八、写作(15分)
假设你是李华,为了交流学习经验、提高学习效率,21st Century 正在举办以“How to Be a Good Learner?”为主题的论坛。请你踊跃投稿,给该报写一封邮件谈谈你的感受。

要求:1. 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
2. 词数为100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Yours,
Li Hua
假设你是李华,为了交流学习经验、提高学习效率,21st Century 正在举办以“How to Be a Good Learner?”为主题的论坛。请你踊跃投稿,给该报写一封邮件谈谈你的感受。
要求:1. 短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥。
2. 词数为100左右。开头和结尾已给出,不计人总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
Being a good learner is important for students. Here are my ideas on how to achieve it.First, developing good habits helps a lot. We should get ready for lessons before class and go over homework carefully after class. A regular study schedule also matters.Second, studying in groups and helping each other works well. When we discuss problems together, we share ideas and learn from one another. My classmates and I often do this in math class.Besides, doing sports is necessary. It keeps us healthy and energetic, making study more efficient.I hope these tips help students learn better.
Yours,
Li Hua
答案
Dear Sir/Madam,Being a good learner is important for students. Here are my ideas on how to achieve it.First, developing good habits helps a lot. We should get ready for lessons before class and go over homework carefully after class. A regular study schedule also matters.Second, studying in groups and helping each other works well. When we discuss problems together, we share ideas and learn from one another. My classmates and I often do this in math class.Besides, doing sports is necessary. It keeps us healthy and energetic, making study more efficient.I hope these tips help students learn better.Yours,Li Hua
解析
1. 确定写作要点:从提示要点(habit, study in groups/help each other, do sports等)中选"养成好习惯"和"小组互助学习"作为提示要点,补充"劳逸结合(做运动)"。2. 结构设计:开头总述重要性,中间分述三个要点(好习惯、小组学习、运动),结尾总结。3. 语言规范:使用简单句和复合句,衔接词(First, Second, Besides)连贯内容,控制词数在100左右。
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