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七、书面表达(20 分)
暑假快要到了，同学们一定有很多打算。如何让自己假期过得更精彩、更充实、更有意义？请以“My Plan for the Summer Vacation”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 为假期生活制订一个计划；
2. 计划内容（学习、锻炼……）及原因；
3. 希望自己能拥有一个快乐又有意义的假期。
要求：
词数 90 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Plan for the Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming.
暑假快要到了，同学们一定有很多打算。如何让自己假期过得更精彩、更充实、更有意义？请以“My Plan for the Summer Vacation”为题，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
1. 为假期生活制订一个计划；
2. 计划内容（学习、锻炼……）及原因；
3. 希望自己能拥有一个快乐又有意义的假期。
要求：
词数 90 左右。开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
My Plan for the Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming.
答案
One possible version:
My Plan for the Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming. To
spend a meaningful holiday, I'll make a
plan for it.
First, I'm going to make a plan for
my study to make sure I can finish my
homework. And I am going to read
some books about history and science
too. I also want to do more sports to
keep healthy. Maybe I'll do some
running or play basketball with my
friends. As for traveling, I think I'll go
to Heilongjiang with my parents because
it's not hot there. Besides, I will make
more friends and help my parents with
housework.
I'm sure I will have a wonderful and
meaningful vacation.
My Plan for the Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming. To
spend a meaningful holiday, I'll make a
plan for it.
First, I'm going to make a plan for
my study to make sure I can finish my
homework. And I am going to read
some books about history and science
too. I also want to do more sports to
keep healthy. Maybe I'll do some
running or play basketball with my
friends. As for traveling, I think I'll go
to Heilongjiang with my parents because
it's not hot there. Besides, I will make
more friends and help my parents with
housework.
I'm sure I will have a wonderful and
meaningful vacation.
解析
【分析】
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确审题要点：1. 题目要求覆盖三个核心内容，且首尾句已经给出无需自行创作，总词数90左右不计入首尾。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步，承接给定开头，直接点明自己为了度过充实假期特意制定了假期计划，完成第一个内容要求；第二步，分层展开计划内容，分别从学习、体育锻炼两个核心方向说明具体安排，同时补充对应安排的原因，还可以适当加入旅行、帮父母做家务这类贴合生活的细节丰富内容，完成第二个内容要求；第三步，自然衔接给定的结尾，呼应“快乐又有意义的假期”的主题，完成第三个内容要求。写作时注意统一使用一般将来时表述计划，用逻辑连接词串联内容，让行文条理清晰。
【解析】
写作可按照以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇衔接：在给出的开头后直接点出“为了度过有意义的假期，我制定了一份假期计划”，开门见山扣题。
2. 主体展开：用逻辑词First引出学习相关安排：说明自己会按时完成暑假作业，同时阅读历史、科普类书籍，目的是巩固知识、拓展视野；接着引出锻炼相关安排：说明自己会坚持跑步、和朋友打篮球，目的是保持身体健康；还可以补充和父母出游、帮父母分担家务的合理安排，每个安排简单说明对应的原因，让内容饱满符合要求。
3. 收尾衔接：内容写完后自然对接题目给出的结尾句，整体控制词数在90左右，检查时态、语法错误，保证行文流畅。
【答案】
My Plan for the Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming. To spend a meaningful holiday, I'll make a plan for it.
First, I'm going to make a plan for my study to make sure I can finish my homework. And I am going to read some books about history and science too. I also want to do more sports to keep healthy. Maybe I'll do some running or play basketball with my friends. As for traveling, I think I'll go to Heilongjiang with my parents because it's not hot there. Besides, I will make more friends and help my parents with housework.
I'm sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful vacation.
【知识点】
一般将来时，提纲类写作，逻辑连接词
【点评】
本题是贴近学生日常生活的假期规划类写作，话题熟悉度高，要点指向明确，难度适中。写作时只要完整覆盖题干给出的三个核心要点，合理使用逻辑连接词梳理行文顺序，避免出现基础语法错误，就能拿到不错的分数，注意不要堆砌无关内容，控制好总词数符合要求即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
拿到这道书面表达题，首先先明确审题要点：1. 题目要求覆盖三个核心内容，且首尾句已经给出无需自行创作，总词数90左右不计入首尾。接下来梳理写作思路：第一步，承接给定开头，直接点明自己为了度过充实假期特意制定了假期计划，完成第一个内容要求；第二步，分层展开计划内容，分别从学习、体育锻炼两个核心方向说明具体安排，同时补充对应安排的原因，还可以适当加入旅行、帮父母做家务这类贴合生活的细节丰富内容，完成第二个内容要求；第三步，自然衔接给定的结尾，呼应“快乐又有意义的假期”的主题，完成第三个内容要求。写作时注意统一使用一般将来时表述计划，用逻辑连接词串联内容，让行文条理清晰。
【解析】
写作可按照以下步骤完成：
1. 开篇衔接：在给出的开头后直接点出“为了度过有意义的假期，我制定了一份假期计划”，开门见山扣题。
2. 主体展开：用逻辑词First引出学习相关安排：说明自己会按时完成暑假作业，同时阅读历史、科普类书籍，目的是巩固知识、拓展视野；接着引出锻炼相关安排：说明自己会坚持跑步、和朋友打篮球，目的是保持身体健康；还可以补充和父母出游、帮父母分担家务的合理安排，每个安排简单说明对应的原因，让内容饱满符合要求。
3. 收尾衔接：内容写完后自然对接题目给出的结尾句，整体控制词数在90左右，检查时态、语法错误，保证行文流畅。
【答案】
My Plan for the Summer Vacation
Summer vacation is coming. To spend a meaningful holiday, I'll make a plan for it.
First, I'm going to make a plan for my study to make sure I can finish my homework. And I am going to read some books about history and science too. I also want to do more sports to keep healthy. Maybe I'll do some running or play basketball with my friends. As for traveling, I think I'll go to Heilongjiang with my parents because it's not hot there. Besides, I will make more friends and help my parents with housework.
I'm sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful vacation.
【知识点】
一般将来时，提纲类写作，逻辑连接词
【点评】
本题是贴近学生日常生活的假期规划类写作，话题熟悉度高，要点指向明确，难度适中。写作时只要完整覆盖题干给出的三个核心要点，合理使用逻辑连接词梳理行文顺序，避免出现基础语法错误，就能拿到不错的分数，注意不要堆砌无关内容，控制好总词数符合要求即可。
【难度系数】
0.6
