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(2026·江苏宿迁宿豫区一模改编)“吾日三省吾身”的意思是每天反思自己的言行以提升自己。请你以“My ways to improve myself”为题,根据以下思维导图并结合自身情况介绍自我提升的方式。
confident, ……………
Build a good personality
organized,……………
reading every day,……………
My ways to improve myself
Develo图9d habits
exercise more,……………
be polite to others,……………
Have good manners
【写作要求】
1.内容须涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.词数90左右。开头已给出的部分，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My ways to improve myself
The famous saying“I reflect on myself three times a day” tells us the importance of self-improvement. I have my own ways to become better.
confident, ……………
Build a good personality
organized,……………
reading every day,……………
My ways to improve myself
Develo图9d habits
exercise more,……………
be polite to others,……………
Have good manners
【写作要求】
1.内容须涵盖以上所有要点，可适当发挥。
2.词数90左右。开头已给出的部分，不计入总词数。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名。
My ways to improve myself
The famous saying“I reflect on myself three times a day” tells us the importance of self-improvement. I have my own ways to become better.
答案
One possible version
My ways to improve myself
The famous saying “I reflect on myself three times a day” tells us the importance of self-improvement. I have my own ways to become better.
First, I try to build a good personality. I work to be more confident by speaking up in class. Also, I keep my desk tidy to be organized. Second, I develop good habits. I read for half an hour every day to learn new things. I also exercise more to stay healthy. Third, I always have good manners. I am polite to others by saying “please” and “thank you”. Besides, I listen carefully when others talk and never interrupt them.
These ways help me grow every day. I believe self-improvement makes life better.
My ways to improve myself
The famous saying “I reflect on myself three times a day” tells us the importance of self-improvement. I have my own ways to become better.
First, I try to build a good personality. I work to be more confident by speaking up in class. Also, I keep my desk tidy to be organized. Second, I develop good habits. I read for half an hour every day to learn new things. I also exercise more to stay healthy. Third, I always have good manners. I am polite to others by saying “please” and “thank you”. Besides, I listen carefully when others talk and never interrupt them.
These ways help me grow every day. I believe self-improvement makes life better.
解析
【分析】这是一道英语命题写作题，要求围绕“My ways to improve myself”主题，结合给定思维导图的三个核心模块（塑造好性格、养成好习惯、保持好礼仪）展开，需涵盖所有要点并适当发挥，词数90左右，开头已给出。解题思路：先承接开头，分三个层次对应思维导图的三个模块，每个模块补充具体行为细节，最后总结升华，确保内容完整、结构清晰、语言通顺。
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接已给开头，明确将从三个方面介绍自我提升的方式；2. 围绕“Build a good personality”补充细节：通过课堂发言提升自信，整理书桌保持有条理；3. 围绕“Develop good habits”补充细节：每天阅读半小时，多锻炼保持健康；4. 围绕“Have good manners”补充细节：使用礼貌用语，不打断他人讲话；5. 结尾总结，呼应主题，表达自我提升的意义。
【答案】One possible version
My ways to improve myself
The famous saying “I reflect on myself three times a day” tells us the importance of self-improvement. I have my own ways to become better.
First, I try to build a good personality. I work to be more confident by speaking up in class. Also, I keep my desk tidy to be organized. Second, I develop good habits. I read for half an hour every day to learn new things. I also exercise more to stay healthy. Third, I always have good manners. I am polite to others by saying “please” and “thank you”. Besides, I listen carefully when others talk and never interrupt them.
These ways help me grow every day. I believe self-improvement makes life better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点整合写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，补充的细节合理恰当，结构清晰（总分总），语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】写作步骤：1. 承接已给开头，明确将从三个方面介绍自我提升的方式；2. 围绕“Build a good personality”补充细节：通过课堂发言提升自信，整理书桌保持有条理；3. 围绕“Develop good habits”补充细节：每天阅读半小时，多锻炼保持健康；4. 围绕“Have good manners”补充细节：使用礼貌用语，不打断他人讲话；5. 结尾总结，呼应主题，表达自我提升的意义。
【答案】One possible version
My ways to improve myself
The famous saying “I reflect on myself three times a day” tells us the importance of self-improvement. I have my own ways to become better.
First, I try to build a good personality. I work to be more confident by speaking up in class. Also, I keep my desk tidy to be organized. Second, I develop good habits. I read for half an hour every day to learn new things. I also exercise more to stay healthy. Third, I always have good manners. I am polite to others by saying “please” and “thank you”. Besides, I listen carefully when others talk and never interrupt them.
These ways help me grow every day. I believe self-improvement makes life better.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、要点整合写作
【点评】本文紧扣主题，完整覆盖所有要求要点，补充的细节合理恰当，结构清晰（总分总），语言通顺流畅，符合词数要求，是一篇符合标准的英语写作范文。
【难度系数】0.6
