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第3步 典例分析
百川汇海可撼天,众志成城比金坚。假如你是英语社团的成员李华,下周英语社团的口语交流主题是“A teamwork experience”。请你根据下面的表格信息,用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿,和大家分享你的经历。
2. What did you do?
【审题思路】
1. 体裁:应用文。
2. 主题:介绍一次团队经历和感受。
3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
4. 时态:以一般过去时为主。
百川汇海可撼天,众志成城比金坚。假如你是英语社团的成员李华,下周英语社团的口语交流主题是“A teamwork experience”。请你根据下面的表格信息,用英语写一篇80词左右的发言稿,和大家分享你的经历。
2. What did you do?
【审题思路】
1. 体裁:应用文。
2. 主题:介绍一次团队经历和感受。
3. 人称:以第一人称为主。
4. 时态:以一般过去时为主。
答案
Hello,everyone! I'd like to share a teamwork experience of mine.
Last month, my class were divided into groups for a project on global warming. My team worked together to collect information and prepare our report. Each member was responsible for different parts. We worked so well together that the project was completed perfectly.
This experience made me understand the power of teamwork. Working together, we could overcome difficulties. Working well as a team is the key to success. Let's value every chance to work together and grow as a team.
That's all. Thank you.
Last month, my class were divided into groups for a project on global warming. My team worked together to collect information and prepare our report. Each member was responsible for different parts. We worked so well together that the project was completed perfectly.
This experience made me understand the power of teamwork. Working together, we could overcome difficulties. Working well as a team is the key to success. Let's value every chance to work together and grow as a team.
That's all. Thank you.
解析
【分析】
本题要求以英语社团成员李华的身份，围绕“A teamwork experience”主题写发言稿，需结合表格中的“Event”（任务、行动、结果）和“Feeling”要点完成。解题思路：1. 审题确定体裁为应用文发言稿，人称用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主；2. 开篇问候引出分享的团队经历；3. 对应表格内容叙述：明确任务（班级分组完成全球变暖项目）、具体行动（分工收集信息、准备报告）、结果（项目完美完成）；4. 表达感受，除给定内容外补充团队协作对成功的重要性；5. 结尾致谢，符合发言稿格式。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：① 开头：用“Hello, everyone! I'd like to share a teamwork experience of mine.”引出主题；② 叙述事件：说明任务是班级分组做全球变暖项目，具体行动是成员分工收集信息、准备报告，结果是项目完美完成；③ 表达感受：结合给定内容，补充“Working well as a team is the key to success.”等感悟；④ 结尾：用“That's all. Thank you.”收尾，确保字数约80词，符合要求。
【答案】
Hello,everyone! I'd like to share a teamwork experience of mine.
Last month, my class were divided into groups for a project on global warming. My team worked together to collect information and prepare our report. Each member was responsible for different parts. We worked so well together that the project was completed perfectly.
This experience made me understand the power of teamwork. Working together, we could overcome difficulties. Working well as a team is the key to success. Let's value every chance to work together and grow as a team.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时运用、团队主题表达
【点评】
本题为英语话题写作题，考查学生结合给定信息完成发言稿的能力，需紧扣主题，准确运用时态，清晰传递经历与感悟，符合口语交流的语境要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
本题要求以英语社团成员李华的身份，围绕“A teamwork experience”主题写发言稿，需结合表格中的“Event”（任务、行动、结果）和“Feeling”要点完成。解题思路：1. 审题确定体裁为应用文发言稿，人称用第一人称，时态以一般过去时为主；2. 开篇问候引出分享的团队经历；3. 对应表格内容叙述：明确任务（班级分组完成全球变暖项目）、具体行动（分工收集信息、准备报告）、结果（项目完美完成）；4. 表达感受，除给定内容外补充团队协作对成功的重要性；5. 结尾致谢，符合发言稿格式。
【解析】
写作步骤如下：① 开头：用“Hello, everyone! I'd like to share a teamwork experience of mine.”引出主题；② 叙述事件：说明任务是班级分组做全球变暖项目，具体行动是成员分工收集信息、准备报告，结果是项目完美完成；③ 表达感受：结合给定内容，补充“Working well as a team is the key to success.”等感悟；④ 结尾：用“That's all. Thank you.”收尾，确保字数约80词，符合要求。
【答案】
Hello,everyone! I'd like to share a teamwork experience of mine.
Last month, my class were divided into groups for a project on global warming. My team worked together to collect information and prepare our report. Each member was responsible for different parts. We worked so well together that the project was completed perfectly.
This experience made me understand the power of teamwork. Working together, we could overcome difficulties. Working well as a team is the key to success. Let's value every chance to work together and grow as a team.
That's all. Thank you.
【知识点】
英语应用文写作、一般过去时运用、团队主题表达
【点评】
本题为英语话题写作题，考查学生结合给定信息完成发言稿的能力，需紧扣主题，准确运用时态，清晰传递经历与感悟，符合口语交流的语境要求。
【难度系数】
0.5
第4步 实战演练
[新考法·图文提示][2025·四川凉山]近期你校英语校刊正在举办以“团结就是力量（Many hands make light work）”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
The story of three monks
参考词汇:monk 和尚 temple 寺庙 break out 爆发 put out 扑灭
要求:1. 短文应包括图示中的所给信息；
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥,使内容充实；
3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；
4. 词数80左右。
The story of three monks
[新考法·图文提示][2025·四川凉山]近期你校英语校刊正在举办以“团结就是力量（Many hands make light work）”为主题的征文活动。请根据以下图示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
The story of three monks
参考词汇:monk 和尚 temple 寺庙 break out 爆发 put out 扑灭
要求:1. 短文应包括图示中的所给信息；
2. 条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥,使内容充实；
3. 短文中不得出现真实姓名、校名；
4. 词数80左右。
The story of three monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together—they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire.
After that, they knew the importance of teamwork.
From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
答案
【实战演练】
The story of three monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together—they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire.
After that, they knew the importance of teamwork. From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
The story of three monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together—they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire.
After that, they knew the importance of teamwork. From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
解析
【分析】首先梳理六幅图的逻辑顺序：1.年轻和尚独自在寺庙挑水；2.瘦和尚到来后，两人一起挑水；3.胖和尚加入后，三人互相推诿，没人挑水导致寺庙没水；4.火灾突然爆发；5.三人忘记争执，合作灭火；6.之后懂得团结的重要性，开心生活。解题时需按时间顺序组织内容，用一般过去时叙述，加入连接词使行文连贯，最后点明“团结就是力量”的主题，满足词数要求。
【解析】写作步骤：1.开头介绍故事背景（年轻和尚在寺庙独自挑水）；2.中间依次叙述瘦和尚加入后共挑水、胖和尚到来后三人推诿没水、火灾发生后三人合作灭火的过程；3.结尾点明故事寓意，呼应主题。注意使用参考词汇，时态正确，语句通顺，适当补充细节，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】The story of three monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together—they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire.
After that, they knew the importance of teamwork. From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；看图写话；主题表达
【点评】本文紧扣图示信息，按时间顺序完整叙述故事，条理清晰，行文连贯，通过情节发展点明“团结就是力量”的主题，符合征文要求，语言自然，适当补充细节使内容充实，是一篇优秀的短文。
【难度系数】0.5
【解析】写作步骤：1.开头介绍故事背景（年轻和尚在寺庙独自挑水）；2.中间依次叙述瘦和尚加入后共挑水、胖和尚到来后三人推诿没水、火灾发生后三人合作灭火的过程；3.结尾点明故事寓意，呼应主题。注意使用参考词汇，时态正确，语句通顺，适当补充细节，控制词数在80左右。
【答案】The story of three monks
Once there was a young monk living in a small temple. He carried water for himself every day and lived peacefully.
Later, a thin monk came. They decided to carry water together—they talked and laughed while working, and never ran out of water. But things changed when a fat monk arrived. None of them wanted to carry water. They just sat around talking about who should go and carry it, and soon there was no water left in the temple.
One day, a fire broke out suddenly. The three monks were scared. They forgot their arguments, picked up buckets, and worked together to put out the fire.
After that, they knew the importance of teamwork. From then on, they helped each other and lived happily ever after.
【知识点】英语记叙文写作；看图写话；主题表达
【点评】本文紧扣图示信息，按时间顺序完整叙述故事，条理清晰，行文连贯，通过情节发展点明“团结就是力量”的主题，符合征文要求，语言自然，适当补充细节使内容充实，是一篇优秀的短文。
【难度系数】0.5
