典例赏析
假设学校正在举办一场以“My Own AI Robot”为主题的英语征文比赛，要求学生设计一个属于自己的AI机器人，分享它的特别之处和设计灵感。请根据以下要点提示完成征文。

要求:1.须包含所有要点，可适当增加细节；
2.词数80~100（首句已给出，不计入总词数）。
My Own AI Robot
AI robots are now loved by many people, and I’d like to share one that I designed with you.


审题指导：
1.体裁：说明文 2.时态：一般现在时为主 3.人称：第三人称为主
写作框架：

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优秀范文：

My robot is a home helper which can make our daily life much easier. It can clean the house, cook simple meals and remind family members of important plans like taking medicine. I designed it because my parents are always busy with work and have little time to look after my sick grandma. This robot can take good care of her when we are out. Using it makes our life far more convenient, and all my family love it very much.

【分析】
首先审题确定写作要素：体裁为说明文，时态以一般现在时为主，人称用第三人称。接着明确写作要点：需介绍AI机器人的特别之处（功能）和设计灵感。功能可围绕家务、生活辅助展开，设计灵感结合实际生活场景（如家人忙碌需照顾长辈），最后衔接首句组织内容，确保词数80~100，语言连贯。
【解析】
1. 确定写作框架：首句已给出，需先介绍机器人的功能，再说明设计灵感，最后补充使用效果；
2. 整合要点：功能部分写机器人可清洁房屋、做简单饭菜、提醒家人重要计划；设计灵感结合父母工作忙、无暇照顾生病奶奶的实际情况；
3. 语言组织：用简单句和复合句衔接，确保时态正确，符合词数要求，内容完整。
【答案】
My robot is a home helper which can make our daily life much easier. It can clean the house, cook simple meals and remind family members of important plans like taking medicine. I designed it because my parents are always busy with work and have little time to look after my sick grandma. This robot can take good care of her when we are out. Using it makes our life far more convenient, and all my family love it very much.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般现在时运用、要点整合写作
【点评】
本文紧扣主题，完整涵盖机器人功能、设计灵感等要求要点，语言简洁流畅，时态人称正确，符合征文的体裁和词数要求，是一篇优秀的习作。
【难度系数】
0.5