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16. 请根据要求完成短文写作。
假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter计划来中国旅行。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一封邮件，向他推荐一个最令你难忘的旅游城市。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad you're going to travel in China.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
16. 请根据要求完成短文写作。
假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter计划来中国旅行。请你根据以下思维导图的提示，用英文写一封邮件，向他推荐一个最令你难忘的旅游城市。
注意：
(1)可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。
(2)不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和真实姓名。
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。作文开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
I'm glad you're going to travel in China.
I strongly suggest a trip to Beijing.
As the capital of China, it is one of the liveliest cities in the world! There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter is long nor too hot. Besides, the local food tastes so delicious that you should try it, especially the Beijing roast duck.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful experience in Beijing. I can't wait to see you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
答案
16.
Dear Peter,
I'm glad you're going to travel in China. I strongly suggest a trip to Beijing.
As the capital of China, it is one of the liveliest cities in the world! There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter is long nor too hot. Besides, the local food tastes so delicious that you should try it, especially the Beijing roast duck.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful experience in Beijing. I can't wait to see you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
Dear Peter,
I'm glad you're going to travel in China. I strongly suggest a trip to Beijing.
As the capital of China, it is one of the liveliest cities in the world! There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter is long nor too hot. Besides, the local food tastes so delicious that you should try it, especially the Beijing roast duck.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful experience in Beijing. I can't wait to see you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
解析
【分析】
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Peter写邮件推荐中国的旅游城市，需围绕思维导图的三个核心要点展开：推荐旅游城市、具体描述该城市（名胜古迹、气候等）、表达期待。首先确定推荐城市（如北京），接着围绕该城市补充典型名胜、气候特点、特色美食等拓展内容，最后表达对Peter旅行的期待，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出，先明确推荐的城市为北京；
2. 具体描述北京：作为中国首都，列举长城、故宫、颐和园等名胜古迹，说明其北方城市的气候特点（冬季较长但不太炎热），补充北京烤鸭等特色美食；
3. 最后表达对Peter在北京旅行的期待，完成邮件写作。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad you're going to travel in China. I strongly suggest a trip to Beijing.
As the capital of China, it is one of the liveliest cities in the world! There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter is long nor too hot. Besides, the local food tastes so delicious that you should try it, especially the Beijing roast duck.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful experience in Beijing. I can't wait to see you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达；邮件写作；旅游话题
【点评】
本文结构清晰，符合邮件格式，内容紧扣思维导图要点，涵盖推荐城市、名胜古迹、气候、特色美食及期待，语言流畅自然，词数符合要求，是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以李华的身份给笔友Peter写邮件推荐中国的旅游城市，需围绕思维导图的三个核心要点展开：推荐旅游城市、具体描述该城市（名胜古迹、气候等）、表达期待。首先确定推荐城市（如北京），接着围绕该城市补充典型名胜、气候特点、特色美食等拓展内容，最后表达对Peter旅行的期待，确保语句连贯、符合词数要求，不出现真实信息。
【解析】
1. 开头已给出，先明确推荐的城市为北京；
2. 具体描述北京：作为中国首都，列举长城、故宫、颐和园等名胜古迹，说明其北方城市的气候特点（冬季较长但不太炎热），补充北京烤鸭等特色美食；
3. 最后表达对Peter在北京旅行的期待，完成邮件写作。
【答案】
Dear Peter,
I'm glad you're going to travel in China. I strongly suggest a trip to Beijing.
As the capital of China, it is one of the liveliest cities in the world! There are lots of places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, and the Summer Palace. Since it lies in the north of China, the winter is long nor too hot. Besides, the local food tastes so delicious that you should try it, especially the Beijing roast duck.
I'm sure you'll have a wonderful experience in Beijing. I can't wait to see you.
Looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【知识点】
英语书面表达；邮件写作；旅游话题
【点评】
本文结构清晰，符合邮件格式，内容紧扣思维导图要点，涵盖推荐城市、名胜古迹、气候、特色美食及期待，语言流畅自然，词数符合要求，是一篇合格的书面表达。
【难度系数】
0.5
