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素材积累＞＞
[开头句]
1. There are many natural disasters around the world. （引出话题）
2. Have you ever thought about how to stay safe in natural disasters and emergencies? （提出问题）
3. I'll tell you what to do when an earthquake happens. （明确目的）
[中间句]
1. To keep safe, we can follow these tips. （承上启下）
2. If it's serious, you should go and see a doctor right away. （细化方法）
3. Many cars hit each other in the accident. （描述过程）
[结尾句]
1. Safety is very important. （总结全文）
2. All of us were happy that we were safe. （描述感受）
[名言警句]
1. In the face of disasters, humanity is at its best when it comes together. 灾难面前,人类团结时方能展现最伟大的一面。
2. Floods come and go, but courage remains. 洪水来了又退去,但勇气长存。
写作演练＞＞
昨天的英语课上,你们班同学就"安全"话题展开了讨论。请你根据提示,写一篇90词左右的发言总结稿,并给你校英语报编辑部投稿。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明英语课上就安全话题展开讨论,再详述讨论结果,并介绍相关观点,最后谈谈自己对于安全的看法。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册"）
[开头句]
1. There are many natural disasters around the world. （引出话题）
2. Have you ever thought about how to stay safe in natural disasters and emergencies? （提出问题）
3. I'll tell you what to do when an earthquake happens. （明确目的）
[中间句]
1. To keep safe, we can follow these tips. （承上启下）
2. If it's serious, you should go and see a doctor right away. （细化方法）
3. Many cars hit each other in the accident. （描述过程）
[结尾句]
1. Safety is very important. （总结全文）
2. All of us were happy that we were safe. （描述感受）
[名言警句]
1. In the face of disasters, humanity is at its best when it comes together. 灾难面前,人类团结时方能展现最伟大的一面。
2. Floods come and go, but courage remains. 洪水来了又退去,但勇气长存。
写作演练＞＞
昨天的英语课上,你们班同学就"安全"话题展开了讨论。请你根据提示,写一篇90词左右的发言总结稿,并给你校英语报编辑部投稿。
[思路点拨]
① 人称:以第一人称为主;② 时态:一般现在时、一般过去时;③ 写作时要注意顺序,先点明英语课上就安全话题展开讨论,再详述讨论结果,并介绍相关观点,最后谈谈自己对于安全的看法。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
（更多精彩作文素材见"强基手册"）
答案
写作专训
One possible version:
In yesterday's English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe. Here is the result.
First, we should obey the traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go together in the evening. Never go out alone. We should go home as soon as possible. Finally, we should learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important. We must all learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
One possible version:
In yesterday's English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe. Here is the result.
First, we should obey the traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go together in the evening. Never go out alone. We should go home as soon as possible. Finally, we should learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important. We must all learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
解析
【分析】首先明确写作任务：根据提示撰写90词左右、关于英语课“安全”话题讨论的发言总结稿，投稿至校英语报。解题思路：1. 开头点明写作背景（昨日英语课开展安全话题讨论）；2. 中间分点列举讨论得出的安全建议，使用First/Second等连接词梳理逻辑；3. 结尾表达个人对安全的看法，区分时态（讨论用一般过去时，观点用一般现在时），控制字数符合要求。
【解析】按照“背景引入→讨论结果→个人观点”的结构写作：开头用一般过去时点明英语课的讨论事件；中间用First、Second等连接词分点阐述安全建议，涵盖交通、饮食、游泳、夜间出行、防灾等要点；结尾用一般现在时表达个人观点，语言简洁通顺，符合发言稿的要求，字数控制在90词左右。
【答案】One possible version:
In yesterday's English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe. Here is the result.
First, we should obey the traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go together in the evening. Never go out alone. We should go home as soon as possible. Finally, we should learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important. We must all learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、安全话题写作
【点评】该范文紧扣写作要求，结构完整清晰，覆盖了讨论的核心安全要点，语言通顺规范，符合初中生英语写作的标准，是一篇合格的发言总结稿。
【难度系数】0.6
【解析】按照“背景引入→讨论结果→个人观点”的结构写作：开头用一般过去时点明英语课的讨论事件；中间用First、Second等连接词分点阐述安全建议，涵盖交通、饮食、游泳、夜间出行、防灾等要点；结尾用一般现在时表达个人观点，语言简洁通顺，符合发言稿的要求，字数控制在90词左右。
【答案】One possible version:
In yesterday's English class, we had a discussion about how to keep safe. Here is the result.
First, we should obey the traffic rules and travel safely. Second, we should eat healthy food instead of junk food. Third, we should not go swimming in the river. The fourth point is to go together in the evening. Never go out alone. We should go home as soon as possible. Finally, we should learn how to protect ourselves from natural disasters.
I think students' safety is important. We must all learn to protect ourselves and stay away from danger.
【知识点】英语应用文写作、安全话题写作
【点评】该范文紧扣写作要求，结构完整清晰，覆盖了讨论的核心安全要点，语言通顺规范，符合初中生英语写作的标准，是一篇合格的发言总结稿。
【难度系数】0.6
