Ⅵ. 书面表达。
家乡是我们成长的地方,承载着美好的回忆,也见证着时代的变迁。近几年,随着社会的不断发展,你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面都发生了哪些变化?某英文杂志社正在举办以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍家乡的变化并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1. 字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,可适当发挥;
2. 80 词左右。
Great Changes in My Hometown
家乡是我们成长的地方,承载着美好的回忆,也见证着时代的变迁。近几年,随着社会的不断发展,你的家乡在生活环境、交通设施以及人们的生活方式等方面都发生了哪些变化?某英文杂志社正在举办以“Great Changes in My Hometown”为主题的征文活动,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,介绍家乡的变化并谈谈你的感受。
要求:
1. 字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,可适当发挥;
2. 80 词左右。
Great Changes in My Hometown
答案
One possible version:
Great Changes in My Hometown
Over the past few years, my hometown has changed a lot. Firstly, the living environment has improved greatly. There are more parks and green spaces across the city. Secondly, the transport system has also improved. The roads have become wider, and new streetlights make walking at night safer. Buses offer more comfortable rides. The high-speed railway has made travelling faster and easier. Thirdly, people’s daily lives have changed with the development of technology. Even my grandmother, who didn’t know much about phones, can now make video calls and shop online.
I’m amazed by the changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future.
Great Changes in My Hometown
Over the past few years, my hometown has changed a lot. Firstly, the living environment has improved greatly. There are more parks and green spaces across the city. Secondly, the transport system has also improved. The roads have become wider, and new streetlights make walking at night safer. Buses offer more comfortable rides. The high-speed railway has made travelling faster and easier. Thirdly, people’s daily lives have changed with the development of technology. Even my grandmother, who didn’t know much about phones, can now make video calls and shop online.
I’m amazed by the changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future.
解析
【分析】
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“Great Changes in My Hometown”,要求介绍家乡在生活环境、交通设施、人们生活方式的变化并谈谈感受,词数约80词。解题思路:1. 开篇总述家乡近年变化大;2. 用连接词分三个维度具体阐述变化:生活环境(新增公园绿地)、交通(拓宽道路、增设路灯、公交更舒适、高铁便利)、生活方式(老人也会用智能设备视频通话、网购);3. 结尾表达对家乡变化的惊讶与对未来的期待,确保语言简洁、要点齐全、符合词数要求。
【解析】
先总起说明家乡变化大,再用firstly、secondly、thirdly分别从环境、交通、生活方式展开,最后表达感受,组织符合要求的英语短文:
Great Changes in My Hometown
Over the past few years, my hometown has changed a lot. Firstly, the living environment has improved greatly. There are more parks and green spaces across the city. Secondly, the transport system has also improved. The roads have become wider, and new streetlights make walking at night safer. Buses offer more comfortable rides. The high-speed railway has made travelling faster and easier. Thirdly, people’s daily lives have changed with the development of technology. Even my grandmother, who didn’t know much about phones, can now make video calls and shop online.
I’m amazed by the changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future.
【答案】
Great Changes in My Hometown
Over the past few years, my hometown has changed a lot. Firstly, the living environment has improved greatly. There are more parks and green spaces across the city. Secondly, the transport system has also improved. The roads have become wider, and new streetlights make walking at night safer. Buses offer more comfortable rides. The high-speed railway has made travelling faster and easier. Thirdly, people’s daily lives have changed with the development of technology. Even my grandmother, who didn’t know much about phones, can now make video calls and shop online.
I’m amazed by the changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、征文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,从生活环境、交通、生活方式三个维度具体展现家乡的变化,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合题目要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题为英语书面表达题,主题是“Great Changes in My Hometown”,要求介绍家乡在生活环境、交通设施、人们生活方式的变化并谈谈感受,词数约80词。解题思路:1. 开篇总述家乡近年变化大;2. 用连接词分三个维度具体阐述变化:生活环境(新增公园绿地)、交通(拓宽道路、增设路灯、公交更舒适、高铁便利)、生活方式(老人也会用智能设备视频通话、网购);3. 结尾表达对家乡变化的惊讶与对未来的期待,确保语言简洁、要点齐全、符合词数要求。
【解析】
先总起说明家乡变化大,再用firstly、secondly、thirdly分别从环境、交通、生活方式展开,最后表达感受,组织符合要求的英语短文:
Great Changes in My Hometown
Over the past few years, my hometown has changed a lot. Firstly, the living environment has improved greatly. There are more parks and green spaces across the city. Secondly, the transport system has also improved. The roads have become wider, and new streetlights make walking at night safer. Buses offer more comfortable rides. The high-speed railway has made travelling faster and easier. Thirdly, people’s daily lives have changed with the development of technology. Even my grandmother, who didn’t know much about phones, can now make video calls and shop online.
I’m amazed by the changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future.
【答案】
Great Changes in My Hometown
Over the past few years, my hometown has changed a lot. Firstly, the living environment has improved greatly. There are more parks and green spaces across the city. Secondly, the transport system has also improved. The roads have become wider, and new streetlights make walking at night safer. Buses offer more comfortable rides. The high-speed railway has made travelling faster and easier. Thirdly, people’s daily lives have changed with the development of technology. Even my grandmother, who didn’t know much about phones, can now make video calls and shop online.
I’m amazed by the changes in my hometown. I believe it will become better and better in the future.
【知识点】
英语书面表达、话题作文、征文写作
【点评】
本文紧扣征文主题,从生活环境、交通、生活方式三个维度具体展现家乡的变化,结构清晰,逻辑连贯,语言流畅自然,情感真挚,符合题目要求,是一篇符合标准的书面表达范文。
【难度系数】
0.5
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