写作指导
初中三年的校园生活里,总有一些事让人难忘。请写一篇80词左右的英语短文,聚焦一件难忘的校园往事,详细描述事情经过、当时的心情,分享从中获得的启发以及未来的行动打算。
提示词语:
unforgettable, happy, learn, brave, try, progress
提示问题:
1. What unforgettable thing happened to you at school?
2. How did you feel at that time and what did you learn from it?
3. What will you do in the future based on this experience?
An Unforgettable School Memory
Hello everyone! Looking back on my three-year junior high school life, there is one unforgettable thing that I always remember.
写作佳句
1. 九年级的英语讲故事比赛是我最难忘的经历,它让我变得更勇敢。
The English story-telling competition in Grade 9 is my most unforgettable experience—it made me
2. 我同桌课后帮我练习,耐心纠正我的发音,这让我非常感动。
My deskmate helped me practise after class and corrected my pronunciation patiently, which made me
3. 虽然我没获奖,但老师和同学们的欢呼让我充满自信。
Though I didn't win a prize, the cheers from teachers and classmates
4. 这次经历教会我,遇到困难时不要放弃,要勇于尝试。
This experience taught me that we shouldn't give up when facing difficulties, but should
5. 未来我会参加更多校园活动,努力在英语学习上取得更大进步。
In the future, I will take part in more school activities and
初中三年的校园生活里,总有一些事让人难忘。请写一篇80词左右的英语短文,聚焦一件难忘的校园往事,详细描述事情经过、当时的心情,分享从中获得的启发以及未来的行动打算。
提示词语:
unforgettable, happy, learn, brave, try, progress
提示问题:
1. What unforgettable thing happened to you at school?
2. How did you feel at that time and what did you learn from it?
3. What will you do in the future based on this experience?
An Unforgettable School Memory
Hello everyone! Looking back on my three-year junior high school life, there is one unforgettable thing that I always remember.
写作佳句
1. 九年级的英语讲故事比赛是我最难忘的经历,它让我变得更勇敢。
The English story-telling competition in Grade 9 is my most unforgettable experience—it made me
become
braver
.2. 我同桌课后帮我练习,耐心纠正我的发音,这让我非常感动。
My deskmate helped me practise after class and corrected my pronunciation patiently, which made me
feel
very / deeply
moved
.3. 虽然我没获奖,但老师和同学们的欢呼让我充满自信。
Though I didn't win a prize, the cheers from teachers and classmates
filled me
with
confidence.4. 这次经历教会我,遇到困难时不要放弃,要勇于尝试。
This experience taught me that we shouldn't give up when facing difficulties, but should
have
the
courage
to
try.5. 未来我会参加更多校园活动,努力在英语学习上取得更大进步。
In the future, I will take part in more school activities and
work
hard
to
make
greater progress in English study.答案
1. become braver
2. feel very / deeply moved
3. filled me with
4. have the courage to
5. work hard to make
2. feel very / deeply moved
3. filled me with
4. have the courage to
5. work hard to make
解析
【分析】本题为英语写作补全题,需结合句子语境、提示词语及固定搭配填写合适短语。需先分析每个句子的语义与结构:1. 句子表达比赛让“我”更勇敢,需用“make sb + 形容词比较级”结构;2. 句子表达同桌帮助带来的感受,需填表情绪的短语;3. 句子表达欢呼对“我”的影响,需用“fill sb with”结构;4. 句子表达勇于尝试的含义,需用固定搭配;5. 句子表达未来的行动,需结合“努力做某事”与“取得进步”的短语。
【解析】1. 根据“make sb + 形容词比较级”结构及提示词brave,填become braver;2. 结合语境,同桌的帮助让“我”非常感动,填feel very moved;3. 表示“使某人充满”用fill sb with,此处为过去式,填filled me with;4. “勇于做某事”的固定搭配为have the courage to do,填have the courage to;5. “努力做某事”为work hard to do,“取得进步”为make progress,结合语境填work hard to make。
【答案】1. become braver 2. feel very moved 3. filled me with 4. have the courage to 5. work hard to make
【知识点】英语固定短语搭配、形容词比较级用法、动词短语运用
【点评】本题围绕校园难忘经历的写作,考查初中英语常用短语的掌握,需结合语境准确运用固定搭配,难度适中,适合初中学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】1. 根据“make sb + 形容词比较级”结构及提示词brave,填become braver;2. 结合语境,同桌的帮助让“我”非常感动,填feel very moved;3. 表示“使某人充满”用fill sb with,此处为过去式,填filled me with;4. “勇于做某事”的固定搭配为have the courage to do,填have the courage to;5. “努力做某事”为work hard to do,“取得进步”为make progress,结合语境填work hard to make。
【答案】1. become braver 2. feel very moved 3. filled me with 4. have the courage to 5. work hard to make
【知识点】英语固定短语搭配、形容词比较级用法、动词短语运用
【点评】本题围绕校园难忘经历的写作,考查初中英语常用短语的掌握,需结合语境准确运用固定搭配,难度适中,适合初中学生练习。
【难度系数】0.6
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