不少于6句话。
答案
My Happy Trip in Harbin
Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my parents. It was very cold there, and the whole city was full of ice and snow. We visited the Harbin Ice and Snow World first, all the colourful ice buildings there looked amazing. Then we went to the frozen Songhua River, we skated and made a lovely snowman there. We also tried lots of delicious local food, they tasted so great. I felt very happy and excited during this trip, I hope I can go to Harbin again next year.
Last winter holiday, I went to Harbin with my parents. It was very cold there, and the whole city was full of ice and snow. We visited the Harbin Ice and Snow World first, all the colourful ice buildings there looked amazing. Then we went to the frozen Songhua River, we skated and made a lovely snowman there. We also tried lots of delicious local food, they tasted so great. I felt very happy and excited during this trip, I hope I can go to Harbin again next year.
解析
本次写作需要紧扣题目给出的思维导图提示，完整涵盖五个写作要点：① 说明前往哈尔滨的时间；② 介绍一同出行的人物；③ 列举自己参观游览的地点；④ 描述在哈尔滨开展的游玩活动；⑤ 表达自己本次旅行的感受。作文整体使用一般过去时，语句通顺，满足不少于6句话的要求，使用符合六年级学习范围的词汇和语法即可。
