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根据表格中所提供的信息，以“Rules for visiting a museum”为题，写一篇关于参观博物馆时需要注意的礼仪的短文，注意行文流畅，书写规范，词数 80 左右。
· Do not take photos of the things on show.
· Do not make too much noise.
· Do not eat snacks.
· ... |
[思路点拨] 1. 文体：说明文。2. 时态：一般现在时。3. 人称：第二人称。4. 要点提示：省略号部分需补充相关内容。
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Rules for visiting a museum
· Do not take photos of the things on show.
· Do not make too much noise.
· Do not eat snacks.
· ... |
[思路点拨] 1. 文体：说明文。2. 时态：一般现在时。3. 人称：第二人称。4. 要点提示：省略号部分需补充相关内容。
[写作提纲]
[妙笔生花]
Rules for visiting a museum
At the weekend, you can go to a museum to see some valuable things on show. There are several rules you need to pay attention to in a museum. Here are some of them.
The things on show are so valuable that you can't touch them with your hands. You can't take photos of them either. And you shouldn't make too much noise or eat snacks while you are enjoying the wonderful things.
What's more, you shouldn't stand in front of a thing for too long. This will stop others from enjoying it.
If you need help and want to know more, you can listen to the guide. He will explain everything to you.
These rules are important because they will help everyone in the museum feel comfortable.
答案
One possible version:
Rules for visiting a museum
At the weekend, you can go to a museum to see some valuable things on show. There are several rules you need to pay attention to in a museum. Here are some of them.
The things on show are so valuable that you can't touch them with your hands. You can't take photos of them either. And you shouldn't make too much noise or eat snacks while you are enjoying the wonderful things. What's more, you shouldn't stand in front of a thing for too long. This will stop others from enjoying it. If you need help and want to know more, you can listen to the guide. He will explain everything to you.
These rules are important because they will help everyone in the museum feel comfortable.
Rules for visiting a museum
At the weekend, you can go to a museum to see some valuable things on show. There are several rules you need to pay attention to in a museum. Here are some of them.
The things on show are so valuable that you can't touch them with your hands. You can't take photos of them either. And you shouldn't make too much noise or eat snacks while you are enjoying the wonderful things. What's more, you shouldn't stand in front of a thing for too long. This will stop others from enjoying it. If you need help and want to know more, you can listen to the guide. He will explain everything to you.
These rules are important because they will help everyone in the museum feel comfortable.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确写作要求：文体是说明文，用一般现在时、第二人称来写，核心是介绍参观博物馆的礼仪规则。第一步先开篇引入，自然带出参观博物馆有需要遵守的规则，快速点题；第二步写主体内容，要把题干明确给出的三个禁止要求：不能给展品拍照、不能大声喧哗、不能吃零食全部覆盖到，再补充2-3条符合博物馆场景的合理规则，比如不能触碰贵重展品、不要长时间挡在展品前影响其他游客观览等，用合适的连接词把内容串起来，保证行文流畅；最后收尾点明遵守这些规则的好处，控制总词数符合要求，结构完整。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分：先引入参观博物馆的常见场景，顺势点明参观时需要留意相关规则，完成点题，让文章开头自然不突兀。
2. 主体部分：首先补充符合逻辑的“不能触碰展品”的规则，之后依次覆盖题干给出的禁止拍照、禁止喧哗、禁止吃零食三个硬性要点，再补充“不要长时间在展品前停留遮挡他人”“有需求可以咨询讲解员”的合理内容，用and、what's more等过渡词衔接，逻辑连贯，所有内容都贴合博物馆参观的实际场景。
3. 结尾部分：说明遵守这些规则的意义，能让所有参观者都获得舒适的体验，收束全文，时态、人称完全符合题干要求。
【答案】
Rules for visiting a museum
At the weekend, you can go to a museum to see some valuable things on show. There are several rules you need to pay attention to in a museum. Here are some of them.
The things on show are so valuable that you can't touch them with your hands. You can't take photos of them either. And you shouldn't make too much noise or eat snacks while you are enjoying the wonderful things. What's more, you shouldn't stand in front of a thing for too long. This will stop others from enjoying it. If you need help and want to know more, you can listen to the guide. He will explain everything to you.
These rules are important because they will help everyone in the museum feel comfortable.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作
情景作文表达
常用过渡词运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，补充的参观规则贴合博物馆的真实场景，没有脱离主题；全文时态统一为一般现在时，以第二人称展开叙述，符合题干的各项格式要求，用到了so...that、stop sb. from doing等实用句式，过渡自然，结构清晰，开篇引入、主体列述规则、结尾点明意义的排布非常合理，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道写作题，首先先明确写作要求：文体是说明文，用一般现在时、第二人称来写，核心是介绍参观博物馆的礼仪规则。第一步先开篇引入，自然带出参观博物馆有需要遵守的规则，快速点题；第二步写主体内容，要把题干明确给出的三个禁止要求：不能给展品拍照、不能大声喧哗、不能吃零食全部覆盖到，再补充2-3条符合博物馆场景的合理规则，比如不能触碰贵重展品、不要长时间挡在展品前影响其他游客观览等，用合适的连接词把内容串起来，保证行文流畅；最后收尾点明遵守这些规则的好处，控制总词数符合要求，结构完整。
【解析】
1. 开篇部分：先引入参观博物馆的常见场景，顺势点明参观时需要留意相关规则，完成点题，让文章开头自然不突兀。
2. 主体部分：首先补充符合逻辑的“不能触碰展品”的规则，之后依次覆盖题干给出的禁止拍照、禁止喧哗、禁止吃零食三个硬性要点，再补充“不要长时间在展品前停留遮挡他人”“有需求可以咨询讲解员”的合理内容，用and、what's more等过渡词衔接，逻辑连贯，所有内容都贴合博物馆参观的实际场景。
3. 结尾部分：说明遵守这些规则的意义，能让所有参观者都获得舒适的体验，收束全文，时态、人称完全符合题干要求。
【答案】
Rules for visiting a museum
At the weekend, you can go to a museum to see some valuable things on show. There are several rules you need to pay attention to in a museum. Here are some of them.
The things on show are so valuable that you can't touch them with your hands. You can't take photos of them either. And you shouldn't make too much noise or eat snacks while you are enjoying the wonderful things. What's more, you shouldn't stand in front of a thing for too long. This will stop others from enjoying it. If you need help and want to know more, you can listen to the guide. He will explain everything to you.
These rules are important because they will help everyone in the museum feel comfortable.
【知识点】
英语说明文写作
情景作文表达
常用过渡词运用
【点评】
本篇范文完全覆盖题干给出的所有写作要点，补充的参观规则贴合博物馆的真实场景，没有脱离主题；全文时态统一为一般现在时，以第二人称展开叙述，符合题干的各项格式要求，用到了so...that、stop sb. from doing等实用句式，过渡自然，结构清晰，开篇引入、主体列述规则、结尾点明意义的排布非常合理，是一篇符合要求的优秀范文。
【难度系数】
0.6
